SHRAMAN FF chapter 3 pg 2

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Shraman is an amazing couple with an excellent chemistry.


Will they fall in love?

Will Shravan's family or Tiwari ji accept an prospective love ?

Will they get married?

Will they part away from each other?



To say frankly, I don't know how I will write this FF I don't have any plot. But I want to show how this story can be. Hope you will enjoy it. Thank you.



CHAPTER 1



Shravan is devasted with Ramnath's death. He can't think he is no more. How it's possible? He is the only who takes care of him. His mother left him when he was young. What will he do now? How he can survive alone?


Sumo is shocked to see her uncle's death but also Shravan's depressed. She knows how it's painful to lost the parents. She can't see him like that. How she can help him? What will he do now?



Shravan is alone in his room, thinking about his father. His tears don't stop flowing. He feels very lonely.


Someone knocks on his door, Shravan : Leave me alone.


But the door opens, Sumo : Shravan mai Sumo ho?


Shravan : Toh kya? Just leave me alone!


Sumo enters : I can't let you.


Shravan comes to her and catches her arms : Now you are happy, like your wish I didn't go.


Sumo : What! How you can think that I am happy? Yaa it's true that I didn't want that you leave India but I will never wish someone's death for that. And I understand the pain to loose someone.


Sumo can't stop crying. He understand that he outstrips his limits. He just cover his arms with her body. He feels her sobs.


Shravan : I am sorry Sumo. I knew it's not your fault, but I miss him a lot.


Sumo breaks the hug and she takes him on his bed. She makes him sits and she sits beside him. She puts his head on her ham. She cuddles his hair.

Sumo : Shravan today it's uncle's prayer day. Please come with me.


Shravan : No I can't to do this. I will be break.


Sumo : Don't worry mai huna.


Shravan : Okay


Sumo : First fresh and wear the white kurta please?


Shravan : Ok


He takes his bath and wears the kurta. He comes out.


Shravan : I have to find an another top.


Sumo : But why?


Shravan : Because my button teared.


Suma : Wait I will just sew up.


He asks his servant the needle box.


Suma sews up the button and she has to cut the string. She comes near to his chest.


Shravan feels her very closed.


Sumo : Come lets go.


They come downstairs. Everyone waits for them. Shravan has tears to see a garland on his dad's picture. Priest starts the prayers. They sit beside each other.


Someone on the door shouts : What are you doing?


Everyone are shocked to see Ramnath alive.


Shravan runs and hugs him.


Ramnath : Shravan are you okay? You thought I was dead.


Shravan : Yes papa the plane's crashed and all.


Ramnath : I didn't take the plane on the time. I took the next flight.


Everyone are happy except Kamini. Ramnath hugs his brother and his nephews.


Shravan hugs Sumo. Ramnath comes to them. Sumo takes his blessing.


Ramnath : Shravan please it's an request not to go to London. I beg you my son. I can't live without you and I decide to take my retirement. I will give you and Pushkar the cases.


Kamini is very upset. Shravan and Sumo see this.


Shravan : But papa...


Ramnath : Mere kasam!


Shravan : If I have no choice I will stay here with you.


Sumo is very happy.




Precap : Shraman discovers about Preeti and Pushkar becoming closer.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do cont it's a gud one
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Awesome concept
Make them fall in love soon but little jealousy track
Continue soon
Edited by Gurveen - 9 years ago
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Nice concept... Plzzz continue soon.. Can't wait too read
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CHAPTER 2



Sumo comes to her house. Mr Tiwari ji is waiting for her.


Tiwari ji : Sumo gets fresh and comes to my room.


Sumo surprised : Okay


Sumo knocks on his door.


Tiwari ji : Beta I want to discuss with you about your shaadi.


Sumo shocked : Kya?! I can't marry now. I have time.


Tiwari ji: Nai beta before I die I want to see your wedding. Please mere liye to karo naa?


Sumo can't say to her grandfather : Apki marzi.


Tiwari ji is very happy.


Tiwari ji : Thank you beta.


Sumo leaves his room for her bedroom.


