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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome plz pm me fr ur future updates
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Amazing! 👏Please PM when you update.
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And I am back! Thank you all for the amazing feedback🤗 You people are lovely. This part will have some very common maybe to over stuff but please deal with it as I like guys who become extremely jealous and behave the way Shravan will be behaving in this SS. I am not a great writer like some out here but I have tried my best.
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CHAPTER 2

Suman's p.o.v

I could constantly feel Shravan gazing at me and I intentionally ignored him knowing it would irritate him and maybe he would realize that he feels for me.
When Mamiji suggested the idea for a lone meeting between me and Jeevan,it came as a surprise to me but I agreed to it knowing that Shravan would be fuming.
We then departed for the terrace.

Shravan's p.o.v

Jeevan and Sumo departed for the terrace but it was our spot why was Sumo taking him there? I will have to have a word with her soon.
20 minutes passed by and and still Sumo and Jeevan had not come back. I was getting restless by every passing minute. Finally they arrived and Sumo was laughing as if her Jeevan had cracked some very high class joke. Joke my FOOT. She never laughed so whole heartedly with me then why now?

"Nanaji,Mama-Mami and Shravan me and Jeevan have agreed to get married" Sumo announced

And that was he time my world came crashing down. I could feel insecurity rise up in my body and I started feeling dizzy.

I have know idea how and when the shagun ceremony took place,when the promise rings were exchanged and when Sumo and her Jeevan saathi were ready for the lunch prepared by Sumo.

"Shravan ruko to sahi khana khake to jayoo and tumhee Jeevan see bhi toh milana hai,rukooto sahi!" I heard Sumo calling me but I was not in a state to listen or talk to anyone not even her.

I could feel tears streaming down my face as I sat in my car and drove to the Malhotra Mansion.

Ignoring all the questions by Maa and Chote I rushed to the room and banged the door shut.

Pushkar's p.o.v
I entered bhaiya's room to tell him that Sumo had come and was waiting for him downstairs but what I saw made me drop that idea and rush towards bhaiya. His Right hand was bleeding profusely and there were broken glass pieces stuck on the wound and torn paper all on the bed.
Bhaiyaa was sleeping,dry tears visible on his face. I don't know what had happened and why was bhaiya in such a state so I called Sumo.

Suman's p.o.v

I had come to Malhotra Mansion as I knew Shravan was irritated and I had to talk to him otherwise her angry young man would do something drastic to himself. She knew him too well.
"Sumoo..Sumooo jaldi aaa.. vohh bhaiyaa..bhaiyaa..glass..blood..jaldi" Pushkar called out to me and by his tone I knew that I was late"

We both ran to Shravan's room. I never saw Shravan in soo much pain leaving the part when his mother left him. I went towards him and tears automatically dropped from my eyes one by one. I began sobbing.
There lay Shravan sleeping with dry tears on his face and blood oozing out of his hands. It was all because of me, I was the one who was giving him so much pain. I kept my bag aside and began to take out the glass pieces from his hand slowly.

But as soon as my hands touched the glass pieces Shravan flinched and woke up with a jolt.

"Shravan yehh tum-" and I was cut by him

"Sumo jaoo yahan see" He stated but I was keen on staying and dressing his wound

"Shravan par yeh chot" I said with all the concern I gather up

"Suman nikal jaoo mere room see" He said in louder tone again not listening to me

"Par Shrav-"

"SUMAN TIWARI GET LOST RIGHT AWAY" He said with uttermost hatred in his voice

I took my bag,turned and with tears in my eyes I left his room. Maybe FOREVER.

I would be waiting for all your precious comments. All criticism welcome😊
Edited by MittuArsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww poor shravan, heartbroken but dont worry sumo is the cure for ur bleeding heart... loved it
Thanks for the pm dear
Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED.. I TOTALLY FEEL FOR SHRAVAN!!
WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT...
A CLIFFHANGER😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mittu... loved, loved it. 👏
Poor Shrav and Poor Sumo...
Why do they have to make everything so complicated
Total duffers😆😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg omg
Awesome
Awwwh I loved this chapter

Great going girl
Please update it soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivani_agl

WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED.. I TOTALLY FEEL FOR SHRAVAN!!
WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT...
A CLIFFHANGER😕


That toh even I don't know🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta

Mittu... loved, loved it. 👏

Poor Shrav and Poor Sumo...
Why do they have to make everything so complicated
Total duffers😆😉😳


Cause they are our egoistic Shraman and they don't like to play it simple.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it ...nice update both are duffer but cute they will realize soon

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