Winning her back- a sequel to forgiveness

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Hello guys!!! I am back with a sequel of forgiveness...as per your wish...hope u all will enjoy this one
Brief summary of 'forgiveness'-- shravan was mad at sumo for proposing the idea of his marriage to his family members. He confronted her and poured all his frustration and anger. She left from there crying. He apologised later but sumo agreed to forgive him at one cost, "He has to work in Priya catering centre for 1 month"

Winning her back

Sumo was tossing and turning on her bed, she couldn't sleep. The night seemed to have grown longer. She was very excited for tomorrow. Shravan was going to join PCC for 1 month as he was desperate to earn her forgiveness. He was already forgiven. How can she stay mad at him when he was so cute. But she wasn't going to tell him that. Let him pay for scolding her.
Next day she woke up little earlier than her usual time. Picked her best clothes, left her hair loose , applied little Kohl in her eyes and a bit of lipgloss. She wasn't very fond of makeup. Standing before the mirror she admired herself," Not bad Suman Tiwari, aaj to lambu gya kam se 😉 . She was all set to go when Preeti stopped her at the gate," Are di itna ban than ke kaha ja rhi ho itni subah?" Getting irritated she replied," Kam PE Aur kaha" She reached PCC but Shravan was nowhere in sight . "Kaha reh gya ye lambu. Ane do fir batati hu isko" she muttered. Seeing her talking to herself ,Preetha asked,"Oye Sumo!! Teri tabiyat to thik hai?? Ye akele kya badbada rhi h. Aur tu itna saj sawar ke kyu ayi hai aaj? "Ladkewale aa rhe hain mujhe dekhne, aur saas hai tu meri Jo itni enquiry kr rhi hai?" She snapped
Shravan was pacing back and forth in his room when Pushkar entered. He was amused to see his brother in deep thoughts," Kya hua bhaiya, itne pareshan kyu lag rhe ho? Sumo se jhagda khatm ni hua kya? He knew very well that his brother's life revolves around sumo. "Jhagda to khatm ho gaya but uski keemat bahut mehngi pdi mujhe" shravan muttered under his breath. Pushkar asked," Kuch kaha kya aapne?" He immediately replied," Arey nhi chhote wo ek case hai uske bare me hi soch rha that." Pushkar smiled," Bhaiya aap itne smart Aur talented hain, I'm sure u'll find a way." It was his first day at work and he was already late . Sumo must be fuming.
As he entered PCC he noticed a gorgeous lady sitting and playing with her hair. A slight frown adorned her angelic face. He was lost in her beauty when Preetha yelled," Oye chaila Babu aaj court ka rasta bhul ke idhar kaise ana hua? By the time he replied preetha, he saw sumo raging towards him," Kaha the itni der? Waha khade pose kya de rhe ho jawab do." Shravan only saw those lips moving but couldn't makeout what she was saying. Why the hell she has to wear that damn red suit. It fit her perfectly accentuating her curves .She was looking sexy and hot as hell. At that moment he only wanted to grab her and kiss those rosy lips." Control ur emotions shravan. U played that friendship card Na , ab bhugat." He mentally kicked himself for thinking like that. Sumo was confused to find him staring at her. She snapped her fingers,"Oye deepika padukone dikh gyi hai kya?? Kaha khoye ho aur mujhe aise kyu ghoor rhe ho jaise pehli bar dekha ho"
He immediately came back to his senses and apologised for coming late. She handed him his apron and asked him to knead the flour. He started kneading but was soon covered head to toe in that white powder. God, what will he do now, he was a complete mess. He had cooked before in London but they were simple dishes like pasta. He never tried something like this. "Aur dinge haank, anything for u sumo?" He cursed himself. Sumo was looking at him from far. He looked so cute with flour scattered all over his face. She wanted to ruffle his hair. Suddenly she caught all her staff staring at him , an unknown emotion surged. "Ho gya tum logo ka ghoorna to kuch kam kar lo" she snapped getting irritated. No doubt he was looking hunklicious in that apron but only she had the right to admire him. He was only hers...or was he?? Shravan caught her staring at him and thought ," Someone is jealous. This month is going to be a lot fun". He was struggling with that disgusting stuff and didn't notice sumo coming towards him. She placed her hands on her hips and said ,"Chhodo tumse ni hoga, main help karti hu. Lekin sirf aaj, kal se tumhe khud hi sab krna pdega" He grinned widely which made her heart skip a beat. She was busy in her work when suddenly shravan started caressing her face. She started breathing heavily. "Sh...shravan kya kar rhe ho?? She stuttered . He came closer his breath fanning over her neck sending tingles to her skin ." Wo aatta LGA tha tumhare chehre pe wahi hata rha tha." He whispered softly. His closeness was playing havoc in her mind. " Tum age kam kro main ek phone krke ati hu" she rushed outside to catch her breath. What the hell happened there??
