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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

He holds her,

As an extension of his self

She is not a stranger,

That he has to let go of...

Perhaps she is a child,

Who would wander away.

Stumble on things ,

Or Harm might come her way

She is safer in his hands,

When the mind has to focus away.

Held so close to him...

His most precious possession.


How can u people write these beautiful words. ..simply amazing...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: SahSah

so beautifully put into to amazing words...

how great are the lines and so apt.. he could have missed it but he redeemed himself and step up to it and did his share of working upon.



😆 The epic fight between the heart and the brain saved him...If someone had to call him for him to come for her rescue after all that he knew, I would have killed this guy.😉

Thank U. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Ri21

so beautifully written chick 👏

i loved ur post
nothing to add. u said about it so beautifully 😳


Thanx, Ri. ❤️

Thank U, Stephy. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: gauriangel

He holds her,

As an extension of his self

She is not a stranger,

That he has to let go of...

Perhaps she is a child,

Who would wander away.

Stumble on things ,

Or Harm might come her way

She is safer in his hands,

When the mind has to focus away.

Held so close to him...

His most precious possession.


How can u people write these beautiful words. ..simply amazing...


Thank U. 😳

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