Shraman SS:I Do Care(epilogue updated) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
MITALI
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART! I MEAN EPILOGUE. JALDI DE!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holla guys🤗 Thank you for all the amazing responses,could not reply to all individually so big Thank You to all of you,all those who commented,all those who liked it and all the silent readers!
On your request I am here with a epilogue. It is a short one but I think only this bit was necessary!
Hope you like it.
No proof read.
Here it goes:

Epilogue
Shravan and Sumo were now happily married. Who cared about Mami or Kamini chachi when both of them and the rest of the family was happy?
Nanaji was happy that Suman had found the perfect man and he was free of his duty,mamaji,mausi and mausaji were happy because Suman was happy,Daboo was happy because his favorite didi had married his favorite bhaiyaa,preeti was happy because she will be with her di after her own marriage,Pushkar was happy on his cupid role being successful,lalaji was happy as he would get tasty food to eat,vandy and varun were happy because Sharvan was and Ramnath and Nirmala were happy cause Shravan had finally found someone who would look after him and be his constant through his ups and downs.


Current Morning

It was morning and Shravan and Suman was busy cuddling with each other,Shravan was in sweat pants his torso bear and Sumo was in her maternity nightgown as she was in her late stages of pregnancy.
"Sumo" Shravan spoke his lips resting on her nape and his right hand one her over swollen belly
"Hmm" Sumo replied enjoying the sensations his lips were giving her
"Ek baat kahoon?" He asked
"Haan"She replied closing her eyes trying to live in the moment
"Sumo tum toh sachi mein Sumo ho gayi ho" Shravan grinned sheepishly and ran for his life
"Shravaaan" Sumo shouted and before she could punch him Shravan had already flown out of the bed
And because of her pregnancy she definitely could not run so she picked up a pillow lying beside her and shot it towards Shravan, unfortunately it missed him by few inches.
"Bad aim Mrs Malhotra" Shravan teased Sumo and ran inside the washroom closing the door behind.
Suman smiled to herself,creasing her belly. What a perfect family she had,a loving mother and father in law,an extra caring and protective husband cum best friend and not to forget the little life soon to join and complete them!


Hope you had a good time reading it. I am going to miss this SS very much as it is my very first on Shraman. Do leave your feedbacks and likes. All criticism welcome
Thank You

-Mitali❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Too cute
Loved it ❤️ ❤️
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Mitali 🤗
This was so beautiful!
Just perfect..
Ah! My feels❤️

Thanks for the PM hon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Too cute and dreamy
It's like dream come true moment
Happy ever after ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awww🤗
Such a cute SS
Loved it deeply.😛
Am impressed how you brought in so many layers in the confession. And I simply love the Epilouge! Shoo shweeet☺️
Poor Sumo, became a Sumo!😆

The kiss, Shravan's antics... everything was so sizzling! Kept me on my toes all the time.😉

A brilliant effort Mittu! Keep writing😳

Love
Mahi


SleepyPshyco
Seriously?🤣
Cool UN😎
I personally love to sleep till hours and hours
Wish I could
Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Awww🤗

Such a cute SS
Loved it deeply.😛
Am impressed how you brought in so many layers in the confession. And I simply love the Epilouge! Shoo shweeet☺️
Poor Sumo, became a Sumo!😆

The kiss, Shravan's antics... everything was so sizzling! Kept me on my toes all the time.😉

A brilliant effort Mittu! Keep writing😳

Love
Mahi


SleepyPshyco
Seriously?🤣
Cool UN😎
I personally love to sleep till hours and hours
Wish I could



Thank You sooo much 🤗
Yaa went to AyeChavanni as you suggested and got this as I am a sleepy head too.
If you come to my room you will find me either with my laptop or busy sleeping🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Mitali... Yaar.. 🤗This Epilogue part is too much cuteee...😳
Happy Shappy Malhotra Family..
& Shraman is going to be mommy-papa.. Aha...
Keep Writing 😃
Thank u for the PM.. :) ( sorry too.. for Late Reply, was some busy these days)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so cute Mitali...their perfect family lovely
And username 😆
It's suits me also nowdays I'm sleeping only ...my mom is fed up 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Aww so cute Mitali...their perfect family lovely
And username 😆
It's suits me also nowdays I'm sleeping only ...my mom is fed up 😉


Hahaa Thank You😳
Go for it sleep more😆

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