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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8


"Sir those packets..." Viraf and Chhavi were still holding each other, but the sudden voice of the boy came as a jolt. Startled, she released herself from his hold. Viraf looked at the doorstep. The boy was getting more and more uncomfortable. He was in a situation from where neither could he run away nor could he say anything.
Viraf hawked a little to restrain himself.
"What happened?" he asked at last.
"Nothing important...I'll come later." And he left in a hurry.
After he left, Viraf turned to Chhavi, she was putting on lip gloss. He came closer to her and circled her waist.
"Viraf leave me...I've to go..." Chhavi said removing his hands.
"But you've just come..." he pronounced in a surprised tone.
"What?!" She turned forth, "I came at noon and it's almost evening..." She shook her head and took her bag from the table. She was about to depart, but stopped suddenly and turned.
"Viraf..." She gulped her uneasiness, "I'm going to meet Parth today."
"What...why?" A sudden reaction from him was expected but Chhavi remained calm, he came forth and placed his hand softly on her shoulder.
"Because now I want to stop this matter for forever..." she said looking at his eyes.
"Ok...I am going with you, " he stated firmly.
Though he didn't know Parth personally, yet he wanted to go with her.
"Viraf I can handle it...I know you will be tensed, but still keep faith in me..." Her calm voice rose up.
"Chhavi try to understand, it's not about faith...it's about him...he is not going to forget you easily and he can do anything with you...he can insult you and..." But he stopped looking at her as she was staring at him with goggling eyes.
"What?" He made a gesture with his hands. Chhavi giggled.
"Why are you laughing?" he asked. His voice was earnest.
"You look so cute when you protect me like this..." she said in a childish way.
Viraf couldn't understand whether he should smile or not, "Chhavi I'm speaking about a serious thing and you are..."
"Nothing will happen to me..." She moved around and walked towards the doorway, but halted there abruptly and with pacing steps came back where Viraf was standing. Gazing into his eyes, she tiptoed and kissed him on his cheeks.
"I love you."
Viraf was not fully convinced by her, but as she wanted to go all alone, he had to agree. Staring at her cute face for a moment he smiled and said,"I love you too."
"Bye..." Chhavi smiled and exited.

Chhavi entered the coffee shop and looked for Parth. A severe smell of coffee beans enveloped her. People were sitting on the chairs and the couches. Small fairy lights were hanging from the ceiling and a mild music was playing in the background. She saw Parth sitting in a corner table. Chhavi took a deep breath and went towards him.
"Hi..." Chhavi said. Parth looked at her a smile playing along his lips.
"Hello..." He put his phone on the table and gestured her to sit.
"How long?" Chhavi asked while sitting there.
"Five minutes...so tell me why you wanted to meet me?" Parth stooped ahead. "Our marriage is almost fixed and..." he gradually extended his hands and placed it onto hers. A certain sense of irritation covered her.
"Parth..." Chhavi removed her hands in a moment. "I can't marry you..." her firm voice stated.
Parth frowned for a second and then burst into laughter. Chhavi became confused seeing him laughing like this.
"Oh God! You called me here for this? For making me laugh at your jokes?" He attempted to control his laughter.
"I am serious Parth...I can't marry you because I love someone else..." she pronounced in one breath.
Parth's smile was gone by now, Chhavi's extremely cold eyes were set on him. He couldn't believe his own ears. A girl was rejecting him and that was something he couldn't stand.
"Who is he?" His eerie voice gave her a jitter.
"That's none of your business." She replied, holding on her voice as firmly as possible, Parth's lips curved into a grin.
"Everything is my business sweetheart...never mind, but if you are rejecting me there might be a valid reason for this. I just desire to know that reason!"
"Parth I was habituated with you, not in love with you...you know. Since two years we were together, but why I never felt any attraction or connection towards you? Because you are fake." She pointed at him, "Your thoughts, your dreams everything is artificial...and since two years in spite of being together, you couldn't make me fall in love with you..." She ceased to take a breath.
"Nice!!!!" He was incumbent on the chair. "I don't have any problem...go live your life the way you want." He folded his hands.
Chhavi was looking at him as his behaviour was not feeding her a good vibe. He was exceedingly calm. An unknown fear engulfed her.

"Put those packets aside and combine this oil with this liquid..." Viraf pointed towards a vial. The boy was arranging the components. Viraf gave him some instruction and sat on the chair. Yesterday his mother told him to call his elder brother. He could understand his mother's viewpoint, yet maintaining a relationship with a person who never ever felt any responsibility towards them always gave him grouse. Viraf searched the call log for his brother's number when he heard his worker's voice.

