* You And Me -- Its Us * : A ShraMan SS (Complete Pg 14)

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Mahi jadu ki jhappi for u🤗
I just love hospital sequences 😳
Nothing could have been more perfect...beautiful ending to a fabulous story 👏
The fact is "Us" is stronger than "You" and "Me".
@bold - so much depth in these simple words 👏
Loved it 😊
P.s.- Yay!!!I'm the first one to comment

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Beautiful :) since this story was not ff toh memory loss nahin hua warna pakka bhulti 😆

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

I just loved it
Superb mahi 👍🏼

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Mahi 🤗

Accept my apologies, I resed and gingerly forgot!

Coming to the chappy! I loved it!

You write so damn well ya

Sumo theek hai, phew! I panicked a bit reading about the accident and all..

Shravan the dumb lambu finally confessed!

Sigh! I love these two!

"Us" is stronger than "you" and "me" 👏

You stole the show with this line!

Way to go!

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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Shikha Singhania

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Bolna Mahi Bolna ki tu ne abhi tak apni writings publish kyun nahi karwaayi?

It was freakin awesome bro!!!

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Zenab

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Mahi a tight hug for such a lovely update🤗
Hospital part was awesome and song apt for them ❤️
Last line "Us" is stronger I really agree
You are such a talented writer loved it to the core
Lots of love and hug

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

i received two shocks when i read ur update.. at first i was shocked... really shocked when i learnt suman had an accident... after that when doctor said to shravan that she might lose her memory i thought that she will... but u gave me another shock there... she said his name... i was very happy at that moment.. it was lovely... loved it..

loads of love

-anupriya❤️