She can't believe that she said yes for her wedding.


Sumo thinks I love Shravu but not him.


Her phone rings. it's Preeti.


Preeti : I collect all the checks you can take them.


Sumo : Preeti I want to cry.


Preeti : Likin kyu?


Sumo : Because mere dadaji is finding a groom.


Preeti : Why you what to die for this? It's a good news.


Sumo shouts : I will kill you first!


Preeti : But why?


Sumo : You know that I love Shravan.


Preeti : No. Kabse?


Sumo : I don't know but I can't live without him.


Preeti : Tikk but do he loves you?


Sumo : I don't know. He is strange. He said he had move on about his love.


Preeti : So he loved someone when he was in London?


Sumo : No I think it was me ten years back.


Preeti : Are you sure? You think he didn't love someone after this.


Sumo : I hope so.


Preeti : First uske phone kardo and tell him about your wedding. We will see his reaction. If he gets angry it means that he feels something for you otherwise if he gets happy it means that he consider you just as a friend.


Sumo : Ok I will call you later.


Preeti : Good luck and bye.


Sumo : Bye.


She sits on her bed and dials his number.


Shravan : Hi I have to say about my...


She interrupts : Are you serious? I call you. So let me speak first.


Shravan : No


Sumo fastly : I will give you soon my wedding card.


Shravan angry : What! No you can't marry. Not now.


Sumo : It's not my decision but dadaji ka decision.


Shravan : You can't marry that's final.


Sumo : Tumse matlaab, I am not your property.


She ends the call.


Shravan is frustrated.


He takes his car and goes to her.


He rings the door bell.


Sumo opens the door.


Shravan : Who are in the house?


Sumo : Nanu or mai kyu?


Shravan : Kyu ki we have to talk.


He holds her hand and they go to Suman's room.


Sumo : What happened? Why you are so angry?


Shravan closes the door and comes to Sumo : How dare you to marry now?


Sumo : Why I can't marry now?


Shravan : Kyu ki?


Sumo : Bolo naa and waise bi I want to marry for Nanu's sake.


Shravan : You can't leave me alone.


Sumo : Hoye I am just your friend not your wife.


He realised that she is right.


Shravan : Tikk you can marry but ek sharte pe!


Sumo : Kya?


Shravan : I will choose the groom.


Sumo is sad but she realize that he has really move on.


Shravan : Anyway congrats.


He hugs her.


Sumo has tears : Now tell me why you wanted to speak with me.


Shravan : About our siblings.


Sumo: Bolo


Shravan : I think that Pushkar and Preeti are in love.


Sumo : Nonsense.


Shravan : You don't believe me naa. But it's true mere kasam.


Sumo has a smile : Now I understand why she doesn't like the proposal. Naughty her.


Shravan : We have to convince our family about them. Will you be with me?


Sumo : Done.


Shravan : Si I will talk you later about your groom.


He quits her house. She is breakdown. She can't believe that she lost him forever.




Sumo comes to Preeti's room.


She is on phone with Pushkar.


Sumo takes her phone. Preeti tries to take her phone back.


Pushkar : Preeti tries to understand you can't marry.


Sumo imitates Preeti's voice : Likin kyu?


Pushkar : Kyu ki mai tumse...


Sumo : Kya bolo naa.


She puts the speaker. Preeti hear also.


Pushkar : I am in love.


Sumo : Toh kya?


Pushkar : I love you Preeti.


Preeti is happy.


Sumo speaks with her own voice : Congrats dewar ji.


Pushkar : Sumo tum?


Sumo : Haan actually you declares your love to me.


Pushkar : It's not a joke. Preeti do you love me?


Preeti in tears : Yaa I love you.


Pushkar : Sacchi I am so happy.


Sumo : Hum bhi.


Pushkar in shyness ends the call.


Sumo hugs her sister.


Sumo : I am so happy for you. Pushkar is such an nice guy. You are very lucky.


Preeti : Yes you are right sister. But di how I can marry him? His family will never accept me?


Sumo : Don't worry mai or Shravan huna!


