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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Fabulous update 👏

Tara is so happy that can be noticed 😃
Awee... Tara was adoring her handsome Pati 😉
But she doesn't want he would know it 😆
She just can't stay without MJ..
MJ is also not less than her 😉
After waking up search her first 😛
Now, MJ finally realized he loves her...
They are adorable 😊
Oh!!! their contact 😳
Tara fallen 😲
MJ didn't help
MJ is accuse himself for no reason.😒
Their were no fault of his dear ones death..
Tara was waiting for him 😔
Hope he will come out from his mind turmoil and tells Tara about his feelings 😊

Update soon...

Thanks for loving it 😃
Hope he recovers soon
Updating tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
Previous update on Page47

The Drift
Part a

Next morning Tara was in deep sleep because of the medicines when Mrityunjay entered the room. Seeing her sleeping peacefully, he stopped near her and was adoring her lovingly. He walked near her head to caress her when his mind said, "What Mrityunjay? Are you not satisfied with this small wound? Do you want to hurt her more?"

"NO!" he said.

"Then why are you going near her?" He took two steps back and said, "It's better to leave this room." He started removing his stuff from the closet.

Tara woke up hearing the sound of the closet opening. She was happy to see Mrityunjay in the room but was confused as to why he was removing his stuff.
"Mrityunjay, what you are doing? Why are you removing clothes from the closet? Is there any meeting out of town?"
Mrityunjay didn't answer a single question and continued packing without looking at her.

Tara was getting worried seeing him packing all the stuff that belonged to him in the room. "Mrityunjay ... Mrityunjay ... reply to me..."
Without even looking at Tara, he left the room.

Tara tried to follow him and stood up but cried in pain while putting her first step on the floor.
Listening to her cry, Mrityunjay wanted to help her but stopped thinking if he went near her, it would worsen her condition.

Tara was shocked with this behaviour of Mrityunjay.

"Why did he leave this room? What did I do? Did any of my talk hurt him? Is he angry with me?" "Oh...Mrityunjay ..." she was deeply hurt with this behaviour of Mrityunjay.




Two days passed but Mrityunjay didn't return to his room. Dadaji and Raghu Kaka took care of Tara. Each day that passed without seeing Mrityunjay was making Tara weak. Her strength was Mrityunjay but since two days he didn't show up in the room for a single moment, he even didn't take her call. His silence was killing her even more.

"I love him, and I don't mind if he doesn't love me, we were friends first then man and wife, but he is acting like a complete stranger to me, why?" She cried thinking this and slept crying.





"Friends, I just now came to know that Tara ma'am got a sprain in her leg so she is not coming to college." said Bunty who just came to know about Tara's sprain from a lecturer.
"Let's go and meet her," said Meethi.
Bunty, Meethi, Vasu, Yug, Nandini and Adi left for Shekhawat Mansion after college.


When the students entered Shekhawat Mansion, they first met Dadaji. Dadaji was happy seeing Yug there. He guided them to Tara's room.
They knocked at the door.


"Come in," Tara replied. She thought it might be Mrityunjay, after all it had been three days since he had met her.
She was waiting eagerly to see who was at the door.

When the door opened and the students entered, all her hopes crashed to the ground. "Oh...it's not Mrityunjay, why it's not Mrityunjay?"


"How are you Ma'am?" said Nandini coming close to Tara.

"Oh...I am fine and don't worry I will come with you for the day after tomorrow's competition." She brought a fake smile on her face.
"Sit students why you are standing," she said.

Nandini, Vasu and Meethi sat near Tara on the bed, Bunty and Adi sat on the corners of the bed and Yug took the chair near Tara's foot and sat down.
They were talking about what happened in past three days in college.
"Ma'am you are coming for tomorrow's farewell party?"
"Yes I am."

"And Bhai?" asked Vasu.
Hearing this question Tara got angry remembering how he was acting as a complete stranger to her but controlled it and said, "Ask him."

At the same time Mrityunjay was passing from there, Vasu saw him and called him. "Bhai...Bhai." Yug brought him inside the room holding him by his hands.
"Bhai tomorrow there is a farewell party and we want you to come with ma'am." said Vasu excitedly.

First Mrityunjay wanted to reject it but then saw Yug's face and for his happiness agreed to come.
Tara was watching him so that for at least one time their eyes meet and she can see the reason why he was acting like a stranger.

He was leaving the room when Adi said,
"Bhai...Bhai...can you please help me?" Mrityunjay stopped.

"Bhai tomorrow I have to sing a song and I want Yug to play the guitar for me and as we all know you are so good in it. Can you please play the song once so that he can confirm whether he is playing it right or not?"

"Yes Bhai, I just want to confirm it." said Yug handing over his guitar to Mrityunjay and made him sit on his chair.


~Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa~

Hearing this Mrityunjay's eyes suddenly moved to catch Tara's eyes. Their eyes met after a gap of three days, the last time they met was before Tara's fall.

~Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon saathiya~

She smiled and thanked God for sending Mrityunjay to her room. Her eyes were filled with tears of happiness to see him in front of her. Mrityunjay moved his eyes away from her.

~Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle~

Her heart and eyes both were speaking volumes, "Mrityunjay after mom you are the only person in my life otherwise I would have died long ago." Mrityunjay once again lifted his eyelids and found Tara's eyes fixed on him.

~Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya?~

"Mrityunjay I never wanted anything from you, just wanted your love. But if you don't love me then also I am your friend, then why you are acting like this? Why?" Mrityunjay was getting hurt with these questions of Tara's eyes which were hurting him like a sharp knife.

Edited by Archi21 - 9 years ago
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~Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya~
Mrityunjay once again moved his eyes away from Tara. "Mrityunjay you were never rude with me. Then why are you so rude with me now? You are not talking to me, not even looking at me. Mrityunjay I am alone here in this world without you."


~ Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?~
"How can you forget our friendship Mrityunjay? When you helped me in Nainital and here in Mumbai. How we married to fulfil our elders' wish. You taught me horse riding and many more lovely moments when we were happy together and now suddenly you are acting like a stranger. Why?"


~ Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa
Tere pahloo mein rah loon
Main khudko pagal kah loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya..~


"Mrityunjay ... tell me why?" A tear slipped from her eyes.
Mrityunjay noticed it and immediately left playing the guitar and went inside the study.


"Hey... Adi don't sing this song. It's too dull for farewell." said Meethi.
"Okay...then by tomorrow we will choose some other song."
"Ok ..Ma'am bye ...you take care and get well soon." Vasu kissed Tara and they all left the mansion.




In the study, Mrityunjay was restless.

"Oh... Tara... Why? Why? You are trying to find your life in me. Except pain, I can't give you anything. Tara I am a curse. Whoever I love they die and I don't want you to die. Tara I am lonely here without you but if living a lonely life mean your well being, then I am ready for it."

He banged his hands on the table; Tara's sketch flew from there. It was his last sketch of Tara which he drew the night before she fell, when she was sleeping.



Tara was crying in her room,
"Mrityunjay, can't you tell me what is your problem?"

That night too Tara slept crying.
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Edited by Archi21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow What a fantastic update!!!
Mj was adoring Tara...so sweet!!!! 😳

But as his mind interrupted him he left the room
Without replying her back... how rude!!!

Bechari Tara 😳

Thank god students come to meet her
Yug did the best job
And I loved the whole scene
How Mj played his guitar and the MriAra moment

You wrote so beautifully their emotions!!! 👏
Without even saying anything they understood their hidden feelings!!! ❤️

Very intense and emotional update!!!
please continue soon!!!!

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update 👏

MJ came and adoring his sleeping beauty
MJ left room 😲
And didn't answer any of Tara's question
He didn't even look at at her 😒
Tara was so hurt 😔
Here Tara thinking if she hurt him before...
MJ has not return since two days 😵
He should understand that was not his fault...
Students came to meet Tara 😊
That was very sweet 😛
Tara thought MJ has come, poor girl 🥺
Yug brought MJ in room 😛
Finally he came 👍🏼
Tara was to see him ❤️
But he avoiding her eyes 😒
Seeing her crying MJ left 👎🏼
Both two were hurt...

MJ ko aab kaun samjhay 😕
Koi samjaho usko 😳

This part is lovely and the song is beautiful 😃

Update soon 😊

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update !!!!!
Mj ka yun Tara ko dekhna kamal ka start kiya.

BT mj me Tara sent koi bast nai kiya sad

He should tell her his problem.
Mj jitna Tara sent door jayega Tara utni jyada tadpegi ...
..
Achcha hua students Milne aye kam se kam mj Tara ke naina toh mile.

Mj sach me khadooos hai Tara ko rota hua dekh me bhi ruka nai chala gaya


Overall emotional update!!!!

Update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Wow What a fantastic update!!!

Mj was adoring Tara...so sweet!!!! 😳

But as his mind interrupted him he left the room
Without replying her back... how rude!!!

Bechari Tara 😳

Thank god students come to meet her
Yug did the best job
And I loved the whole scene
How Mj played his guitar and the MriAra moment

You wrote so beautifully their emotions!!! 👏
Without even saying anything they understood their hidden feelings!!! ❤️

Very intense and emotional update!!!
please continue soon!!!!


Thanks Nira 😃😃

iss dil aur dimag ki ladai mein jald hi dil ki jeet hogi 😃

Students humesa connector ka kaam karte hain 😊

Thanks for loving it 😳😳😳
Updating soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Superb update 👏

MJ came and adoring his sleeping beauty
MJ left room 😲
And didn't answer any of Tara's question
He didn't even look at at her 😒
Tara was so hurt 😔
Here Tara thinking if she hurt him before...
MJ has not return since two days 😵
He should understand that was not his fault...
Students came to meet Tara 😊
That was very sweet 😛
Tara thought MJ has come, poor girl 🥺
Yug brought MJ in room 😛
Finally he came 👍🏼
Tara was to see him ❤️
But he avoiding her eyes 😒
Seeing her crying MJ left 👎🏼
Both two were hurt...

