SAFARNAMA- A SHRAMAN SS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!! After a heavy dose of emotions in todays episode I was feeling restless so tried to write something..hope u all will like my efforts

Prologue
It was a chilly December morning, a 5 yrs old girl dressed in torn shabby clothes was washing dirty utensils . Her hands were scarred so was rest of her body .. She worked in a small restaurant as a maid. Customers took pity on her but no one cared enough to help her, until one day...
A 6 yrs old boy was walking beside his father.. It was his first day in new school and he wasn't willing to go.. With tears in his doe eyes he asked his father to let him stay at home today. Ramnath loved his son dearly . after his wife's demise he was the sole reason for his existence. Seeing his reluctance he gave up ," okay if I take u for a walk today , will u go to school tomorrow." The boy nodded and have his father a million dollar smile. They stopped by a small restaurant ...and there he met her
The little boy was curious to know who was she and why was she working there and not going to school. He walked up to her and said," Hi!!! I am shravan. Meri dost banogi ?????" .The little girl looked up and answered ," Suman...Han"
That is how their beautiful journey began...


So why was lil suman working as a maid??? Where was her family??? Will shravan help her out...

So how was it???? Should I continue??? Do give ur valuable comments
Till then take care
Priyam 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
sounds awesome
cannot wait to read more
continue soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Do cntinue soon
N plz pm me wenever u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Why did you stop? This is so short!
Please continue and let us bask in the glory of your writer awesomeness!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u guys!!! Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Priyam!
Nice prologue.
waiting for update.

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