Preeti : Thank you. Now you tell me what's going with Shravan?

Sumo : Nothing. We are just friend. And I decide that I will marry for Nanu's sake.


Preeti hugs her : I am so sorry di.


Sumo : Don't feel bad I am happy for you.



Precap : Suman meets Shravan's mother. Ramnath's family learn about Preeti and Pushkar love.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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mind blowing start
amazing
cannot wait to read more
continue soon please
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

mind blowing start
amazing
cannot wait to read more
continue soon please



thank you dear it's mean a lot.
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Its a nice story.
Update awesome.
Plz pm me.
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Mind blowing update
Suman's heartbroken
Shravan's behaviour is confusing
Preeti and Pushkar are couple now
Waiting for Suman's and Shravan's mother meeting
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CHAPTER 3


Suman goes for her dabba. She enters and looks that someone is waiting for her.


Preeta comes to her : Madam is waiting for you.


Suman confused : Kon hai woh?


Preeta : Patta nai.


Suman goes to her.


She sits on her chair : Hi I am Suman Tiwari what order do you want?


Madam : No thank you.


Suman : So mai apse kaise help kar sakthi?


Madam : To reconquer my family.


Suman : Matlaab?


Madam : Ten years back I left my home, my husband and my child.


Suman : You mean Shravan?!!!


Madam : Yes, I had to leave.


Suman : How you can leave your husband and you son? Did you know how he was when you left? He was wretched. And why you come here again?


Shravan's mom : I didn't have another option.


Suman : Please aunty not make excuses. So tell me why you left him?


Shravan's mom : Because of my health condition.


Suman's surprised : What do you mean?


Shravan's mom : I had a blood cancer. I was in third state. No one knows about it except Kamini. Doctor told me that I has just five years to live. So I talked about it with Kamini she told me to go away at least my husband and Shravan will have less pain. I did that but three years after I had bone marrow transplant. And my blood cancer cured slowly. Now I am cured. I know you ask yourself why I didn't come here after my treatment because I didn't have the strength to see my husband and my son. I knew that they hate me.


Suman comes to her and hugs : I am sorry I talk too much.


Shravan's breaks the hug : It's okay. Oh so you open the dabba.


Suman gives her laddoo : I remember how you cooked so I follow your path.


Shravan's mom tasted : It's so yummy.


Suman : Thank you mum. Come we will go to my house.


Shravan's mom : No I don't think it's a good idea I can't face Tiwari ji.


Suman : Me huna don't worry. I will handle everything.


They leave in Suman's car.


Shravan's mom : Do you have any pics of Shravan?


Suman : Yaa sure.


She gives her phone.


Shravan's mom has tears : He is so tall and handsome.


Suman has a smile.


They arrived to her house.


Suman knocks on nanuji's door.


Tiwari ji : Come Suman.


She enters holding Shravan's mom's hand.


Tiwari ji is litteraly shocked and stand up.


Tiwari ji : You Mrs Ramnath what are you doing here? How you can come here again?


He holds his heart. He has pain. Suman holds him and makes him sit.


Suman : Nanu please listen me. I can explain you.


Tiwari ji : Chup how dare you to let her enter here?


Suman : Please nanu you knew why she left ten years back?


Tiwari ji : It's not my problem.


Suman : You have to know she had an blood cancer.


Tiwari ji is shocked.


Suman continues : Yaa she followed a treatment and now she came back because she is cured.


Tiwari ji asks Shravan's to sit beside him.


Shravan's mom : I am sorry Tiwari ji. I know I did a wrong thing but I did that to protect my family.


Tiwari ji : I thought bad about you. But I was wrong. My daughter's best friend will never be wrong.


She takes Tiwari ji blessing. Tiwari ji : I bless you to find your family.


Shravan's mom : Thank you.


Suman : Aunty can you make Shravan's favorite dessert.


Shravan's mom : Sure.


They go to kitchen and prepares the lunch.


Suman quits her house for Shravan's office.




Precap : Shraman are annoyed and Ramnath's learn about Pushkar and Preeti love interest.

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