Suvan OS: Because It's You - Page 3

Aww I would've loved to read the next part. But I get what you mean. Part 1 does seem to be a good ending and with your wonderful writing does seem to look good as a stand alone too.

(Honestly before knowing it was a TS, I thought the story ended with the chapter there and still the reader in me was very contended👍🏼 Don't mine me please😔) And that's why when I read there was a part 2 coming, I was really curious as to how you were going to have a follow-up with an atmanirbhar first one.

Originally posted by: Bucky

Aww I would've loved to read the next part. But I get what you mean. Part 1 does seem to be a good ending and with your wonderful writing does seem to look good as a stand alone too.

(Honestly before knowing it was a TS, I thought the story ended with the chapter there and still the reader in me was very contended👍🏼 Don't mine me please😔) And that's why when I read there was a part 2 coming, I was really curious as to how you were going to have a follow-up with an atmanirbhar first one.

Yeah, I feel like this is also a good ending spot. The next part would have been very serious but as Neeraja mentioned that Suman would feel guilty for opening up for the first time and she would have ended up blaming herself. But, I would have written about that too (because they didn't do anything wrong as long as they were careful). Tbh writing all that is a bit stressful and difficult, you know...and I don't want to ruin the essence of Part 1...I feel like stand alone it is very good and I was able to talk about consent, which is a very imp topic to me