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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
I love this SS...
Firstly the banner is beautiful...awesome creation...
The three parts are amazing...
Third part was quite hot...Literally I was blushing while reading MJ's description of sword fighting...MY god...kya description hai...☺️
Secondly, loved the first meeting of Mriara...that was superb...beautifully written...mesmerizing...
Nandini is vampire...perfect for her...
Loved the concept of magical tress...
Loved Kalavati's character...a witch...!!!!
The whole concept is very interesting...
Loved it...waiting for next chapter...
Pls...pls...pls...update soon...!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Beautifully written. .loved reading it.

Hopefully will update soon..eagerly waiting for it...



Thanks dear 😃

will try to update it soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Ananya80

Archu thank u so much for the PM, or else I would have missed this beautiful SS;)) Wow Mriara SS in fairy tale version how beautiful is that:) seriously u write soo well and u used all the characters soo perfectly , please continue :))



Thanks dear for loving it 😃

😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Awsummm...update Archu...

❤️magical trees ❤️
❤️Nandu chudail aur Adi ki mulaaqaat awsummm ❤️

❤️MriAra aur Maria ❤️

❤️red scarf toh kisi ka ho chuka... ❤️ ❤️



Thanks for loving magical tree concept Shagu😃
MriAra n Maria😳
red scarf 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

So Tara finally saw the palace and her future sasural!!!!😊

Tara is very smart and realized that if the first son's bloodline tree is alive then it is possible that he is alive as well!!!!👍🏼

I liked the concept of magical bloodline trees!!!!😊

Good to see Tara become friends with Vasundhara and Meethi!!!!😊

Fantastic to see that Jayraj wants to make Tara his eldest daughter-in-law and now all that is left is for him to know his eldest son is alive!!!!😊

I wonder why Nandini works with Kalavati when she threatens her all the time!!!!😕

Tara ka red scarf toh ab kisi aur ka ho chuka hai!!!!😛

Nandini is after Adi and thank God Adi was able to escape before Nandini compelled him!!!!😳

So Mrityunjay is thinking of Tara and though Guruji was happy about it, he hid it!!!!

Mrityunjay woh aayegi na, tumhare pyaar ki kashish usse kheech laayegi!!!!😳

The description of Mrityunjay practising with his sword was simply fantastic!!!!👏

Seeing his bare body, Tara was aroused and wanted to become one with him!!!!☺️

The scene is so much like the scene where Hrithik is practising with his sword in Jodha Akbar!!!!😊

Tara jis kaam se gayi thi woh toh bhool gayi but it is good that she told Mrityunjay about that witch!!!!😊

I loved it when Tara and Mrityunjay rode Maria together!!!!😳

Both loved being so close to each other!!!!❤️

Tara always seems to leave something or the other behind with Mrityunjay!!!!😉

First her scarf, then her heart and now her earring!!!!😊

The chapter was mindblowing!!!!👏





its our Tara bachu 😉
@magical tree: thanks 😃
@nandini-kalavati is powerful witch n running away from her is equal to inviting death.so nandini preferred to be her slave rather than inviting death

Mj sword practise was inspired from that movie 😉
i wanted MriAra to rode Maria in EBI ,but cvs never showed that
do implemented here 😉

@leaving belongings-i told naa its Tara bachu 😉

thanks for helping me🤗

Thanks for loving it 😃
Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Fantastic Archi. Love it. 👏👏Update soon waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77


hey lovely banner👏 aah its sucha treat to the souring eyes to watch old MriAra
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Loved Tara's smart dimak ki batti...Jayraj is too kind..abhi sey Tara ko MJ ki biwi banaey ki planning😉ab bahu hee betey ko ley ayegii.

SORRY FOR THE TERRIBLE LATE UNRES😳
Love the magical plant idea too😃 soon umm...not so soon ..well after the war..they might be a chotu little plant growing beside MJ's tree😉 under daddy's cool loving shadow
Waisey bolo Nandu ko envision karna kaisey hai😆 will she be like normal humans- in her original form or have fangs n stuff😛

Close friends ko busy schedule say time nikaal na padta hai..aaj iss ka experience bhi karliya😆

moving on...Yeh chudel 😛 I mean Witch ki yyaadash bahut pakki hai

Ek Scarf key liye..gal what MJ say milney ka isey acha bahana nai mila😉 mummy say itna intimidated😆

Nandu u chor- chhotty gal...

Ahayeee MJ miyaa...abhi ek mulaqat theek say nai hue ladki say ..abhee say sapney sonchney lagey!!😉 koi nai agey future -wa main u'll get many chaNASS😆 to meet ur princess

"Mrityunjay" called the prophet, seeing him lost in his thoughts. "What you are thinking?"



Guruji: What are you thinkking MJ...
MJ: han..abt ur daughter😆

OMG yeh kya MJ..shirt-wa aisey nikalogey toh ur future biwi will DROOL...
Yeh lo Tara is already in the business..I mean day dreaming business...and I thought the witch was best at it!😆
Ohoo Tara wat thisy yaar..lust lust karey hoo..sweat glowing like molta lava...lava nai chocolate kahoo (me at the moment:besharamm much😉)

What 😕yaar mera FF bhi aisey ek scene deney wala hai...n urs is too good..ab mera ff kaun padheyga😭

Horse ride...hayee...kya lagtey hai woh dono


Her scarf in which she looks beautiful is with Mj..kyun na ho..her beauty is his now..his own property..

@ARchi, Shai..my darlings🤗..u guys rock..superb Update.⭐️⭐️⭐️
Regards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

This was quite a ahem ahem update...

Mj practicing sword fight.. my god the description u gavr... I guess more than tara I was blushing. ..


Nandu... arrrggg...adi iska nai hone wala... just forget it nandu vampire. ..

Kallo witch... actually I like her character. . Negative but strong. ...

Not like ebi kallo.. with flop plans...

Res scarf.. now that belongs to someone else dear. ...


Ahem update 😉

LOL...Banni... thanks to use ur imagination more than what I wrote 😆

Thanks for Loving Kallo Witch 😃

Thanks for ur lovely comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: TasriS

It was Awesome...

Thanks for the pm .


Thanks dear 😃

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