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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mere dil se Nikli yeh batein
Apni life ke naye safer ke shuro mein likhi thi
Ajj Vicha Lovers ke naam
Apni Aaghosh Mai Kisi Roaz Chupa Lo Muhj Ko,
Ghum-E-Dunia Sey Meri Jaan Bacha Lo Muj Ko,
Un Ko Dey Di Hai Ishaaron Mai Ijaazat Main Ney,
Mangney Sey Na Milon To Chura Lo Muj Ko,
Apney Saayey Sey Bhi Ab To Mujhey Dar Lagta Hai,
Ho Jo Mumkin To Nigaahon Mein Chupa Lo Mujh Ko,
Dil Mein Naaqaam Tamannaon Ka Tufan Sahi,
Meri Uljhan Meri Wehshat Sey Nikalo Muj Ko,
Un Ko Likhna Hai Kisi Roaz Yeh Khat Mein Jana,
"HUM TO KISI KE BHI NAHIN
APNA BANA LO MUJH KO"
English Version


In your arms, someday, conceal me,
From the sorrow of this universe, my love, salvage me,
I've granted him permission through my gesture,
If I couldn't be yours despite of your wish then steal me,
I'm afraid of my own shadow now.
If it's possible then into your eyes, hide me.
Let there be the storm of unfulfilled wishes in my heart,
From my complexity and my fear unleash me.
I've to write this letter, someday, to him; that I knew now.
I'm not somebody else's
Make me yours.
Special Thanks to my Dearest Nira
English Version credit goes to Our Nira.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
It's so beautiful, though at first I didn't understand some meaning of the words but never mind.
The lines are perfectly suited with ViCha!!
How beautifully you describe all the emotions!!
And the last two lines!!
Just perfect!!
Do write more Sam di
And share with us!!
You are an amazing writer...
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Samreen that is really fantastic. 👏 👏 👏

Just loved both the versions. 😊 😊 😊

English version was fantastic and so as Hindi version. 😉 😉 😉

Please do write more such cute poems.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Marvelous Sam Di 👏
So beautiful lines
English version is also fabulous Nira Di ⭐️
Just loved both versions...😛
Please write and share with us..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic lines !!!!
Beautifully written !!!

Every word has deep meaning.

I liked these lines more...
Ghum-E-Dunia Sey Meri Jaan Bacha Lo Muj Ko,
Un Ko Dey Di Hai Ishaaron Mai Ijaazat Main Ney,
Mangney Sey Na Milon To Chura Lo Muj Ko,

English version is also good nira.

Thanks for sharing & hopeful for ur next writing


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The lines suit ViCha perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

You described the emotions beautifully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The English version is fantastic as well Nira!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The poem is awesome Sam!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏






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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waha Sam di 👏👏👏👏👏

Kitna achha likha hai aapne 😃😃😃😃

mujhe ye bhi use karne ki permission chahiye 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

It's so beautiful, though at first I didn't understand some meaning of the words but never mind.
The lines are perfectly suited with ViCha!!
How beautifully you describe all the emotions!!
And the last two lines!!
Just perfect!!
Do write more Sam di
And share with us!!
You are an amazing writer...

yeah I also love last two lines
"hum to kisi ke bhi aupna bunalo mujhe"
imagine chhavi saying this to Viraf
Thanks for the appreciation
and a big thanks for English version
you are a sweet heart Nira.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Samreen that is really fantastic. 👏 👏 👏

Just loved both the versions. 😊 😊 😊

English version was fantastic and so as Hindi version. 😉 😉 😉

Please do write more such cute poems.

Thanks vartika
tum sab ki wajah se yeh khazana nikala hai maine aupni purani daireis se
I will post more
Nira ki mehnut bhi kamal ki hai
SamreenJ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khadeja

Marvelous Sam Di 👏
So beautiful lines
English version is also fabulous Nira Di ⭐️
Just loved both versions...😛
Please write and share with us..😊

Thanks for liking khadeja
Insha'Allah I will post more

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