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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: irfan2

THANKS NICE WORK GREAT IAM LIKE YOUR STORY




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: miniapplepie




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: irfan2

thanks for reply😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5
Hi guys ... Sorry for the late update ... Hope you enjoy this chappy and please leave your precious feedback and likes
Part 5
She turned around and walked towards the bed ... She sat... And folded her legs ... she sat lost in her own thoughts ... When she felt hee braid waa open and a pair of hands were loosining her braid... Slightly feeling his fingers on her back ... she could feel his manly scent ... It wws him... she turned to look at him in surprise yet with love ... He was looking at herlovingly ... Smiling ...

Jaane kahan se tum paas aaye
Huve paraaye mujhse sabhi
Jeene lagi hai har saans meri
Ab door jaana na tum kabhi

He reduced his distance between them ... Leaning forward towards her lips... She could see his intetions in his brown eyes ... Making her go crazy ... She closed her eyes ... When he almost reached her lips ... Her dream broke when the window opened due to the wind...

Tham gaya hai samaa
Pal bhi hai khushnumaa
Main akeli yahan

T. ( in her mind ) haye teh kya ho rsha hai mujhe ... Mein usko har jagah kyun dekh rahi hoon ???? Aur woh bhi aise ???? ...yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe ... ?
At night...

She entered her room and walked towards the window to it ...when she was about to close it... She heard footsteps coming towardsthe room... Her heart wass feelibg very diffrrent feeling ... Her heart was beggining to beat faster... Mj stepped in the room... Making tara close her eyes ...
T. ( to herself ) ... Nahi ... Ab mein uss ke bare mein nahi sochungi... Woh sirf mera brahm tha... Woh iss kamre nein nahi hai... Keval mein hoon... Tara bachu ... Din mein sapbe dekhne band kar ...
Mj heard her say that... What effect he had on her just after a night in the stable ... But he smirked ... He walked towards her ... He just wanted to tease her little. ... Coz... Sommewhere he knew that his touch affected her ...very deeply ...
While she was cluthing yhe curtain in fear ... In the fear of losing her control over herself in just aday dream... Fearibg histouch... Which did wonders to her skin ...

She was listening ti his footsteps ... She was in the dilemma ... Was this real... Or just an imagination... Her heartbeats were gettibg faster with every step he took... She closed her eyes not being able to handle her fear and those new feelings... Those beautiful feelings ...

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya
Ho...


When finally he reached a step behibd her and the wind was softly carressing her face ... He took asmall step ahead ... Her feminine fruity scent was pulling him towards her ... He couldnt mantain the control over his body anymore ...

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya
Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu



he slid his one arm on her waist and pulled her into him... Colliding her back ahainst his hard chest ... Making her utter " mrityunjsy " in nervousness... His hand pressed her belly ... Now... Even though his previous intentions were just teasing ... Now... They were changing slightly ... He thought he would back off at this stage. ... But her proximity was driving him crazy ... For hr ... This had to be a dream which would end in few seconds ... Little she did know ... This was real... And ... Mrityunjay had now... Officially lost control on him when with his othher hand slid the rubber band that was holding taras hair in a braid and threw it on the recliner ... He slowly passed his fiingrs in jer hair in order to loosen herrt braid ... But whie doing so... His fingers were touching her back ... But this time the feeling was different ... Not like before when she was day dreaming ... It was something that was making her go crazy ... His fingers were roaming on her skin ( whike he was looseningher braid ) which was exposed due to the dori style of her kurta ...

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa
Main janu naa o..o..
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

When he finally loosen her hair ... he slid the othr hand on her waist and pulled her closer to him... Making her gasp due to the proximity ... He moved all her hair to one side in the front and came closer to her ear ... Until almost his lips touching her ear ... Whispering he said filled with love : " Tara " which came out ofhis mouth without even thinking ... She wsnt in Her senses ... It was like she was underr his spell...


BJis raah pe, hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra
Shayad yahin dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata...

she touched his hand which was now on her belly ... She had surrendered herself to him ... After sayibg her name in her ear he moved down from her neck leavibg a trail of wet hot kisses all the way till he reached her shoulder ... Making her to experience an unknown feeling ... a feeling she had never experienced ... She pressed his hand agaibst her belly ... Now ...for him... There was no looking back ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Ufff ye Tara ki dreams...!!!! 😳
But on a serious note, The update is too much hot and intense!!! ☺️

Tara is totally confused between her dreams and reality...😳

I so loved Mj here...
He knew Tara's feelings and wanted to tease her😳

You wrote the whole scene so beautifully...
Sach mein MriAra and their chemistry!!! ❤️

THE MRIARA MOMENTS...
So beautifully executed Mini...
Superb!!

Update soon...
Eagerly waiting!!!


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Lovely start Mini👏

Kiya intense and romantic dreams hain tara ke
Best lines for them

Mj ko pata hai tara ke dil ki halat
Wah aub tease kerne ka irada hai😳
Again best lines for them👏

Sach mein donon aik dosre ke kareeb hote hain
To yahi hota hai ke
Aeee Dil sambhal ja zara😳😳

Wow Bravo
Kiya khoobsorut likha hai
Dhadkanein bherhane keliye kafi hai
Superb Mini
Splendid and this is really intense and passionate

Per yahan end q kiya
Juldi update kerna
I am waiting and getting very excited😳😳😳

Thank you so much dear.
🤗

Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
thank you best and great work😊 you are a best wrighter 😊 i like your story very much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Superb update Mini ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Tara and dreams 😳
Oh!! kya dreams dekhte hai Tara !!! 😃
The song seemed perfect with the scene 👏
Now she was thinking why she imagined him like this 😆

Now when really MJ had come, Tara trying herself to convince that that was dream 😛
MJ realized the fact and decided to tease her 😳

Your next song selection is also lovely 👏
MJ lost his control 😳
He just immersed in Tara...
And Tara also lost herself...
That was no more teasing

Wow Mini this update was so romantic 😊
You are doing great job 👏

Update soon 😊

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Romantic update😳😳
Tara ka dream bahoot khoobsoorat👏

Mj Tara ko kitna samajhta hai...
Use tease karna chahta hai😆

Tease ke bahane khud ko sambhal nai paya mj😳

Romance or romance wah kya likha hai 👏👏

Kamaal ka update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
I am at loss of words, it was just "HOT". 😳 😳 😳

We missed to see MriAra romancing at this level in to the show and now the FFs are helping us to see them romancing. 😳 😳 😳 Tara is spell bounded and she is unable to think anything else rather than him.😳 😳 😳

MJ thought to tease her as now he is getting hints of having a magical effect on her.☺️
☺️ ☺️ She still thought that she was day dreaming but now he is here.

This was hot and passionate the way you showed MJ's passionate side.😉 😉 😉 I love to see him in this way.


I hope this sequence never ends and I would love to see the next update with more romance.


Continue soon.

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