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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: kumari27
Fantastic lines !!!!

Beautifully written !!!

Every word has deep meaning.

I liked these lines more...

Ghum-E-Dunia Sey Meri Jaan Bacha Lo Muj Ko,
Un Ko Dey Di Hai Ishaaron Mai Ijaazat Main Ney,
Mangney Sey Na Milon To Chura Lo Muj Ko,

English version is also good nira.

Thanks for sharing & hopeful for ur next writing

Thanks Pooja for your lovey comments

I wrote this poem when I was starting a new chapter of my life

soacha hi nahin tha kabhi iss terhan share bhi karongi

Thanks again dear.

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Beautiful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The lines suit ViCha perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

You described the emotions beautifully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The English version is fantastic as well Nira!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The poem is awesome Sam!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Shai for liking

tumhare comments mere liye treasure ke jese hain

Nira ne bhi bohot acha translate kiya

buchi se kam kerwaya meine khoob