*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 7

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Vartika

lovely update dear,👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks dear 🤗

Viraf and Chhavi both want to be back in each other's lives and see Chhavi took the step and she wished Viraf on his birthday.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
that was cool. Now it's Viraf's turn 😉 😉 😉

Flashback was cute. 😉
thank u 😊 😊 😊

Update soon

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Fantastic update!!!!👏 👏 👏
thanks 🤗

Viraf always think about Chhavi whether it is with conscious mind or subconscious mind!!!!😃 😃 😃
Haan aaj kal us k dimag me aur kuch rehta hi nahi hai 😉 😉 😉

I loved Freddy-Viraf convo!!!

Loved the way he said 'Only I can call her Chubby"😳 😳 😳
Ye naam us ne hi diya hai na aur koi kaise keh sakta hai ye? 😛 😛 😛

The coffee scene...so sweet!!!!
The bike-ride scene , just perfectly written with the perfect song, the suppressed pain and intensity of his love were mixed perfectly...well done!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
thank u so much dear 🤗

The phone conversation...very nicely written!!

Their awkwardness and then gradually becoming friendly again...superb!!!
Yes that's why Viraf ko pehle believe hi nahi ho raha tha ki she called him. 😆 😆 😆 😆

There were such specific scenes in the story which was so beautiful that it made me too emotional; specially all the flashback scenes...just outstanding!!

Frankly, I was on the verge of crying!!! It was so emotional!!!!
Thank u dear it means my efforts gone fruitful. 😳 😳 😳

You are writing the whole thing in a brilliant way, putting every piece perfectly!!!!

Keep writing!!

Do update soon!!!

Originally posted by: poorvi16

Cute and lovely update Vartika di.. 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanks a lot Poorvi 🤗🤗

I just loved the name Bak Bak Pandey Viraf gave to Chhavi in the flashback. 😆 😆 😆 😆
I too loved that. 😉 😉 😉

The way when he was unaware that she will wish him on his birthday surprised him. 😳 😳 😳 😳
That is indeed surprising. 😳 😳 😳

Update fast

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice amazing update!!!!👍🏼
thanks once again dear 😊 😊 😊

Viraf missing chhuby is beautifully written.👏

Everyone wished him BT he is waiting for chhavi.😉
Obviously, we always for the person to whom we love the most.

Viraf carried chhavi was adorable .

I can visualize that scene.
thanks that u loved it.😉 😉 😉

Here chhavi also in thought of viraf.😉
Us ko koi bhool sakta hai kya?

Finally she did what she has to do long before .

she wishes him.
The most appreciating step she did. 😊 😊 😊

Phone conversation is cute.👍🏼

Chhavi feel relaxed when viraf do masti on phone.
She forget everything. 😉 😉 😉

I liked how viraf said " love is you ".

He never leaves a chance to flirt with her. 😳 😳 😳

Overall it is wonderful update🤗

Originally posted by: Archi21

wonderful update 👏

thank u so much 🤗

He loves her so much . naam lene ki zarurat nahi sirf zaikar kar doo aur wo pehchan lega 😃😃😃

ye to hai 😉 😉 😉

Jab tak hain jaan ki poem ke saath flash back ...awesome👏

Thank u 😊 😊 😊

carrying her in his arm

kissing on her forehead

dancing in rain

awesome😃

their chemistry is always so romantic.

He is so lucky to have such great friends and such a lovely family 😃

Any would be. 😃 😃 😃

Chhavi ka flashback ...

Finally she called him 🥳

The best thing she did.😉 😉 😉

Love their talk 👏

Hayee...kitni baar bol chuka hai apna haal-e-dil Viraf, Chhavi samjhti kyu nahi

Par ye buddhu Chhavi samjahti hi nahi.😛 😛 😛

What an ending of chapter ...lovely 👏

You are mixing real events with imagination perfectly 👏

I am trying my best at my level. 😳 😳 😳

Keep writing 😃😃😃

Thanks for writing ViCha

🤗

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey dear amazing update👏. So cute and lovely.😊
thank u so much dear 😊 😊 😊

I just loved the song you used of Jab Tak Hai Jaan very smartly.😉 It''s one of my favorite. 😃
Thank u that u liked my work. 😳 😳 😳

Finally the ice broke and she called him and wished him on his birthday making it very special for him. He will be much more happier to see her call that's why he couldn't believe that she is calling him.😆
That's what make it unbelievable for him but now his dream come true.

She know each and everything about him that he is in States this time.😉
Bus dikhati aise hai jaise she doesn't know anything about him. 😆 😆 😆

It was just a fabulous flashback where he makes coffee for her and lift her up in his arms so sweet.😳 I wish it happen in real life as well.
I too wished it.

Update fast dear.

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

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Superb and Fantastic update Vartika
thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

Viraf ko Chhavi ke siwa koye dikhta hi nahin 😳😳

Kaise sochega? 😉 😉 😉

Kitna intezar hai usko chaavi ke call ka😛
Hota hai na, jis se hum pyar karte hain us k call ka wait hota hi hai.

Freddy aur Viraf ki dosti aik dam superb👍🏼
The best friends forever 😊 😊 😊

Love coffee scene... it makes me romantic☺️❤️☺️

Beautiful lines you have chosen 👏
thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Finally Chhavi ne call kiya per viraf ki baton mein kho gayi aur bhool gayi ke

call ka reason kiya tha

"UFF YEH TERI BATON MEIN KHO SA JANA

YOUN MUDHOSH HOKE SAB BHOOL SA JANA"

☺️
Lovely lines, beautiful creation.👏 👏 👏 I am fan of your poetry.

Uff Viraf ka khena "LOVE IS YOU"

Beautiful and lovely
Kya kare vo bhi aadat se majboor hai.😆 😆 😆 He never stops himself flirting with her.😉 😉 😉

you are doing a great job dost👏👏👏
thank u 😃 😃 😃

Keep writing !

Originally posted by: arpita25

Lovely update Vartika dear.👏 I just loved the whole part.
A big thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Specially Jab Tak Hai Jaan poetry and the scenes you used here.😉 This was perfect for the situation. 👍🏼
thank u once again 😃 😃 😃

Chhavi called Viraf and he was unable to believe that she called him.😉
That was a big surprising thing for him. 😛 😛 😛

I am happy that ice between them has started breaking and I am sure soon they will move in to next level of relationship.
Sure they will be.😊 😊 😊

Their telephonic conversation was cute and lovely. ☺️ I loved the way he flirted with her.😉
The best thing he does which I love in him the most.😳 😳 😳

Do continue soon.