ViCha FF - from reel to real Chapter 15 PART 2 UPDATED PG 18 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Very smartly Viraf rejected the offer of Meera and this is good as well because when he had feelings for her she didn't say yes and now when she couldn't have anyone she is again interested in him 😑 😑 and Viraf gave him solid pay back. πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Dolly jee is nice, she just want to make his son settled and so she tried it. 😊 😊

Chhavi loves her so much she even can understand how his mood just listening his voice..

I liked the way how Viraf kept her mom's wish but did what he wanted. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Update fast dear..


Thank you so much Mahak! Yep Viraf is a smart guy and well how can Chhavi not love him haha 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

I loved the K3G dialogue and Viraf is indeed too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Just as I had expected, Viraf's mom dropped this bomb named Meera on him!!!!

He should have tried telling her about Chhavi at that time!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

It is sweet how Chhavi can realize that something is wrong with him just from his voice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She and her questions but I am sure Viraf loves the way she cares for him!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

He definitely felt better after talking to her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is not looking good and neither does he want to go!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Viraf is thinking of Chhavi and wishing he could be with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is soo sweet and loves her so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Yeh Meera kitna chipak rahi hai Viraf se but thank God he retracted his hand!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

She was the one who refused him and left him for someone else and now wants him back!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Why does she want him now??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Has she gotten divorced??😳 😳 😳 😳

How can Dollyji choose her for Viraf??πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

I am glad that Viraf made everything clear in the first meeting that he loves someone else!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Serves her right that Viraf rejected her as she had broken his heart back then!!!!

I loved how he stood up and walked away leaving the extra baggage with a huge burden taken off his shoulders!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

This part is very good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





I guess he should've told his mum at that time but he was shocked by what his mum was asking him to do so naturally he was in no state to reveal his relationship with Chhavi. Thanks Shaina! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES FOR CHAPTER 13
p.s Thanks everyone for all your lovely comments! I have a lot going on in my life right now which is why I haven't been able to reply or update. I do read all your comments and it always encourages me to keep writing so please don't feel that I don't read them. Anyways will be back soon with another chapter so watch this space 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its OK shegu... No worries.. Take ur time... Ur updates usually comes with a bang.. So no probs for waiting...
Take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Kitna tadpayegi Shegs :/

I know init?? I've been coming to rye post so often thinking agaya update, but it doesn't come! However I know it will be bang, bang when it does come!! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi

I know init?? I've been coming to rye post so often thinking agaya update, but it doesn't come! However I know it will be bang, bang when it does come!! πŸ˜›


Yes Shegs ki update will be bang...
*Excited*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys!
Sorry for making you guys wait for months for a new update but I got very caught up in other things in life. Anyways I'm back but please excuse the terrible writing because I haven't written anything in ages! Enjoy x

Chhavi's POV:

Viraf's voice had sounded so strange to me over the phone as if all the life and soul had been drained out of him. I held my phone close to my heart and paced up and down my room, trying my best to rid myself of the uneasiness pent up in my system. Something just didn't feel right but a sudden buzzing of my phone brought me back to my senses.

"Hello? Who is this?" I answered the call rather annoyed that some private number had called this late.

"Hi Chhavi? Is this your number?" he inquired hesitantly as waited for him to identify himself.

"Yes Chhavi speaking. Aap kaun hai aur itne late kyun call kiya hai?" I retorted clearly very unimpressed with the caller not getting to the point.

"So sorry Chhavi actually I'm Pracheen. Remember how Vinny introduced us and I promised I would take you guys out on a date? Yeah I called to ask if you were free anytime soon?" He asked trying his best to mask his inherent giddiness.

"Oh...Pracheen hi so sorry I don't have your number saved. Umm well I don't know if I'm free anytime soon because obviously I shoot for 12-16 hours a day but yeah if I'm free I'll let you know," I replied hesitantly as I started to pace up and down my room once again.

"Aah I see but you do have time right now right? I'd like to get to know you better actually. We didn't really get to talk very much that day so how are you? How's everything going?" He asked me inquisitively wanting to carry the dying conversation forward.

"Yeah I'm good just a little busy with work and shooting but otherwise great. Hey listen I have to shoot early in the morning tomorrow so maybe we can talk some other time but yeah I'll let you or Vinny know if I can come or not. Bye," I replied to him before instantly cutting the call before he could attempt to hold me up longer on the phone.

I could feel the sides of my head pulsating which was a sure sign of a major headache coming to the fore. I sat down on my bed but the uneasiness was still raging within.

Viraf's POV:

I firmly gripped my steering wheel as I tried to weave through the busy traffic which had been static for a couple of minutes now. I honestly just wanted to step really hard on the gas and accelerate myself as far away as possible from Pune. As the traffic started moving again, I felt moisture on my cheeks and the road ahead became blurred by teardrops in my eyes.

I bit my lip hard as I tried to force myself to hold back the tears but all my attempts seemed futile. I had streams running down my face and only God knows I managed to drive back home. I stepped out of the car and furiously wiped my face. Why on earth was I crying for? I don't care about Meera in the slightest but why does it feel like I'm being stabbed a million times in the heart?

I trudged all the way to my front door where I rested my head while taking in a few deep breaths. Straightening myself up, I rang the doorbell, closing my eyes to hinder any stray tears from escaping. I felt a gush of air greet my face as someone opened the door for me and when I opened my eyes, I saw my dad standing with a rather grim look on his face.