"Sir, can I say something?"
"Hmm..." Viraf said without looking at him.
"You both look perfect together." He replied with a grin.
Viraf stared at him and couldn't stop himself from smiling, but at the next moment he restrained himself and asked him, "Are you done with your work?"
He nodded yes.
Viraf concentrated on his phone and dialed his brother's number. After two rings, he heard a "Hello" from the other side.
"Bhai...how are you?" He was finding words to say, as he was speaking with him after ages.
"Arre Viraf...how are you and Ma?" It seemed he too was not comfortable speaking with him.
"We are good...actually Ma wanted to meet you...if you don't have any problem..."
"No...not at all...Do one thing, send Ma here. It would be nice if I can spend some days with her..."
"Ohhh...isn't it a big chance for removing all the guilt from your heart?...You always wanted to live a life on your own terms and today you want to spend some days with Ma?" His lips curved in a slight grin.
"Why are you speaking like this? She is my mother too..." he attempted to give him some explanation.
"I don't know...but you didn't seem happy with us either..." Viraf smiled slightly.
"See that was not the reason. You are misunderstanding me... I wanted a good life so that I can take care of you both..."
"Oh Bhai, now please don't make me start...see, you have left us for whatever reason that is in the past now and I don't want to talk about it...It's only for Ma...ok I'll talk to her and let you know." And he cut the call instantly. Some past memories became visible in front of his eyes, when he left them, when Viraf had to quit his job to take care of his mother, his brother's indifferent behavior towards them...
His brother always tried to find his own profit over emotions and today as well when he found some simple way to remove his years old guilt, he didn't think twice. Viraf shook his head. Some people never change.

"Hey Parth..." Parth and Chhavi both turned their head at once at the source of the sound. Priya and Tushar were standing there. Priya was literally glistening with happiness.
"Hi Chhavi...Coffee date, ha?!" Priya said winking at her.


Chhavi looked at Parth and then with a smile asked her instead,
"Nothing like that Priya . how are you?"
"I'm good...listen I have something very important to tell you both. Actually we are throwing a party day after tomorrow, and it is a private party...only with close friends...and you both are invited..." Priya stated looking at Parth.
"Yes...of course we'll come..." Parth replied.
"Priya...I..." But Chhavi confronted a strong obstruction as Priya shook her head.
"No, no Chhavi I don't want to hear any no, can't, what, if... You have to come...and it will be a whole night celebration...So please manage Aunty..." Chhavi smiled and nodded.
"Come join us..." Parth said, looking at Tushar.
"No Parth today we have to go. Some shopping is still left... And don't forget, you both are coming...bye." Tushar reminded them once more before leaving the place.
"Bye Chhavi..." They shared a hug and Priya left with Tushar.
"Parth..." After they left, Chhavi turned towards Parth. "I don't think there is much left to say. I made myself clear and I hope you understood what I said..." She stood up from the chair. "Ohhh...I forgot one thing." Parth looked at her with curious eyes. Chhavi removed her engagement ring from her finger and put it on the table.
"Bye..." And she left.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Fantastic Update Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

They were still holding each other 😳
Oho !! the boy...
He was also in a difficult situation 😆
Viraf didn't want let her to go 😉
Chhavi wanted to meet Parth, it was necessary to clear all things 👍🏼
But Viraf is worried about her and wanted go with her 😛
That was obvious 😊
Chhavi likes him to protected about her 😉
Who doesn't want 😊
Chhavi's kiss was cute 😳

I like how Chhavi clearly said she can't marry 👍🏼
And loves someone else 😛
Chhavi is right, Parth just in one word is selfish.
And Chhavi is not loves him so why she will marry...
Surprisingly he was calm.
I don't think he will leave Chhavi so easily

The boy is right 'they look perfect together' 😃
Viraf was happy 😉
But after all he is boss, he can't express himself 😆
Viraf's bro didn't care about them now telling he wants to live sometime with ma.
Just spending sometime will not remove all guilt 👎🏼
Viraf's Mom should forget him...

