MriAra FF: *||YEH BAIR ISHQ||* Part-12 {Updated Pg-22}

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Posted: 10 years ago
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~:AUTHOR'S NOTE:~

Hello EBIans, 😃

First of all, thank you everyone out there for reading my SS "Another Spring" & for appreciating it. But to write something on MriAra has always been a dream for me, but I neither found any good concept nor did I get time or energy to do this. But when I got to know this story from Shaina, I didn't feel that I should really write this, but we discussed and as usual had some fights regarding this. And basically she narrated this story to me & it was quite interesting, but the main problem was she stopped it abruptly and told me that from now on I have to proceed with it. This step of hers was a really dangerous one because I personally think to write something on MriAra is a very, very difficult thing as a writer, one has to portray the passion through her storytelling, and we are all aware about the level of chemistry between them. So I was confused, shocked and frightened as I really don't know how to develop it further, though the next day I told her a small piece which I wrote. And to my surprise, she liked it. But then something happened which I don't want to share here & I stopped writing & started avoiding the story as well as her. But then one fine morning I realized that I should have written the story. And as my exams had finished and I had a lot of leisure time on my hands, I decided to write it. And thus our discussion started again and I agreed finally to work on this seriously, she helped me a lot and after so much editing, cross checking, discussing, I think I developed something. She insisted on it, she pushed me & that is the very reason that I'm here with this. Hence, I am presenting a tale of two different people from two different worlds. Where love is bound by hatred; where love is a rough ground rather than any dream, a tale of sweet-bitter joy, grief, pain, regret, conflict & a deep secret, a horrible tragedy which comes inevitably with it---So, let's see how the profoundly unbearable pleasure & dark passion intertwined in this story unfolds...!

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~Character Sketch~

:~Family Of Shekhawat's:~

Thakur Jairaj Singh Shekhawat:{Rakesh Kukreti}: A notable personality from Bhopal. He has a big business and a family with two sons, in-laws and memories of his dead wife. An ever supportive father. A little partial towards his elder son.

Nirmala Singh Shekhawat:{Gauri Tonk}: Dead wife of Jairaj; though she has gone but there is some mystery and conspiracy related to her.

Maya Singhania (Nani): {Madhu Raja}: Devastated after Nirmala's death she & her husband they started living with Jairaj. Nani is a total couch potato; her world revolves around the idiot box.

Rajnath Singhania (Nana): {Sushil Prashar}: He is a timid & quite person.


Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat: {Viraf Patel}: The elder son of Jairaj. He is also known as Mr. Perfect, he is egoistic but a good soul. All he wants is to help his father in his business, a punctual person.

Aditya Singh Shekhawat:{Dishank Arora}: The younger one. Truly a spoilt brat. He does nothing except spending time with friends.

Rudra Pratap Singh Shekhawat: {Vishwajit Pradhan}: Elder cousin brother of Jairaj. He lives abroad for the last ten years. He has some past connection with Jairaj's family.


:~Family Of Raichand's:~

Gauri Raichand: {Gauri Tejwani}: She is a business-women, has a business partnership with Thakur family. She is strong, modern, and smart and has a practical approach towards life. She is a widow, and leads a small and happy family with one son, daughter-in-law, and one brother-in-law. Have a good relationship with Tara and her dad.

Pratham Raichand: {Hiten Tejwani}: Dead husband of Gauri. They were much in love when he was alive.

Aman Raichand: {Darshan Pandya}: Gauri's brother-in-law. The ever supportive one, he is like a fatherly figure in the house. He had an arranged marriage when he was younger but due to some issues they separated within a year. But now he is in a relationship with a girl from the last few years and is going to marry her.

Sameer Raichand: {Samir Sharma}: Gauri's only son, undoubtedly a good son, very supportive and a calm guy.

Rashi Raichand:{Mrinalini Tyagi}: She was Tara's neighbour since her childhood. They almost shared a sisterly bond. A lawyer by profession and she got married to Sameer. She is modern and understanding and a good soul.

Ragini Sharma:{Rakhshanda Khan}: Amar's would-be wife. She is a painter by profession. Independent, successful and a glamorous woman.


:~Family Of Shukla's:~

Govind Shukla:{Shahab Khan}: A middle class man who leads a simple life. A reserved person. He has a small family with only one daughter. Though he supports his daughter in everything, but he has some dark past regarding him and Thakur family, which he always tries to keep in secret.

Tara Shukla:{Chhavi Pandey}: Daughter of Govind, free-spirited and dare-devil girl she is. A little matured, she completed her studies. An utterly good daughter and can do anything for her daddy dearest.

Seher Siddiqui: {Pankhuri Awasthi}: Tara's childhood friend. A timid and shy one. Dependent on Tara. Fun loving and a girl with a golden heart.


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~:INDEX:~


:~ Prologue :~

* Part - 1 {The shadow of the past} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=3


* Part -2 {Denying the inevitable} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=4


* Part - 3 {Almost not quite} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=6


* Part - 4 {Of late meetings & other things} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=8


*part - 5 {The necklace} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=10


* Part - 6 {An unexpected encounter} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/4426346/mriara-ff-yeh-bair-ishq-part-12-updated-pg-22?pn=11


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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~:PROLOGUE:~

10 years ago , on a stormy night.
The Little cabin was overcast in chiaroscuro; a small candle was burning dimly. Though one couldn't hear the sound of the rain from the room, but the slush of the thunderbolt was making the room light up in a sudden way in every so often.

"Aapne mere saath itna bada dhoka kiya?"
In every corner of silence, the ireful voice echoed in an unnatural way. The candle which was on the desk, trembled once.
"Kya mila aapko ye sab karke?" The voice became dense. The frame of a man flashed once in that silhouette through the lightening. An opaque shadow turned forth from the window, came to the front and sat on the chair.
"Dhoka???..." The sonorous voice pierced the tranquility of the room.
"Kyun? Nahi diya? Un logon ka bharosa tod diya apne, saath mein mera bhi... " The voice raised with the auditory sensation of another thunderbolt.
"Bharosa apno pe kiya jata hai...nahi mein unka apna hoon...aur nahi woh mera..." The extremely cold voice sounded overcast in that intangible darkness.
"Ek baat yaad rakhiye waqt ko badalne mein waqt nahi lagta..." The shadow stopped ahead,
"Yeh baat sahi kaha tumne...waqt...mutthi bhar ka saath deta hai...mutthi mein hai toh sab hai...mutthi khola toh kuch bhi nahi...sivai andhero ke..." And at the next moment a firm hand was placed over the flame of the candle and the room was engrossed in the celestial dark of the stillness.




Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW !!! A new MRIARA FF ...😊
Thanks to Shaina , she insisted you to write this FF.
Yes , it is difficult to write on Mriara.
But we all know you are an excellent writer 😊
I am sure this is going to become a wonderful FF.
Character Sketch is very attractive 👏
Prologue is intersting...
I am eagerly waiting for next update 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏👏 👏 Intrigued from the head to the toe!! awesome start Niru looking forward to this FF. Update soon.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful character sketch is beautiful update soon waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow what a perfect character sketch !!!!!
Prologue is too good & have depth .

Good work

Keep it up dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A really powerful start! Keen to see what happens next! 😃 👏
I love the banner btw! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Splendid
👏 👏 👏

Kiya start kiya hai
Kuch raaz hai kuch dhoka
Lovely Niru
Tussi cha gaye ho ji
Saba mam ko tweet kerdo kw humare pass plots aur scripts ki kami hi koye nahin
Vicha aka mraira humein her haal mein ache lugte hain 😛
Well intezar hai update karo juldi.

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