I stepped inside to see the whole family seated in the living room. Some had their head in their hands and others looked at me as though I had been convicted of some unforgivable crime.

"Kya hua? Sab itne chup aur sad kyun hai?" I asked even though my voice came out as a mere whisper.

"Patha nahi tu batha ki tujhe kya hua hai? Tu kyun aise behave kar raha hai?" My mother beckoned as she appeared from my room with her eyes swollen from crying.

"What do you mean mujhe kya hua hai? I'm fine. Main bilkul tikh hoon and how can I not be fine? You know my own family is setting me up with the girl who broke my heart without even asking me what I want. Sab kuch toh tikh hi hai Ma patha nahi aap kya soch rahi ho," I replied with the mere whisper escalating to me almost shouting out the hurt and pain I had experienced recently.

You could hear a pin drop as everyone slowly gazed at both my mum and me, almost sensing a huge fight burgeoning between us. My mum's face looked crestfallen but she gathered herself and approached me.

"Ok maafi mangtha hoon main toh ab batha kya chahthi hai tu? Kyun Meera ko aise chod ke chale aaya?" She asked bitterly while grabbing my face in the palm of her hands.

"You know what aaj sach mujhe aap logho ko sab sach sach batha dena chahiye. Ma, problem Meera nahi hai, problem hai ki mere zindagi mein koi aur hai," I answered back while gently taking her hands into my own.

"Kaun hai woh?" She asked with a tone which sounded like she was beginning to feel hopeful about something fruitful coming out of this discussion.

"Ma... Woh main Chhavi se pyaar kart hi hoon and agar mujhe kabhi shaadi karna hai toh ussi se hi karna hai I bas," I asserted firmly as I stepped away from her.

"Wah kya baath hai? Toh aaya hai kyun tu Pune? Mumbai mein humesha ke liye settle ho jatha Chhavi ki saath. Chhavi se pyaar karthi hai toh itne mushkil kyun tha tere liye humein bolne ke liye? Pyaar sab kuch nahi hotha, culture aur religion bhi kuch hotha hai. But that's ok ab tu toh bada hogaya hai mere opinion kya matter kartha hai," she replied to me bitterly as she started walking towards her room.

"Viraf chod beta hum yeh sab bathe baad mein karengey. Tu ab jaa ke rest kar," Dad said to me as he comfortingly placed his hand on my shoulder and gave it a light squeeze.

That night I lay silently in my bed, flicking through all the selfies Chhavi and I had taken on my phone. Her energy, her infectious smile and her sparkling eyes captivated me to the extent that I couldn't avert my gaze. My chest did feel lighter having told everyone about Chhavi but how was I going to convince Ma is what was keeping me up.

Alright that's all for now. As always leave your feedback behind and hopefully the next chapter will be updated very soon! Love you all :) x
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Posted: 9 years ago
I was just shocked to see your update!!!!
I didn't expect that tu itni jaldi convince ho jayegi... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
But it was a nice surprise...😳

Superb update & quite emotional too!!!
Chhavi was tensed hearing Viraf's voice ,
But this guy Pracheen!!!!!! 🀒 🀒
Ise kya koi kaam nahi hota!!!! 😑 😑
The way he showed her unnecessary curiosity , I felt disgusting!!!! πŸ₯± πŸ₯±


Viraf was sad after meeting Meera ,
At last he told his family about Chhavi!!! 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
It was a wise decision... I must say!!!
Oh my god!!! 😲
Dolly mummy upset ho gayi...
But I hope he will convince her!!! 😎

The scene where he was flicking through all the selfies was adorable,
It reminded me of the past memories jab hume aise off-screen pics milta tha aur hum khush hote the...

Now please update sooonnn!!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
Dying yaar for reading the next chappy!!!

P.s: It is not terrible , it is just awesome!!!
You have not written anything in ages , but your writing has given me the same ViCha feeling!!!!
Thank you so much for continuing writing this!!!! πŸ€—
Lots of love!!!! ❀️
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chhavi is so worried about Viraf!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

So she can realize that he is not fine just by hearing his voice!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This Pracheen is so chipku!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Iske paas koi kaam nahi hai jo Chhavi ke peeche pada hua hai!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

He just doesn't seem to get it that Chhavi is not interested in talking to him!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

It is good that Chhavi made an excuse and cut the call!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Viraf was upset after meeting Meera as it had opened old wounds which had healed long back!!!!

He had tears in his eyes and I can't stand seeing him sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Good that he burst out about his family trying to set him up with Meera!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Finally Viraf told his family about him and Chhavi!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

It is a wise decision I must say and I am very happy about it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Dolly mummy is upset with him and is not happy about his relationship with Chhavi!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

I am sure he would convince his mom soon as end of the day she wants him to be happy!!!!😎 😎 😎 😎

He is missing Chhavi and I loved it when he was looking at all their selfies!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is feeling relieved after having told his family about Chhavi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part is good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey very nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally I am happy that Viraf finally told everything to his family. Meera ko beech me chod k aana us ki majboori thi. He can't even spend sometime with someone else when in his heart there in only Chhavi.

He is missing Chhavi so much and Chhavi has noticed the change in his tone when he was talking to her. This Pracheen is really very chipku why does he want to know Chhavi? Good that Chhavi showed that she is busy.

OHhh my Shona babu had tears in his eyes and it made my eyes teary as well. I never like seeing him crying. I think Dolly mom is just gussa aive hi..vo jaldi hi maan jaayegi.

It was very late update after a long time but this time please do continue it soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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