Oh !! Priya and Tushar also have come.
How can Parth promise on behalf of Chhavi 😵
Chhavi stated herself clear and wanted to leave.
Before leaving she gave back the ring 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

This part was superb 👏
I am waiting for next part 😉 😃

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
thanks for showing so much patience with me. 😆 😆 😆

Nice update 👏 👏 👏 but I am not sure about the last part whether it will turn out to be positive or negative. 😕 😕 😕

Loved the first part where both of them caught red handed romancing and his subordinate gave his opinion that they look good together. 😳 😳 😳

His brother is really selfish and careless just like our many relatives who behave fake but we have to bear them many times but when it comes to your real brother it's so...frustrating. 😡 😡 😡

Jis tarah se ye madam Chhavi akele pahuch gayi hai Parth k pass. The way he is treating all this very coolly giving me doubts that he has some dangerous plans. 😒
😒 😒

Now Chhavi's friend has invited them and I am really confused how Chhavi's mom gonna react with this piece of news. 😕 😕 😕

Viraf was right she should not have gone alone.
Don't make it dangerous and yeah we love protective and jealous Viraf.😉 😉 😉

Continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Another Update
🤗🤗
Interruption
I hate interruptions re😈

But beechare ki halat dheeli thi
Hahaha😆😆
Kato to khoon nahin

Inni dair ki kissi thi
Inni dair tak holding each other
Noon se evening hogaya
Baap re baap
Aub mera gutter mind chalo hogana😉 Nira

Chhavi ka parth se milna bhi to important hai to jana to purega
But viraf is worried

Awww humein bhi viraf cute lugta hai
In the way he protect her
Lovely lovely sa❤️❤️

Oye chhavi ki kissi viffi ko
Mein mar jawan
🥳❤️🤗
Chalo love u love u to hogaya ache se

Chhavi was superb 👍🏼
She gave him direct reasons
But parth kuch to karega
That's y he was calm
😡
That interrupted boy
he was right they look good together
Clap for him
👏👏👏

Viraf wants to fulfill his mother wish and call His brother
But don't like his brother at all😕
So selfish 😡 he is

Priya and tushar ki party
Kiya chhavi wahan jayegi❓
Yeh dekhna hai aub

Finally chhavi ne ring bhi wapis kerdiya👏👍🏼
Very very good

Awesome update
I love it
Nicely written Nira.

🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Another Update
🤗🤗
Thank you Di...😃
Interruption
I hate interruptions re😈
I know Di...😆
But what to do...
But beechare ki halat dheeli thi
Hahaha😆😆
Kato to khoon nahin
😆 😆
Inni dair ki kissi thi
Inni dair tak holding each other
Noon se evening hogaya
Baap re baap
Aub mera gutter mind chalo hogana😉 Nira
Waise mei toh ap logon ka gutter mind chalu karne keliye hi likhti hun...😉 😆
Chhavi ka parth se milna bhi to important hai to jana to purega
But viraf is worried
yes...Parth pe kaun bharosa karega!!!😕
Awww humein bhi viraf cute lugta hai
In the way he protect her
Lovely lovely sa❤️❤️
I know!!!! ❤️
Oye chhavi ki kissi viffi ko
Mein mar jawan

Chalo love u love u to hogaya ache se
Ap kitni khush ho... 😳
Chhavi was superb 👍🏼
She gave him direct reasons
But parth kuch to karega
That's y he was calm
😡
That interrupted boy
he was right they look good together
Clap for him
👏👏👏
mere taraf se bhi...👏
Viraf wants to fulfill his mother wish and call His brother
But don't like his brother at all😕
So selfish 😡 he is
true!!!! 🤢
Priya and tushar ki party
Kiya chhavi wahan jayegi❓
Yeh dekhna hai aub
😃
Finally chhavi ne ring bhi wapis kerdiya👏👍🏼
Very very good
Karna hi tha...kisi aur ne pehnayega nah!!! 😉
Awesome update
I love it
Nicely written Nira.

🤗🤗🤗



Thank you so much Di...🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Fantastic update!!!!!!
Superb star with viraf & chhavi so long eye lock scene!!!!!

BT yeh entry uske liye awkward aur hamare liye kabab me haddi...

Chhavi kitne samay se viraf me sath hai BT uska dill abhi bahara nai...

Parth phir dono me beech...

Viraf ka tension Lena sahi hai BT viraf chhavi ka confidence hai ...& himmat dono

Chhavi handled virafs insecurity very well...

Boy was right they r made for each other...

I like how chhavi told parth in one go that she love someone...

Expression. Parth ka imagine karne layak hai...

Party me kuchh hoga toh nai...
Darr hai achanak party...

