TS: Ek Ka Duje Ke Vaaste. CH- 2 Update 1/5/16 Pg. 8

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Arya, main Teri fan ho gayi. So beautiful. How do u do this yaar. Urs story telling. I can actually imagine them. Thanks fr keeping it so close to reality. Loved it. Wud love it if u wrote an epilogue. All the best with ur assignments. Do continue writing stories thou...

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

"One last question."
"I will go through a million more"

That hit right in the heart .

Love

-God Bless

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an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

beautiful... Loved every word... What a wonderful love confession! This forum is really fortunate to have such talented writers...

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

beautiful and lovely❤️

i loved it

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

cannot believe this story has finished
amazing ending
absolutely loved it
thank you for writing it

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Rooh_5896

@Rooh_5896

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Arya, main Teri fan ho gayi. So beautiful. How do u do this yaar. Urs story telling. I can actually imagine them. Thanks fr keeping it so close to reality. Loved it. Wud love it if u wrote an epilogue. All the best with ur assignments. Do continue writing stories thou...

Thank you so much Shalz!! 🤗❤️

That is so very sweet of you!

It makes me go that much further to come up with something good.

Seriously.

And don't worry. I'll keep writing.

I'll try my best to write that epilogue.

Lots of love! ❤️

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...-Riya-...

@...-Riya-...

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

This was lovely.

I'm glad you went for the straight-forward route of making them just admit their feelings, they knew they loved each other so why delay the inevitable.

I hope you have another FF on ShraMan out soon. Loved your writing.

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Rooh_5896

@Rooh_5896

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Adeebaayub
"One last question."
"I will go through a million more"

That hit right in the heart .

Love

-God Bless

Wow.

You noticed.

I wrote this in a flow.

It felt as is this would have been the perfect answer she could have given. I could not have imagined her saying anything else.

I'm glad you liked it.

Love.

Arya.

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Rooh_5896

@Rooh_5896

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: an_chau
beautiful... Loved every word... What a wonderful love confession! This forum is really fortunate to have such talented writers...

You flatter me unnecessarily. 😃😳

But I'm so glad you liked it.

Thanks for reviewing!

And yes the forum certainly has quite a few good writers.