ViCha OS **TOGETHER FOREVER** - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Thanks Nira for the lovely piece of writing...
I like it very much...
I can imagine the scenes while reading... U wrote it perfectly.. No words to say..
The situation is one of my favourite scene of mriara...
Vicha is so special and magical..
The kiss... 😳 u make it very hot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Ok Sorry ... I have become late to comment ...
When I should comment on Valentine Day ...
Its's alright 😃
First of all Thank you Di 🤗
Mention not... 😳
You know very well our demands so you surprised us 😃
This was great Valentine gift from you 😛
I am happy too that you liked it...😃
Fantastic OS ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thank you... 😃
Chhavi was missing her old days of EBI 😒
Yes, those days were something else...
Yeah golden days...

Viraf was ignoring her 😳
He should have cleared all things by talking .
Viraf taunt bhi de raha hai !!!!
Chhavi recalled their consummation scene shoot... 😳
Her feelings became different after that 😊
Yeah, 😳
Viraf always had special feelings for her 😊
Yes, romantic scenes were always something else
Viraf had forgot that they were shooting..
It was like those were really happening 😳
How sweet, isn't it?! 😛
Viraf noticed she was not ok...
He took her to the make up room 😛
😉
And now Viraf could no longer control his feelings 😊
Nira Di you described Viraf's feelings that was outstanding 👏
😃
Finally Viraf said he loves her 😊
❤️
The kisses were warm 😳
Finally they confess their feelings... 😊
😳
What should I tell about your fiction Di... 😛
You are awesome writer 😃
Thank you so much Khajju... 😊
Hopefully we can read more of your writings 😊
I hope so... 😳




Thank you so much Khajju for liking it and commenting on it!!! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

First of all A BIG THANK YOU Nira for this Lovely "ViCha OS" !

LOVE you for this❤️🤗❤️
Love you too Di... 🤗
Wow Nira this is a warm, exciting OS that heavily succeeds in gripping our heart.❤️
Thank you... 😳
It switches from scene to scene with amazing style and grace,👏 and it spins the whole situation and circumstances beautifully. weldone👏
Thank you so much... 😃
I absolutely Adore vicha in your OS.
They are adorable... 😳
It's always great to read your story and I am lucky to get the opportunity to read this.😃
Awww di... 😊
This OS is packed with true love, anger, beautiful romance, passion, erotic moments and confession for sure.
😳
Viraf's anger,sarcastic attitude and Chhavi's confussion, helplessness
Show thier true love towards each other.
😳
You create a Magic and write a very beautiful story on valentine's day. 👏
I am happy that you liked it...😊
This is the beautiful gift we all Ebians get. 🥳
😃
Last part when they confessed their Love was irresistible and it makes my heart pound.❤️❤️
❤️❤️
By reading this I could visualize every bits of it.
I know our imagination power is awesome... 😆
Agree with chhavi that saba has a magical power to create lovey environment.
Yes...
Thanks Darling for this beautiful gift.🤗
Mention not!!! 😳
Please write more OS like this in future.
I will try!!!! 😃
As we ebians badly needs these doses😃😃😃




Thank you so so much Di for commenting on the OS

It means a lot for me...
❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: kumari27

Wonderful idea!!

U did great job & amazingly described all circumstances!!!
Thank you so much Pooja... 😃
Pool side location is indeed a great place & decorated very well!!
Yes, and the scene too was so romantic... 😳
Chhavi was right saba is great in creating love in air!!!!
Exactly!! 👏
Chhavi is feeling helpless as viraf is not talking to her!!!
Yeah...
Parcheen is like curse on vichha love story !!!! He spoild everything!!!
Seriously he is a curse for ViCha and for us also...
Viraf shld be more carefull & shld talked before coming on any conclusion!!!!

Viraf comments scarsticaly on chhavi's position!!!!
He was hurt...
Chhavi comment after shot done was good!!!!
😛
BT viraf thodi baat karta toh sab theek ho jata!!
Haan...but woh naraz tha...
Viraf kitne dinon baad iss tarah se chhavi ka khayal rakh raha hai.!!
So sweet!!!! 😳
Dono room me self control mode me the BT destiny played its role fantastically!!!!
😳
Wow so long kiss !!!
Even viraf didn't bothered abt his phone!!!
Yeah... ❤️
Chhavi abhi bhi us passionate mode me hai!!!!
😳
Oh wow what a great gift u gave to all ebians on this occasion !!

Superb!!!




Thank you so much Pooja

I am happy that you liked this OS...🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: mr.irfan

THANK YOU SO MUCH😊




😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Zehrin

Thanks Nira for the lovely piece of writing...
I like it very much...
I can imagine the scenes while reading... U wrote it perfectly.. No words to say..
The situation is one of my favourite scene of mriara...
Vicha is so special and magical..
The kiss... 😳 u make it very hot...



I am so happy that you liked it...😃

Thanks a lot...😊

Yes , this is one of my favourite scenes too
Post-leap most romantic scene...❤️

Yes ViCha are magical... 😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Finally found time to read your this OS.

Just one word to say "Fantastic" 👏 👏 👏

I was really imagining each part which you wrote. It seems like every thing has happened between them except the end where they finally confessed their feelings.

In reality I never imagine Viraf to misjudge her. It was she who must have been at fault as Viraf is really sweet and sensible who can give it another thought. But I liked this view as well.

Chhavi was desperate as she always used to enjoy all attention by Viraf but now when she is not getting that she must feel irritating. She had some feelings for her which is obvious as anyone who would spent so much time with him can fall in love with him.

Viraf has also tried his best to control all his emotions and he did it his best but at last his patience gave up as he can't be that much rude and cold for her. He always care for her and had a soft corner for her so it's not easy.

Even the whole unit notced the coldness but still they behaved professionally and thank god their professional approach helped them to get closer once again and made them say the feelings of their heart.

He said it and Chhavi was waiting for this moment. They are now one and no Uncle P or anyone can come between them ever. Just loved their romance session.

This was awesome and a perfect VDay gift for us.

Thanks and keep doing such wonderful work.

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