*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 6

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poorvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Cute and lovely update Vartika di.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I just loved the name Bak Bak Pandey Viraf gave to Chhavi in the flashback. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The way when he was unaware that she will wish him on his birthday surprised him. 😳 😳 😳 😳

Update fast

kumari27 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Nice amazing update!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
Viraf missing chhuby is beautifully written.πŸ‘
Everyone wished him BT he is waiting for chhavi.πŸ˜‰

Viraf carried chhavi was adorable .
I can visualize that scene.

Here chhavi also in thought of viraf.πŸ˜‰

Finally she did what she has to do long before .
she wishes him.

Phone conversation is cute.πŸ‘πŸΌ

Chhavi feel relaxed when viraf do masti on phone.
I liked how viraf said " love is you ".


Overall it is wonderful updateπŸ€—

varshita thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hey Vartika

lovely update dear,πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Viraf and Chhavi both want to be back in each other's lives and see Chhavi took the step and she wished Viraf on his birthday.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Flashback was cute. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Update soon

Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

⭐️⭐️⭐️Vicha fic ⭐️⭐️⭐️

πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³


⭐️⭐️⭐️Welcome to forum Mahak ⭐️⭐️⭐️


Glad to know u too want Vicha πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Kitne achha din select kiya fic launch ke liye πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Perfect title πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Reality Aur imagination ka achha blend πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Chapter 1

What a start πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

⭐️⭐️⭐️Love is mysterious⭐️⭐️⭐️ ...perfect words to describe how much he wants herπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Aww... He misses her too much. Subha jagna bhi ye dream karte hue ki wo waha hai uske pass

Maza aaya jab Chhavi ne Parchhen se relation ki baat ko inkar kiya πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Aww...chhavi ask him about his love interest ...don't break your heart😊😊😊😊

Sapna bhi uska , baate bhi uskiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Kya karega viraf break up news janke!!!😲😲😲

Kitne questions ke saath end kiya hai first part😊😊😊


Thank you for starting this fic πŸ˜ƒ

πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Chapter 2:

Aha. ..second update smile πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Again what a start!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Breakup ki news sunn , Viraf ka dil too garden garden ho gayaπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

I too loved that temple scene in EBI


He is so much in love with her that his friend can seeπŸ˜ƒ but Chhavi ko nahi dikhta

Chhavi bechari iss Parchhen😑😑😑 ki wajah se pareshan hai


Omg!!! 😲😲😲Uski sisters bhi viraf ki dewani hai !!!😳😳

In case shaadi ho gayi Vicha ki (which I want to be trueπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ) too chhavi ko ghar mein bhi apne pati ko ladkiyo se bachana hoga πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Chhavi ki family Parchhen ko leke kafi serious hai 😲😲😲

Thank god she cleared about him to his familyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Waah😊 Nadia great work woman πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Chhavi se video ki info nikalvane ka kya idea socha hai clapπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜‰

Perfect song, RJ Neil is greatπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Nadia is doing work πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks for writing this fic

πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

wonderful update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

He loves her so much . naam lene ki zarurat nahi sirf zaikar kar doo aur wo pehchan lega πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Jab tak hain jaan ki peom ke saath flash back ...awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

carrying her in his arm

kissing on her forehead

dancing in rain

awesomeπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

He is so lucky to have such great friends and such a lovely family πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Chhavi ka flashback ...

Finally she called him πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

Love their talk πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Hayee...kitni baar bol chuka hai apna haal-e-dil Viraf, Chhavi samjhti kyu nahi


What an ending of chapter ...lovely πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

You are mixing real events with imagination perfectly πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Keep writing πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for writing ViCha

πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Archi21

⭐️⭐️⭐️Vicha fic ⭐️⭐️⭐️

πŸ₯³


⭐️⭐️⭐️Welcome to forum Mahak ⭐️⭐️⭐️

thank u dear it's my pleasure to be here with you all ViCha lovers. πŸ€—πŸ€—


Glad to know u too want Vicha πŸ˜ƒ

😊 😊 😊

Kitne achha din select kiya fic launch ke liye πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I have chosen that day because EBI is related to Janmashthmi somewhere. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Perfect title πŸ‘πŸΌ

thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Reality Aur imagination ka achha blend πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I am happy that you liked my work.😊 😊 😊


Chapter 1

What a start πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

⭐️⭐️⭐️Love is mysterious⭐️⭐️⭐️ ...perfect words to describe how much he wants herπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

That's why he gave that interview.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰


Aww... He misses her too much. Subha jagna bhi ye dream karte hue ki wo waha hai uske pass

Dreams me dekha tabhi to ek aise news aane waali thi and kehte hain na ki morning ka dream sach ho jata hai. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Maza aaya jab Chhavi ne Parchhen se relation ki baat ko inkar kiya πŸ˜ƒ

She should have been ye Pracheen hai hi bada chipkoo type. 😑 😑 😑


Aww...chhavi ask him about his love interest ...don't break your heart😊

Sapna bhi uska , baate bhi uskiπŸ˜‰

Aur us k baad kahegi ki kuch hai hi nahi dono me. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Kya karega viraf break up news janke!!!😲😲😲

Kitne questions ke saath end kiya hai first part😊😊😊

Jin k answers tum ko part two me I hope mil hi gaye honge na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰


Thank you for starting this fic πŸ˜ƒ

πŸ€—



You are welcome and it was dream as well that's why I started that fic.


