OS: Yeh Hum Kahan Aa Gaye? [Completed]

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

It's awesome kriti...

Sumo* ...she corrected him *suman

Wow that was awesome

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I m refreshing the page every now n then to see if u have uodated the next part. Cant wait. Amazing. Update sooner

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I like ur write ups..

Read 1st Anniversary too..

U should become writer for the show...

I Was so happy last week that finally I found a show worth to watch...but yesterdays episode just made me read only live updates...didn't saw also..

But ur OS brought back the interest...so thank u🤗

Hopefully we got epi today..

Will be waiting fr next update...

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Even though both parts were pretty much written as a Shravan centric scene IMO (focusing on Shravan's psyche) I like how it played out as a ShraMan scene, bringing their feelings to the forefront. It was absolutely powerful. All Shravan wanted was just to matter. He's lonely. He's hurt. And I think somewhere he got that yesterday when he said yes for the engagement with Suman walking away, even though he never wanted to get it this way. Gotta admit you did the impossible of making me feel a tad bit better about yesterday's episode with your OS.

Some of the sentences/phrases were pure GOLD like these

It was her heart he was trying to trample over, but then why did it become his ache?

The antidote could only be derived from the poison itself.

I totally pictured NiMik while reading these 2 parts & damn I so so wish for this to happen in the show. It is just so so them. Kriti, you do have a way with words & I hope you continue writing. This was just GOLD.

Edited by prc_fan1 - 9 years ago