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This was such a well-written and beautiful piece!❤️ I have now got butterflies in my stomach just like Sumo.😆

Hope you write more on ShraMan in the coming days.😳

Hey Payal!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing
totally brilliant
absolutely loved it

Thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Mind blowing

And from nowhere it seems stupid

Its the best thing i 've read whole day

I loved every bit of it

Keep writing

Omg 😃
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: Hey_Bhaggu

Awwwie! Shravan cooking for Sumo..

Their love story was cutely described in here😳

Sweet❤️

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: ezbeedscrittore

Awwiieee Payal

I absolutely loved this shot

It was so cute and adorable

Do write more of this on ShraMan

- Ezbee

Hey Ezbee! 😊
Thank you so much!
Will definitely write more.
P.S. I like your name! 😊 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: ...-Riya-...

This was such a well-written and beautiful piece!❤️I have now got butterflies in my stomach just like Sumo.😆

Hope you write more on ShraMan in the coming days.😳

Oh my god, Riya! Reading your comment gave ME butterflies! 😆 😳
Thank you SO much! 😊

Hey this was so awesome..

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Payal!

This was absolutely beautiful! From the beginning to the end, you have such a flow with the words you've chosen. It really was a treat to read!

Not to mention the characterization was spot-on!

Absolutely amazing!

Please do keep writing, and if you can, do PM me if you decide to write another story! I'd love to keep reading stories from you! :)

Take care,

Hinal :)

Hey Hinal!
You honestly made my day, buddy.
I've lost count of how many times I read your comment. 😳
Thank you for your kind words. I'll always come back to this whenever I need some inspiration to write. 😊
I'd love to let you know in case I write more. Can you please do the same?
The thing is, I saw the link on your signature and decided to give it a go. I got hooked right from the prologue and read all the chapters in one sitting! I have never read a SanDhir fic quite like yours. I'm a little short of time these days, thanks to entrance exams and shit, but will soon write a proper comment.
Take care! 😊