So chapter was fab...
Waiting for next...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khadeja

Fantastic Update Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thank you so much!!! 😳
They were still holding each other 😳
Oho !! the boy...
He was also in a difficult situation 😆
Viraf didn't want let her to go 😉
Chhavi wanted to meet Parth, it was necessary to clear all things 👍🏼
But Viraf is worried about her and wanted go with her 😛
That was obvious 😊
Chhavi likes him to protected about her 😉
Who doesn't want 😊
Chhavi's kiss was cute 😳

I like how Chhavi clearly said she can't marry 👍🏼
And loves someone else 😛
Chhavi is right, Parth just in one word is selfish.
And Chhavi is not loves him so why she will marry...
Surprisingly he was calm.
I don't think he will leave Chhavi so easily
yes Parth is selfish and dangerous too!!!
The boy is right 'they look perfect together' 😃
Viraf was happy 😉
But after all he is boss, he can't express himself 😆
Viraf's bro didn't care about them now telling he wants to live sometime with ma.
Just spending sometime will not remove all guilt 👎🏼
Viraf's Mom should forget him...
yes...but she is his mother!!!

Oh !! Priya and Tushar also have come.
How can Parth promise on behalf of Chhavi 😵
Chhavi stated herself clear and wanted to leave.
Before leaving she gave back the ring 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Because Parth is like that... 🤬 type!!!
This part was superb 👏
I am waiting for next part 😉 😃


Thank you so much khadeja for your comments!!! 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kumari27

Fantastic update!!!!!!

Superb star with viraf & chhavi so long eye lock scene!!!!!

BT yeh entry uske liye awkward aur hamare liye kabab me haddi...
Sach mein... 😆
Chhavi kitne samay se viraf me sath hai BT uska dill abhi bahara nai...
nahi... 😳
Parth phir dono me beech...

Viraf ka tension Lena sahi hai BT viraf chhavi ka confidence hai ...& himmat dono
True!!! 😊
Chhavi handled virafs insecurity very well...
👍🏼
Boy was right they r made for each other...

I like how chhavi told parth in one go that she love someone...
yes...she had to!!! 😊
Expression. Parth ka imagine karne layak hai...

Party me kuchh hoga toh nai...
Darr hai achanak party...
dekhte hai... 😉
So chapter was fab...
Waiting for next...



Thank you pooja!!!!
Will update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

thanks for showing so much patience with me. 😆 😆 😆
It's alright... 😳
Nice update 👏 👏 👏 but I am not sure about the last part whether it will turn out to be positive or negative. 😕 😕 😕
Thank you so much...well let's see!!!!
Loved the first part where both of them caught red handed romancing and his subordinate gave his opinion that they look good together. 😳 😳 😳
😳
His brother is really selfish and careless just like our many relatives who behave fake but we have to bear them many times but when it comes to your real brother it's so...frustrating. 😡 😡 😡
Exactly...
Jis tarah se ye madam Chhavi akele pahuch gayi hai Parth k pass. The way he is treating all this very coolly giving me doubts that he has some dangerous plans. 😒
😒 😒
Parth pe kya hi bharosa hai!!!
Now Chhavi's friend has invited them and I am really confused how Chhavi's mom gonna react with this piece of news. 😕 😕 😕
😆
Viraf was right she should not have gone alone.
Don't make it dangerous and yeah we love protective and jealous Viraf.😉 😉 😉
hahaha...we all love protective and jealous Viraf... 😳
Continue soon.



Thank you for commenting...
Will update soon!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter -9


Chhavi was lying on her bed. She had come back home with kind of mixed emotions. On one side, she was happy that she was free, all problems and impediment regarding Parth was over, but on the other hand Parth's uncanny smile and calm behavior were something she still couldn't get over when she saw a trembling shadow on the door. She tilted a little to see the existence behind this repercussion. There was Shekhar with two cups of coffee in his hands.
"How do you know that I was craving for coffee..." She said while getting up from the bed. Shekhar smiled. She took the cup from his hand. Shekhar sat beside her.

"You know when me and your Ma got married, we were suffering from a very bad patch of life. It was a love marriage, so our family didn't support us. I quit my dream, my theater and joined the office. I did overtime, but when you came and for the first time I took you in my arms, that was a strange feeling as if all my emptiness have covered up." Chhavi was listening to him. It was strange too, Shekhar never shared such deep emotions with her before. They always shared a great bond, but he had never revealed his hidden feelings before.
"That day I decided I will not make any compromise with you; so I never did, and today when you are suffering from so much turmoil, it's my old habit which compelled me to come here and sit beside you." He stopped and looked at her. Chhavi put the cup on the bedside table. She took a deep breath.
"Papa...I was thinking..."
"You are in love with Viraf, aren't you?"

Her words got a hindrance. That was sudden. An instant jerk of truth. Shekhar was still looking at her, she nodded silently.
"Thank God that actually you are not marrying that Parth..." He smiled and sipped his coffee.
"Papa..."
"Yes! I don't like him at all but have you told him about Viraf?"
"Yes...I went to meet him today..."