I am happy that you liked my effort. 😊 😊 😊

Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Archi21

Chapter 2:

Aha. ..second update smile πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Again what a start!!! πŸ˜ƒ

thanks again sweetheart πŸ€—

Breakup ki news sunn , Viraf ka dil too garden garden ho gayaπŸ˜†

Humara bhi hua tha na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I too loved that temple scene in EBI

We all loved that and the song which was used there was fantastic. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

He is so much in love with her that his friend can seeπŸ˜ƒ but Chhavi ko nahi dikhta

Dikhega ab mai dikhaoongi us ko. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰


Chhavi bechari iss Parchhen😑😑😑 ki wajah se pareshan hai

She actually wants to kill him now. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›


Omg!!! 😲😲😲Uski sisters bhi viraf ki dewani hai !!!😳😳

In case shaadi ho gayi Vicha ki (which I want to be trueπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ) too chhavi ko ghar mein bhi apne pati ko ladkiyo se bachana hoga πŸ˜‰

Ab vo hai hi aisa charmer. Kis kis se bachaye bechari Chhavi Viraf ko.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›


Chhavi ki family Parchhen ko leke kafi serious hai 😲😲😲

Thank god she cleared about him to his familyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Haan varna pata chalta affair and break up jaise hi apni shaadi ki news bhi us ko SBS se hi milte. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Waah😊 Nadia great work woman πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Chhavi se video ki info nikalvane ka kya idea socha hai clapπŸ˜‰

Tabhi to vo best reporter hai na humare liye. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Perfect song, RJ Neil is greatπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Nadia is doing work πŸ‘πŸΌ

Yup all was perfect for the situation.😊 😊 😊


Thanks for writing this fic

πŸ€—



my pleasure sweety and thanks for appreciating my work.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Good that Viraf went to New York and had a great time with his friends!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³
Yup he should have been as he can relax his mind now. 😊 😊 😊

Freddy and Viraf's convo is too good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Freddy doesn't take her name but as expected Viraf said Chhavi!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Yes Freddy only he can call her Chubby!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes just he has all the rights over it.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ He is so smart he has just Chhavi in his mind.

Thank you so much for putting in the bike sequence with the Jab Tak Hai Jaan poem!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

The bike ride scene was simply fabulous!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The flashback scenes were perfectly matched with the lines and his suppressed pain and intensity of his love were shown very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank u and I am happy that you liked my effort. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

The surprise by his friends is very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

His nieces wishing him was adorable and he has a lovely family!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Itne accha Kaka hai un ka than it's sure that they will love him na?

The flashback of the coffee scene was super cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was so apt seeing their height difference!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Yeah, his naughty mind always have a thought to take advantage.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kya mehman nawazi hai that she asked him to make the coffee and Viraf aptly called her Lazy Pandey!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

I loved it when he lifted her up and then he said he can keep carrying her his whole life!!!!
Aise hi mehman nawazi sab ko karni chahiye.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Viraf couldn't believe that Chhavi called him and in this confusion didn't pick up the phone the first time!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Their awkwardness was apparent but then they became friends again!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Jo cheej itne dino se tooti ho us ko jodna is not that easy but it's Viraf's love for her which make him do that. 😳 😳 😳

Baat karte karte she forgot why she had called him in the first place!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

I loved the name Viraf gave her Bak Bak Pandey!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
He always give him some nick names.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

He keeps giving her so many hints but when will she understand his haal-e-dil??
But she doesn't get it that easily.πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

I am feeling so emotional that finally they are talking to each other again!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

This part is fantastic!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

thank u sweetheart so much for such lovely comment. πŸ€—
πŸ€— πŸ€—





Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Superb Update ⭐️
thanks dear
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Viraf ke dimaag mai serf Chhavi e rahta hai
Sach me just like us, humare dimag me bhi bus ViCha jo rehta hai.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Freddy didn't tell fully, he guessed who is the person πŸ˜ƒ
Then tell only he has the right of calling her Chubby 😳
Freddy is such a lovely friend.
Obviously, Viraf ka dimag Chhavi k matter pe daud jata hai.πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

In his birthday he was waiting for her wish and remember those memory 😊
We also wanted her to wish him na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Actually the flashbacks make me emotional 😭
They spent such beautiful time together
Now we can just had memories of that.

BUT the poetry with flashback is fantastic πŸ‘
I love this poem in SRK voice 😳 but i am sure in Viraf's voice it will suit too πŸ˜›
Thanks a lot dear.😊 😊 😊

It is so sweet his niece wished him in late night 😊
Chhavi's flashback is so romantic
thanks 😊 😊 😊

Viraf didn't believe she phoned him πŸ˜†
That's why he could not pick the phone at first. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

First the awkwardness then gradually talking friendly, i just love it πŸ˜›
Yes, the big gift for her is he himself coming for her 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
Aur kya is se bada gift kya ho sakta hai? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Bat karte karte Chhavi bhul gayi why she phoned πŸ˜†
Viraf ke saath baat karne ka assar πŸ˜‰
Hum bhi us discussion ko karte karte flow me beh jate hain na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

The whole conversation is lovely.

You are doing a great job so, keep writing and updating πŸ˜ƒ



Thank u dear for liking my work. πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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