MJ ko aab kaun samjhay 😕
Koi samjaho usko 😳

This part is lovely and the song is beautiful 😃

Update soon 😊


Thanks dear for loving it 😳😳😳

bairi piya jald hi pyare piya ban jayenge... bas thoda time do 😉

Mujhe khushi hui ki tumhe ye pasand aaya 😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Superb update !!!!!

Mj ka yun Tara ko dekhna kamal ka start kiya.

BT mj me Tara sent koi bast nai kiya sad

He should tell her his problem.
Mj jitna Tara sent door jayega Tara utni jyada tadpegi ...
..
Achcha hua students Milne aye kam se kam mj Tara ke naina toh mile.

Mj sach me khadooos hai Tara ko rota hua dekh me bhi ruka nai chala gaya


Overall emotional update!!!!

Update soon



I am glad to know u loved it 😃😃😃

Judaai ke baad milan bhi hoga 😊 bas zara dheraj rakho 😊

Updating soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Drift
Part b



Next evening, Tara and Mrityunjay both left together for the party. Mrityunjay was driving the car. There was a complete silence in the car. Tara was watching Mrityunjay and thought,

"Did I lose my friend too? Say something Mrityunjay ...this silence is killing me."


But Mrityunjay didn't speak a word. Even though there was ample amount of thoughts in his mind but on his face there was a clear silence and a sign of his inner turmoil.



They reached the party. Tara for the sake of formality was smiling. Mrityunjay was sitting with Yug, Nandini, Meethi, Bunty and Vasu. One by one the performances were presented but none of them cheered Tara.


"Now the most awaited performance of the evening dedicated to those who wanted to say to their sweet hearts their feelings but have kept it buried in their hearts, by Adi and Yug on the guitar." The anchor announced.


~Dard dilon ke kam ho jaate

Main aur Tum agar hum ho jaate

Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate~

Tara's eyes filled with tears hearing this. This song was perfectly speaking Tara's heart's pain. Four days ago life was a beautiful reality for her with Mrityunjay but now she didn't know what happened that her Mrityunjay was away from her.

~Tere bina na aaye sukoon

Naa aaye qaraar mujhe

Door wo saare bharam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate~

She saw Mrityunjay whose eyes were silent but for Tara it was not silent, it was a sign of his inner turmoil. Her Mrityunjay was not sharing his pain with her, which was more painful for her.

~Ishq adhoora duniya adhoori

Khwahish meri kardo na poori~

"Mrityunjay I just wanted you from this life, nothing else and you are away from me."

~Dil toh yehi chaahe

Tera aur Mera ho jaaye muqammal ye afsaana~

"I wish you would share your pain with me Mrityunjay. I wanted to be a part of your pain but you have made me a stranger."


~Har mushqil aasaan ho jaati

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate~

A tear skipped her eyes.

~Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate~


She saw Mrityunjay who was talking on the phone and walking towards her.

"Did my wish get granted?"

thought Tara seeing Mrityunjay coming towards her.

"Tara, I have an important meeting now, so we need to leave now."

~Baki nahi kuch par dil na maane

Dil ki baate dil hi jaane~

Hearing Mrityunjay words, once again Tara's hope wore out, her heart wrenched for making a false hope which was never going to be fulfilled.


~Hum dono kahin pe mil jaayenge ik din

Inn ummeedon pe hi main hoon zinda~

"But I still wish Mrityunjay if I ever get your love in life I will feel myself the luckiest person on Earth."


~Har manzil haasil ho jaati

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate~

"Oh...Tara, why do you have so much faith in me?"

Mrityunjay heart wrenched seeing hopes for him in her eyes.


~Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate~

They quietly walked out of the party.


After leaving Tara outside the Shekhawat mansion, Mrityunjay went to the office.


Tara was walking lost in her thoughts and walked till Mrityunjay's study and entered it. After entering, when she switched on the light, she found herself in his study. She was going out of the study when her eyes caught a sketch which had fallen near the table. She went there and picked it up. It was her sketch when she was sleeping. She was stunned to see her sketch.

"When did Mrityunjay do this?"

She started searching his study to see whether there were more sketches of her. When she opened the table's drawers, she was surprised to see a drawer full of her sketches. Her horse riding sketch, as a bride after their second wedding, her smiling sketch which he sketched after their first marriage, and many more. Her eyes cried with happiness seeing them.

"Mrityunjay ...you love me so much... Then why do you behave like this?"

she wiped her tears.

"Today I will get all my answers."

She sat there watching her sketches.

"I was never so beautiful Mrityunjay, the way you have sketched me beautifully."


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