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Payal, I absolutely enjoyed reading this all. Lovely story and very well written. We all know Shravan can't stay away from his lady love. Can't wait to see you writing more x

THIS WAS AMAZING ONE SHOT PAYAL

Oh man!

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Hey Payal .
This was lovely .
The start though , could use a gun to shoot the butterflies of the stomach . Hahah :D

Aww Sharavan .
That line when he admitted that he wanted to have what she made . <3

And the added reactions . Hahah

-God bless

Originally posted by: mineforever

Wow Payal
it was just amazing..😊
Now only if something like this would happen in the show..
U r right.The other characters would have reacted that way only.. 😆
~ Ayesha

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey mind blowing yar!!! Shravan taking care of sumo was tooo cute. And that additional dialoquea of family members... 🤣 🤣 was damn hilarious...
Keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Wow Payal! Amazing

I m impressed by the use of your language.. Stupendous!!

Loved everything, specially those reactions🤣

Please write more!!

-Mahi❤️

Originally posted by: poppinss

Lovely start Payal... looking forward to more :)

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Aww ...gunshot hehe ...and shravans care for sumo it's cute and last everyones reaction was lovely ...overall beautiful and lovely ...do write more 😊