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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
I loved it loved it loved it!!!! Shravan taking care of Sumo. Would definitely love to see something of this kind in the show. Keep up the good work and Did I ever tell you that I absolutely love reading you works👏👏. Please Continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
such a loving os i hope n shw as WL it happens loving the way shravan is taking care of his sumo take care n get WL soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You have just written on Sumo falling sick and Shravan taking care of her and VOILA!!! That is what is exactly going to happen on the show. Sumo falling sick and Shravan taking her to a doctor for the injection shot and Sumo being injection phobiac and them having an eye-lock when the doc gives a shot. I'm damn excited
PS: Continue the good work and write more and more about Shraman cute moments. May be we'll get to see all of them in the show😉. You are officially the good luck charm of the show
Edited by crazy_vaish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
I am speechless
What an amazing OS

👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@everyone

YOU GUYS ARE SO SWEET I HAVE A CAVITY! I am glad you all liked it, your comments make me smile and boost my ego so hard, hahaha. Another one is coming up soon my loves! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all I am so so sorry for unresing this so so so late
I was busy and then I will do it I will do it ke chakkar main


I really don't have words to express how much I love your works! Honestly, I am not lying or anything😳 This one was so beautiful and so heartwarming!! I Love how is there for her throughout and even makes breakfast for her!😳 So so beautiful!!!

I really hope we get to see something similar in the show!!😳😳

Keep writing😳

Once again, really sorry😔
Edited by PrincessAshVik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the most heartwarming kind of "fluff"!!!

It's fascinating to see how caring Shravan is - I love the way you show him fussing over Sumo like a mother hen!

So many cute moments:

The scene where he hesitantly puts his arm around her so she can lean on him in front of the TV...

When he hurriedly stops Sumo from correcting the doctor's assumption that they are a couple... (And his reasons for doing so are adorbs))

And how can I forget the "ARE YOU PREGNANT?" moment! He nearly had a heart attack, didn't he?

And at the very end, as he lies there memorizing her face, I found myself repeating Pushkar's line: "Just friends." "Yeah right."

Can I just say that I want to give Pushkar baby a tight hug? Shravan might be the hotshot lawyer in the family, but Pushkar is way more street smart than Big Bro...

Edited by an_chau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
I have read all your stories, including the Qubool hai ones, and I have to say, this is my favorite.

It is so heart warming to read of a Shravan looking after a disorientated Sumo...as well as the tumult and unacknowledged feelings in both their hearts which finally gives way to a happy ending. Very poignant.

Well done!👏
Edited by -Amri- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Anjali, the comments in your section already said out all that's going on in my mind!
The thing is, ever since you have started writing on ShraMan, I keep looking forward to your stuff all the time. Keep 'em coming bro, they make my day!

Love,
Ginny
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
OMG I just love love love when you write.
You pen down some of the most beautiful stories on Shraman. Like this was way more than just fluff kay. It was so adorably cute and what not.
The way Shravan just lives and breathes Suman is beyond cute, especially in your stories. The way he took care of her, the whole Doctor incident, was sooo awwiiieedorable.

Thanks for the pm yo. Keep writing such amaze work.

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