Because It's You -- A ShraMan SS (Epilouge Pg 21) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Thank you very much @ pearl
Thanks MysticRiver

Thank you so much Ishita! I'll pm you dear.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: renjini263

heyaa mahiii...

lovely ss dear.. so nanu gt heart attack and shravan cancelled his london trip.. and left to meet sumo and nanu..
thank god nanu is safe and fine :)
lovely part.. waiting fr the next part.. update soon..
pm me :) 😊


Thanks Ren!

Glad you loved it😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Hello all. Here's the next part. Thank you for so much love and appreciation😊

Just a small request, if you want an update PMs kindly send me a buddy request coz it gets a bit difficult to send PMs.
Thanks😊

Chapter 2



Sumo ran behind him to catch up to him.


Sumo: Sunno!


Shravan stopped in his tracks and turned around. She still had the power to stop him.


Sumo: Tum.. Tum toh London jaane waale the naa?

Her heart was jumping in joy but she appeared to be frustrated.


Shravan: Haan, woh tumne call kiya toh Ruk gaya.

He said it quite frankly.


Sumo lowered her eyes and mentally slapped herself.

"Kya Tu bhi! Pehle call kiya phir poochti hai Kyun?", she thought.


Sumo: Toh, ab tum kya karoge? Flight toh miss Ho gayi hogi tumhaari...

Her voice trailed off as she said it.


Shravan: Dekhta Hoon... Par tumhe itni chinta Kyun hain? Tumhe kya fark padta hai?


He said it quite harshly which she didn't like. Why was he so rude? And what made him feel that she didn't care? Had she behaved so badly?


Just then, Kamini, Ramnath and Vandy came running.


Ramnath: Shravan... Tiwariji theek toh hain naa? Pushkar ne bataaya ki...

Shravan: Ab chinta ki koi baat nahi hai Papa. Woh gastric attack tha, that's all.


Ramnath rushed to see him while Kamini was more than irritated.


Kamini: Shravan puttar! Tumne apni flight miss kar di... Tiwari Ji ke liye? Aisa koi karta hai bhala. Aree gastric attack hi toh tha... Kaunsa woh...

Shravan: Chachi! Bass!


He said loudly. Sumo too was surprised. Shravan didn't raise his voice quite often. But when he did, no one could talk.


Shravan was too angry to talk about it. Nanaji wasn't somebody or anybody. He was Nanaji. The Nanaji.


He walked off to the ground floor of the Hospital and stood in the ground.


"Bura laga?", came a voice.


Shravan: Bura toh lagega naa?

He turned around and said. It was Pushkar.


And he remembered an old memory that still was as fresh as yesterday.





Sumo and Pushkar, both were running behind an angry Shravan. He was crying too much. A boy had torn his shirt and thrown him off the ground. He didn't have the guts to go home in such a way. As it is, who was bothered about him at home?


He ran all the way to Tiwari Quila, Sumo and Pushkar still following him. He ran straight to Sumo's room and started crying on her bed.


They ran upto him, gasping and out of breath.


Sumo: Kya Shravan! Olympics mein bhagega toh first aayega! Ab bataayega kya hua?

Pushkar: Bhaiyya ab bata bhi do!


But his sobs weren't just stopping.


"Koi ro raha hai kya?", came Nanaji.


Sumo: Dekhiye naa ise, jabse aaya hai bass roye jaa raha hai.


Nanu: Hmmm... Koi baat nahi. Ab koi rota Rahega toh woh Sev ki sabji kaun khayega? Haina Sumo?


They giggled and Sumo brought the sabji in a plate.


Nanu sat on the bed beside him and asked him,

Kya hua Shravan?


Shravan turned around to reveal his torn shirt. It was clear that he was bullied badly.

Sumo: Teri toh! Kiski itni himmat? Naam bata Shravan bass naam bata, usko thok thok ke...


Nanu: Suman!

She quietened down.


Nanu: Kisine tumko maara?


Shravan nodded sheepishly.

Shravan: Main kuch nahi kar pata jab woh mota aa jaata hai. Kitna strong hai woh...


Nanu: Toh phir tum use apne dimaag ki strength batao naa?


Pushkar: Dimaag ki strength?


Nanu: Haan! Dimaag use karo aur pareshaan kar do uss mote ko!


Shravan thought a little and understood the hint.


Shravan: Samajh gaya Nanu... Samajh gaya! Aur Sumo, yeh sabji khaali dekhne ke liye hain yaa main khaaoon?


All of them giggled and had a family lunch together.





This was Nanu. And this was the love that he got from them. Pushkar knew it. He knew how had their childhood passed. And what were the Tiwaaris for his Bhaiyya, specially his anchor Sumo.





This was the second part. Hope it's fine.



Love,

Mahishee😳


Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Mahishee you genius! I love it! Thanks a ton for the pm! Pushkar is love. So is nanu. And the sev ki sabzi. And the way he shut Chachi. And ShraMan.. Mastam mastam.. ❤️
Love,
Yagneshri.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hey..
Nice story...In tune with the show...Flashback n all..
Thode lambe chapters de do bas..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great going mahi 🤗

Really good I am loving it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awsum
Loved it mahi di
Love ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
This is amazing
Please add me in the PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Both the updates were awesome! ⭐️ Thank god nanaji is fine. And shravan missed the flight for sumo and nanu.
Par ek baat batao inn dono ke beech mein koi ladayi thi kya? Why he was going to london kuch samajh nahi aaya? 😕
Aww, sev ki sabji and distant memory. 😳 And i tell you i literally read 'kamini' instead of 'kaamini' when the name first appeared. 😆 😛 And she does look like a kamini only. 😡 😛
Ok so pushkar is shravan's little bro par ye ramnath aur vandy koun hai? Thoda sa character intro do na please.
Edited by ramya06 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: --fero--

Great going mahi 🤗

Really good I am loving it


Thank you fero jaan🤗
Am so happy abt it!

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