Rest of the day passed smoothly. Next morning he was given the task to make bhindi and chapatis. It was too much for him but he took it as a challenge. He kept looking at sumo and chopped the vegetables.He winced in pain as his finger got sliced by the sharp knife. Sumo immediately rushed to his side took his hand in hers to have a close look of his wound.Blood was oozing from the cut, she placed his finger beneath the cool tap water and sent Preetha to fetch the first aid box. His heart swelled seeing her concern for him. If she took care of him he would gladly suffer any injury. Sumo dressed his wounds carefully and asked him to have some rest. But he insisted on finishing his work. He had never cooked any vegetable but seen sumo cooking a million times in his childhood. He smiled at the memory. After bhindi was cooked he was now left with making chapatis. Solving maths equations was easier than this impossible task. But he still tried his best. After atleast 20 failed attempts he managed to make 4 chapatis. Though they looked more like map of Africa but he was still happy. He also burned his fingers while making them. Sumo went to have a look , her eyes welled up with tears seeing his burnt fingers . She placed his hands in hers and applied the ointment very gently. All the while she kept crying. He placed a finger under her chin to lift her face,"Hey relax!! Ro kyi rhi ho, jara she chot hai ,koi 3rd degree burn nhi" he joked. After sometime Preetha came running to ask if she could pack bhindi in lunch boxes. Sumo denied,"Nhi use sirf main khaungi,shravan NE itni mehnat SE pehli bar kuch bnaya hai." They had their lunch together. Bhindi tasted good , sumo was proud of shravan .
It became a daily routine to get up early ,leave for PCC, work there till evening and have kulfi at the India gate while heading towards their respective homes. He enjoyed her company. In these days he got to know a lot about her. She was so strong yet so vulnerable. She was used to take care of other.Except nanu no one really bothered to ask when she was happy or sad. They were fine as long as she brought home money. His heart went with her. He wanted to take care of her, to love her, cherish her. At that moment he realised he has fallen in love all over again with sumo...his sumo
1 month time passed in a blink. It was his last day in PCC. He had been good working with the staff members. They were really sweet. He smiled thinking how worried he had been the first day to work in an estrogen dominated testosterone deprived area. He was really going to miss working here. He got used to their constant ranting, chatters...After completing his work he asked sumo to get ready at 7 PM. When she asked the reason he just said it's a surprise. Sumo was dressed in blue anarkali suit, she applied Kohl n lipstick and a small bindi to complete the look. She curled her hair in waves and left them open. She looked like an angel. Shravan came to pick her but was dumbfounded by her mesmerising beauty. She looked etheral and breathtakingly beautiful . He complimented her ,"U r looking gorgeous" Sumo smiled and thanked her. Dressed in white shirt and blue jeans he could put any model to shame. Like a pure gentleman he opened the door for her and helped to fasten her seatbelt. Her closeness was intoxicating, he was having hard time to control his emotions.He tied a piece of cloth on her eyes. "Shravannn...kya kar rhe ho? Mujhe gandhari banana tha tumhara surprise???" She asked getting irritated. This woman can't keep her mouth shut even for a sec. He smiled,"Patience ni hai Na tumhe , chalo ab kholo apni ankhen" There was a beautiful park decorated with fairy lights. Rose petals scattered all over . In the middle a table was set for two. She was mesmerised by he view. He helped her sit and took a seat beside her. Her mouth watered at sight of her fav dishes placed on the table. She loved the food. ," Kasam se kya khana banaya hai, jee karta hai banane wale ke hath choom lu" she said dramatically." To choom lo" he said huskily ."K...k...kya??" She stuttered . He came closer while she kept moving backwards . He soon caged her between his strong arms and replied in dangerously low seductive voice," Banane wale ke hath" Her eyes were wide open with shock," Ye...ye sab tumne banaya hai??" She asked disbelieving what he said. He simply nodded. It was true with one month of strict training under sumo he could even beat the contestants of master chef
He looked into her deep brown eyes and spoke," Sumo, I dont want us to be friends". For a sec she was stunned. He continued," I think I have fallen hard for u this time . I love u sumo. I have always loved u and was just afraid to accept my feelings for u. But now i am damn sure about this.Will u be mine forever???" Blinking back the tears she replied,"Yes. I love u too stupid. Kitni der laga di ek ILU bolne me." He smiled and engulfed her in a bone crushing hug. "Now am I forgiven?" He asked. She nodded and placed her lips on his... He grinned thinking this was the best forgiveness he could ever ask for...

