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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com
<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ufff ye Tara ki dreams...!!!! 😳
But on a serious note, The update is too much hot and intense!!! ☺️

Tara is totally confused between her dreams and reality...😳

I so loved Mj here...
He knew Tara's feelings and wanted to tease her😳

You wrote the whole scene so beautifully...
Sach mein MriAra and their chemistry!!! ❤️

THE MRIARA MOMENTS...
So beautifully executed Mini...
Superb!!

Update soon...
Eagerly waiting!!!

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thankks a lot nira

taras dreams toh hai hi 😳

and mj bhi kam nahu hai 😆

dreams and reality gets confused coz reality becomes dreamy like an actual dream

mriara ki chemistry hai hi thrilling

love mriara miss them

thanks a lot

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: SamreenJ
Lovely start Mini👏

Kiya intense and romantic dreams hain tara ke
Best lines for them

Mj ko pata hai tara ke dil ki halat
Wah aub tease kerne ka irada hai😳
Again best lines for them👏

Sach mein donon aik dosre ke kareeb hote hain
To yahi hota hai ke
Aeee Dil sambhal ja zara😳😳

Wow Bravo
Kiya khoobsorut likha hai
Dhadkanein bherhane keliye kafi hai
Superb Mini
Splendid and this is really intense and passionate

Per yahan end q kiya
Juldi update kerna
I am waiting and getting very excited😳😳😳

Thank you so much dear.
🤗

thanks alot dear

tara is very romantic

thanku

mj is also in love with her so much

thanks dear

glad you liked it

i will update soonest

ill try it today

youre most welcome

Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: irfan2
thank you best and great work😊 you are a best wrighter 😊 i like your story very much 😊

thanks a lot

im very happy you like my story

thanks a lot

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Khadeja
Superb update Mini ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Tara and dreams 😳
Oh!! kya dreams dekhte hai Tara !!! 😃
tara and her dreams are so 😳

The song seemed perfect with the scene 👏
Now she was thinking why she imagined him like this 😆

confused soul tara , uisse realize karna chahiye ki shes in love

Now when really MJ had come, Tara trying herself to convince that that was dream 😛
MJ realized the fact and decided to tease her 😳

his teasing is very nautghy 😳

Your next song selection is also lovely 👏
MJ lost his control 😳

woh toh hona hi tha

He just immersed in Tara...

And Tara also lost herself...

thye both lost in the moemnt

That was no more teasing

that was real ,
what starte as teasing ended being real

Wow Mini this update was so romantic 😊
You are doing great job 👏

Update soon 😊

thanks a lot dear

will update soon

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kumari27
Romantic update😳😳
thanks a lot dear

Tara ka dream bahoot khoobsoorat👏

taras is so dreamy

Mj Tara ko kitna samajhta hai...
Use tease karna chahta hai😆

Tease ke bahane khud ko sambhal nai paya mj😳

but teasing turned out to be real for him

Romance or romance wah kya likha hai 👏👏

thank a lot
Kamaal ka update
thank you soo much

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
I am at loss of words, it was just "HOT". 😳 😳 😳

thanka lot dear

We missed to see MriAra romancing at this level in to the show and now the FFs are helping us to see them romancing. 😳 😳 😳 Tara is spell bounded and she is unable to think anything else rather than him.😳 😳 😳

thanks alot dear , ven i wante to see them romance more in the show ,

MJ thought to tease her as now he is getting hints of having a magical effect on her.☺️

theyll love themselves into the moment

☺️ She still thought that she was day dreaming but now he is here.

so many dreams made her think so , shes nowadyas dray dreqaming about him so much

This was hot and passionate the way you showed MJ's passionate side.😉 😉 😉 I love to see him in this way.

thanks a lot dear
I hope this sequence never ends and I would love to see the next update with more romance.

it will in the upcoming parts are full of roamnce im working on the next one and had planned add more romance

Continue soon.

will update soonest

thanks a lot
will update soonest

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Part 6

guys ... Sorry for the late update ... Hope you enjoy this chapter and please leave your precious feedback and likes ... Its a bit short but ill made it worth a read ... Theres only pure love between mriara ...

part 6

... She pressed his hand agaibst her belly ... Now ...for him ... There was no looking back ... With his other hand ... He started roaming his fingers on her exposed back due tothe style of her kurti ... He had already lost control on him... He started as a simpke teasing ... But where he will end up... No one knows ... His eyes were looking at her beairiful skin... He slid the dupatta and threw it on the recliner ... Making her concious of his action ... She could feel his gaze on her back ... and He ... Suddenly ... Pulled the dori of her kurti ... Making her heart skip abeat ... ..eventually She opened her closed eyes ... In pure delight ... But Still under his spell ...

Kya hai yeh silsala
Janu naa, Main janu naa
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She had nothing to say ... All her hidden emotions and feelingsfor him from the past few days were now out of her control ... She couldnt even thnk properly now .. She was firgettibg she had blamed him for tryibg to harm hrr...or wait . . she just couldnt acccept it. ... Herheart was now more tgan sure that he gadnt dobe anything to harm her ... Theman who is standing right behind her cant be ... She shyly turned around and looked at him ... He loosem his grip on her ... And when she was facing him he moved his hands to her waist ... He looked at those beautiful big eyes ...her eyes were hipnotizing him ... He could not think what he was doing ... Or what he was going to do ... They got immersed in anintense eyelock ... with unknown desires in their eyes ...

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaha ki de, tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa...
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janu naa
Main janu naa

Still lost in her eyes he lifted her in his arms ... And she placed her hands behind his neck ... He walked towards their bed ... He gently placed her on their bed ... and he conforted him over her ... His intense glare was loved by tara ... Who didnt want this moment to end ... he placed a soft kiss on his cheek ... Another very near her lips ... Making her gasp due to his actions ... He then moved his lips to her neck ... Placing wet kisses there ... He then Nuzzled in the crook of her neck ... Which made her close her eyes in delight ...

He wanted to look at her ... And he found in front of him to see ... Her closed angelic eyes with a beetroot coulour blush on her cheeks ... She noticed his pause .. .. And opened her eyes ... He looked at her with a smile ... She smiled bsck shyly ...and looked down at his chest ... His shirt ... She touched the first button of his shirt ... He looked at her hands lovingly ...

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Sorry guys this a a very short chspter but i have tried to make it super romantic

Thanks a lot for your support hope you like it

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