Shekhar frowned.
"You have sorted out all your problems. Then why are you sitting like this?"
"Papa..."
She placed two fingers in front of him.
"Choose one." She said.
"Chhavi...this trick is only for those decisions which we take on how to end our life, not for how to start..." Chhavi kept her head down.
"You know Ma will never..."
"Your Ma will understand because she did a same thing like you 25 years ago."
He got up from the bed and placed his hand on her head gently.
"Remember one thing, don't make any compromise with your love, not for anybody's sake." Chhavi smiled and nodded.


"I have called him today." Viraf's mother was in the dining hall, watching TV. She decreased the volume and turned to look at the doorstep in an instant, where Viraf was standing.
"What did he say?" She asked, controlling her beaming happiness. Viraf could understand her inner feelings.
"Nothing much..." He sat on the sofa beside her. "He wants you to spend some time with him...to live some days with him." He replied looking at the mute TV.
"And what do you think? Should I go?" She knew that Viraf had a grievance towards him, and it was true that he had done wrong with them but it was also true that he was her son.
"Ma I know I've always said you should forget him. Don't forgive him, but I know you are his mother too, and I can't snatch your love for him, you should go...in fact, you are going..." She caressed his face, he smiled and increased the sound of the TV.


The dinner table was excessively calm today. Chhavi was still figuring out how to approach her mother. She hawked a little before approaching her.
"Ma do you know that Priya has come back from her honeymoon and they are throwing a party for us...her close friends...and it is a whole night affair...and she has invited me."
Urmila's motion of hands stopped.
"You mean you are planning to stay outside this house for the whole night?" Her cold voice stated.
"She is a big girl...and she was there at Priya's wedding before for the whole night." Shekhar said.
"Everybody will be there." She replied.
Urmila pulled the glass closer.

"Parth?" Chhavi and Shekhar exchanged a glance.
"Hmm."
"Go...what else can I say?"
She concentrated on her plate again. Chhavi smiled looking at Shekhar.


She was standing at the balcony. A balmy breeze was blowing making the leaves of the trees rustle. The fragile moonlight filtering through the branches danced over her shoulder. This night was kind of peaceful; though a small anxiety regarding Parth's behavior was covering her thoughts every so often. But she was trying to forget that. Today she went to meet Viraf too, and they shared their first kiss, a moment of bliss. It was abrupt yet inevitable, crazy yet overwhelming. Her thoughts were interrupted by a mechanical sound. She looked at her phone and the glimpse of the caller's name made her smile. But before she could approach him, an anxious voice stated from the other side of the phone.
"Was everything alright? What did he say? Are you..."
"Viraf calm down."
Chhavi said.
"Everything was alright." She tried to mitigate his worry. "Why are you so tensed?" But his voice seemed more flurried.
"Because you didn't call me, not even a text." He stopped for a bit, "What did he say?"
"Nothing."
"What?"
He was surprised.
"Yes, actually he said nothing...he was calm all the time...I told him about you, about us and even I did return him the ring...You know his calmness was frightful...eerie...I thought he will create a scene but..." she stopped.
Viraf was listening to her. Though he didn't know Parth well, but in this situation how could anybody behave so calmly?
"Maybe he just..."
"No Viraf, I know him, I was with him for two years..."

"Can we change the topic?" Viraf's sudden reaction startled her.
"Why? It's a normal topic, and beside that you should know about my past...what I did and what I didn't..." Chhavi didn't leave the chance to make him more jealous.
"What are you talking about?"
She tried hard to control her giggle.
"Stop laughing and stop making me jealous."
"Oh are you jealous?"
She asked in an innocent voice.
"No,no, not at all...why should I be jealous? So Ms.Chhavi what you did with your Parth...please share."
"I've something more serious to share." Chhavi said. "Today I met Priya...she invited me to her party..."
"Oh...yes she has called me for that...their private party. So you are coming na?"
"Yeah...but.." She couldn't complete as he guessed her answer.

"But with Parth..."
"Viraf actually without Parth Ma..."
"Arre it's alright...I know...now go and sleep."

They hung up.

Next morning:

"Tring...Tring"

A mechanical sound was constantly echoing in the room. Chhavi opened her eyes. Her phone which was on the bedside table was ringing continuously. She got up; the morning sun was gentle and soft rays were all over the room. She took the phone and at once her heart skipped a bit.
"Hello...yes..Chhavi speaking."
"..."
"What??!!"
She exclaimed. She couldn't believe her ears.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago

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