--------- The End --------

Phew khatm ho gaya. This was really a long one. I didn't plan to write this but couldn't stop myself from writing shravan's 1 month journey in sumo's kitchen . So how was it?? Plzzz do hit the like button and comment if u like this story...ignore my typing mistakes.


Till then take care
Priyam
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely
It was so fab
Fanx 4 fulfilling our request dr
Do write another piece of work pretty soon
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Lovely
It was so fab
Fanx 4 fulfilling our request dr
Do write another piece of work pretty soon




My pleasure dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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absolutely brilliant
totally loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice, sapphire👏
Wish it had been something along these lines even in the show😃
Ah! well you keep on writing
Thanx for the pm
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Thank u guys. I am glad u all liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's fantactis ...loved it do write more ...finally they confessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whoah whoah!! Let me take a breath first... This was like amazing!! Read it in a in a single breath... Awesome piece gal!! I am in love with it
So let's begin the dissection... Relax, am not criticising it

1. I loved how Shravan was nervous and Sumo saying "Lambu tu toh gaya"
2. The flour scene was ola lala... Too hot!!
Even this line was too good "U were the one to play the friendship card, ab bhugat"
3. Loved the concern part... Wants to torture but can't see in pain either
4. I loved this phrase "oestrogen dominated testosterone deficient zone" : I got it's meaning, like scientifically used.. Bravo!!
5. Not to mention... The date was crisp n hot.. "I don't want us to be friends"


Overall, its wonderful, smashing
Please do write more!!

PS- Like button not working

Love
Mahi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Whoah whoah!! Let me take a breath first... This was like amazing!! Read it in a in a single breath... Awesome piece gal!! I am in love with it

So let's begin the dissection... Relax, am not criticising it

1. I loved how Shravan was nervous and Sumo saying "Lambu tu toh gaya"
2. The flour scene was ola lala... Too hot!!
Even this line was too good "U were the one to play the friendship card, ab bhugat"
3. Loved the concern part... Wants to torture but can't see in pain either
4. I loved this phrase "oestrogen dominated testosterone deficient zone" : I got it's meaning, like scientifically used.. Bravo!!
5. Not to mention... The date was crisp n hot.. "I don't want us to be friends"


Overall, its wonderful, smashing
Please do write more!!

PS- Like button not working

Love
Mahi



Thank u sooo much mahi for ur fantastic comments 🤗 . Shraman are so damn cute that I don't think I was able to do justice writing their characters. But I tried my level best. Glad u liked it.
Love u ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3



Thank u sooo much mahi for ur fantastic comments 🤗 . Shraman are so damn cute that I don't think I was able to do justice writing their characters. But I tried my level best. Glad u liked it.
Love u ❤️


Ohh no no!! You more than justified it😳
Such a beautiful flavour your writings have... Keep it up!😃

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