FF A twist in the tale part 8 updated on page 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update..continue soon..plz pm me wen u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyashaan

nice update..continue soon..plz pm me wen u update..


Thank u for liking it 😊
i ll surely PM u ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yarr !
nice update just love it :))

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArnavKiiDeewani

awesome yarr !

nice update just love it :))

continue soon

Thanks a ton Amrita for liking d work😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woooww this is just awesome! Reallly love it! Love Shashwats character heree and all the characters as well!! Do update sooonnn! This is sooo interestinng!! :) x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u Sanchita 😊
will update it soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

Tejal n Aniket continued with the friendship...they fought more n never liked each other but sumwhere d friendship was blossoming. Where aniket always teased calling her "Green Chilly" ...tejal also leaved no stone unturned to fight with him ...some days passed likewise. Also foram never liked d friendship...she sumwhere liked aniket (her echildhood friend) n now getting jealous of tejal. Fresher's party was also approaching n dis tym its gonna b quite interesting as it was a theme party n all d students were supoose to don a Mythological character. The dresses were provided by the college itself n d best part ws no1 knew which character will b donned by whom.
1 fine day :
(In the canteen, 1 pm n he was sitting alone)
Tejal arrived in the canteen n it seemed she was looking for some1. Tejal finally found Aniket sitting in the corner with a bag. Actually Aniket snatched her bag n b4 she cud understand nything he rushed into the canteen. Tejal came there n asked : " Aniket y u keep on irritating me...wats ur problem "
Aniket (smiled) :"Oye green chilly ...shut up...ur always either in class or in library. Its lunch time ...come sit n have sumthing"
Tejal:"Wat is dis green chilly thing .,...how many times i hv to tell u ...Mine name is tejal...TEJAL cant u speak properly n BTW do u know where is vaibhavi."
Aniket:"Listen green chilly relax ...vaibhavi is with foram dey hv gone to the market...n wat happened with vaibhavi ..u need some help ..tell me !!when i m here y to fear"(n he smirked)
Tejal:(annoyed)"Ok mr problem solver ...can u help me with my project report. Vaibhavi told me she'll help me out but now she s no where to b seen. but i m sure u cn help me out ...after all u r d most intelligent guy who always sits in the canteen (she commented)"
Aniket took out the project report n explained it to her within 15 min. After dat he said :"Listen i sit in the canteen dat doesnt mean i dont study ...now tell me u need sumthing like coffee.i m going to get Coffee 4 me".
Tejal was shocked, astonished n embarrassed at the same tym :"I m sorry ...i misunderstood u ."
aniket:"Relax ...now tell me wat do u want"
Tejal:"Coffee". Aniket goes n bring in 2 cup of coffee.
Tejal was still feeling bad ...Aniket:"Oye green chilly relax!!! ...tell me about ur family"
tejal:"I m 4m surat basically ...Dad and i stay there .I shifted to Mumbai for my bachelors." Aniket "Wat about ur Mom?"
Tejal:"My parents r separated ..n she lives in NY with my brother 'Rahul' n wat about u ??".
Aniket "I m sorry yaar ...i had no idea abt the separation thing" . Tejal :"No problem ... so u r4m mumbai ."
Aniket :"Na my parents are in ahemdabad ...our family just comprises of 4 of us .,..me,mom n dad n my elder sister 'Anjali'".
Tejal:"So u r also 4m Gujrat...wat r ur hobbies"
Aniket :"Nothing as such ...i like writing poems n playing guitar. BTWVaibhavi told me dat u were d sports captain of ur school"
Tejal:"Nice to know u r poet ...tell me about ur poems ...i m gud at cricket".
Aniket "I ll tell u about my poems sum other day ...n u have to teach me play cricket ...chal i hv to go now Bye".
Tejal:"Bye"
Tejal n aniket both leave.
After few more days .
Tejal was absent 4m d college 2day. The gang was chatting in the premises n also were discussing Foram's new Camera.She ws busy making videos.
Aniket :"Vaibhavi ...where is tejal ...she s no where 2 b seen ."
Vaibhavi:"She s nt attending d college 2day ...she hd sum issues wid a project so she thot of working on dem ."
Aniket :"Dis is d problem with most of the gals ...dey think dat staying in home n studying can solve d problem. I think u shud learn to study 4m guyz who giv equal time to studies n fun...but still get better scores den u gals.N wat u gals dream about sum tall dark n handsome guy will come for u ...CRAP!!!".
Vaibhavi:." aniket!! Dun try n act smart wid me ..OK"
aniket :"I m nt trying to b smart ...I m smart (he smirked)".
Vaibhavi:"So u mean ...dat u r better den gals."
aniket:"No u r getting me wrong ...all guyz r better den gals"
Vaibhavi:" I ll give a task to u ...if u cn do dat ... i ll accept dat u guyz r better...Wat say ??"
Aniket:"Ok so i hv to proove it ...chal give me ".
Vaibhavi was thinking wat she shud ask him to do ...just den she remember Tejal's words :"Dis Word love doesnt exist in my dictionary ...i m nt stupid like u vaibhavi...who is gonna fall for sum 1 ...or who is gonna wait for a tall dark n handsome ...this s all crap!!"
Vaibhavi:"OK aniket here is d task ...go n make Tejal Fall in love wid u ...if u r successful i ll accept dat u guyz r better"
Foram, shaswat , n Moni r all shocked.
aniket ws also shocked
I m ending on Aniket's Shocked face.

OK frens i end up here ...do hit a like n ur comments r always welcomed.
Keep guessing frens wat will aniket say ??? Whether he will accpet the challenge???how wud b d fresher's party?/?

Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its magical, Tani.

With the way MK is at work, Anijal's happy future lies only in your FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Taani my stupid browser is jumping everytime I press the like button. So, here is my "superlike" for the updated piece..

I loved the whole piece. Continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mili27

Its magical, Tani.


With the way MK is at work, Anijal's happy future lies only in your FF.

Thanks Mili
keep guessing aniket's answer

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