Suvan Drabble: Kaise Hua

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Suman held Shravan’s hand and said, “Go Dev...the country needs you”. Shravan turned her around and Suman gave him a smile. She gently poked his ribs to cue him to say the final line.


Suman grew confused as the dazed Shravan looked deeply into her eyes and gently kissed her hand. This wasn’t part of the scene. He sighed, “I will always come back to you because I love you, Sumo”. Suman’s eyes widened hearing Shravan say her name instead of Heer. Gasps and murmurs were heard throughout the audience. Hearing the loud whispers and seeing Suman’s shocked face, Shravan realized what he said and quickly corrected himself but the damage had been done.


After the play, Suman quickly left and Shravan didn’t have a chance to explain himself. She wasn’t even picking up his calls in the evening. Suman experienced mixed feelings. Why did he say her name? Suddenly, Suman heard something near her window. She turned around to see that Shravan had climbed into her room. Seeing her angry expression, Shravan stuttered that he came here because he wanted to talk to her and she wasn’t picking up his calls. After an awkward silence, Suman asked, “Why did you say that?”


Shravan looked away and murmured, “Sorry...It slipped out by accident”.


Suman held Shravan’s face and made him look at her. “You’re lying. You are a good liar but I know your eyes don’t lie, Shravan”.


Shravan nodded, “Yes, you’re right. I don’t know when or how...but I’m in love with you, Sumo”. Suman stood there stunned hearing his confession. Shravan held her hand but let go when she flinched. He sighed, “I promise I won’t let my feelings get in the way of our friendship. You don’t need to feel the same way about me”.


Suman looked away and absorbed in what Shravan had kept inside him. She whispered, “I...need time”. Shravan bit his lip trying to hide his sadness and started to leave. Suman called after him and asked, “Shravan, did your friendship have any ulterior motive?”


Shravan smiled, “No, I don’t need anything besides your friendship”. He turned to leave but Suman stopped him again.


She surprised him by placing a soft peck on his cheek and said, “This is a new start for us, Shravan. I was waiting for the perfect moment to tell you that I love you too”.


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A/N: This was written for the Spellwork Drabble Contest organized by Lavy. Honestly, I didn't really like this Drabble that much but still decided to submit it because this beginning part where Shravan has a slip-up and says Sumo instead of Heer was something I imagined if the play scene was shown. I know...It's very cheesy and cliché 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm hoping this blunder to happen in near future not in stage though! Nice one!

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This one was really sweet! The Freudian slip can so happen on the show too!😆

The minute I read this I began missing the left out school play and the interesting scenes we would've gotten in our bag

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Thank you!!


Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

I'm hoping this blunder to happen in near future not in stage though! Nice one!


LOL I think it'd be funny to see this blunder happen in front of people 😆 it was inspired by the scene from Friends when Ross is getting married and he says Rachel's name instead of Emily in front of everyone


Originally posted by: Bucky

This one was really sweet! The Freudian slip can so happen on the show too!smiley36

The minute I read this I began missing the left out school play and the interesting scenes we would've gotten in our bagsmiley18


IKR....the blood donation, play, and parade...we would have gotten some really good scenes but the makers are currently doing the best they can of the situation

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