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Posted: 9 years ago
After two hours, Mrityunjay came to his study and was puzzled to see Tara there. She stood there and waited for him to speak.
Mrityunjay saw his sketches in her hand and snatched them.

"Mrityunjay!" she exclaimed with anger.
"Still you don't want to say anything?"

He moved from there and was about to leave the room but Tara blocked his way.


"Mrityunjay, today you can't go without answering my questions."
Tara was not in a mood to let Mrityunjay go without speaking.




"I don't have time"
he replied rudely and took a cigarette from the table and lifted it.

"What are these sketches Mrityunjay? Why did you sketch me? Don't you have any feelings for me?"


"No I don't." he replied moving her from his way.

"You can't lie to me Mrityunjay. You fear to lose me."
He stopped hearing this.



"Mrityunjay, life is to be lived by loving your loved ones not by fear of losing them. I want to live this life with you Mrityunjay."
Her voice was cracking while she was speaking. "Mri..tyun..jay...".


"Tara, please leave this room. I don't want to talk right now."
He kept her spectacles and hair stick on the table.
"I don't want to keep your belongings with me, take them."
He said without looking at her.


"I am going now Mrityunjay, but remember one thing I will wait for you till the end of my life. Don't make my wait forever. Listen to your heart Mrityunjay. Don't be late in listening to it otherwise it's possible that when you realize I may not be here with you and that would become your lifelong regret."
She left the room crying.


Mrityunjay closed his door and sat near it crying.
"Why do you understand me so well Tara? Why? I am cursed Tara, not meant for you to be loved. I fear to lose you ...because I love you. Don't love me so much Tara. I am the darkness which spreads in lives of those whose life I enter. You are the light Tara and I don't want the light in your life to ever get dim."
He cried till he fell asleep crying.


In their room, Tara was crying standing near the balcony.
"I will wait for you Mrityunjay."




Mumbai: Mrityunjay ...What is this??? How you can do this to Tara...You fool. Poor Tara ...why do you love him so much ...when he is acting so stubborn? Oh...It's so painful to love a person who is neglecting you. Today I think this song is perfect for Tara.

~Yeh kasoor mera hai ki yaqeen kiya hai
Dil teri hi khatir rakh chhod diya hai
Tu hi sabse qareeb hai mere
Tu hi mera naseeb hai ab
ye mehsoos kiya hai~
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Next morning Tara was packing her bag for a two day trip out of town where a competition was held for students. When she was packing, her hands got Mrityunjay's cigarette case which she took from him as a gift while leaving Nainital.

"If this is your happiness, then I will give you that."
She said taking the cigarette case in her hand.



Mrityunjay was having breakfast with Dadaji. She too joined them. Dadaji sensed there was some tension between them but didn't say a word thinking,

"It's a husband wife matter, I should not interfere in it."


While leaving for college, Tara took blessings from Dadaji,
"I will return after two days Dadaji, and I think by then I will get what is mine." She said this looking at Mrityunjay.


Mrityunjay took Tara to the college.
Before getting down, she returned his cigarette case to him.
"If your happiness lies in this then take this. My happiness lies in yours."
Saying this Tara got down with teary eyes.




Nainital: Mumbai...What is this? How can he act like this? Tara is going away for two days...or forever...

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Edited by Archi21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update!!!!

Loved how you added Adi and Yug's performance with MriAra and their mental situation.

Tara kitni dukhi thi

But Mj toh Mj hai...akdoo!!

Tara saw her sketch and questioned him...great!!!!

Ab kaha bhagoge Mj?

Tara realize kar liya ki Mj bhi usse pyaar karta hai!!!

I always loved this stubborn Tara...!!!

Use yakeen hai sab theek hoga aur Mj bhi badal jayega!!!

But I hope kahi bahot jyada der na ho jaye...


Ab MriAra ko pass pass lao...
Kitna judai dikhaoge yaar!!!

Update soon!!!
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... An update after so much waiting... 👏
Kehte hai intazaar ka phal meeta ho jata hai... Par here 😭
Ye mj kab sudrega...
Bechari tara...
Tara saw her pictures in mjs study...
But kadoos mj...
Tara out of town for 2 days...
Tara saying.. Jo mera hai wo mujhe milega... Thats cute..
Ab pata chalega mj ko.. Tara nahi hai to kya hoga... I hope so...
Archu... Thanks for the update..
U make us waiting so long...
Age plss plss update jaldi jaldi...
U know thirsty hungry bhooki pyaasi greedy mriara /vicha lovers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update 👏 👏

MJ didn't talk till then.. Uff !!!
Adi and Yug's performance was great as the song was suitable for the situation 😊

Your song selection is always awesome ⭐️

Tara is so hurt but its like MJ became blind 😒
And Tara hoped MJ has come to talk to her but he wanted to go home
Still Tara hoped everything would be alright... 😊

Tara finally saw her sketch
And she found out other 😃
She understood MJ also loves her 😛
Aab MJ bachke kaha jaoogi 😈

Tara asked him but Kharoos denied 😳
But Tara also didn't give up, told she will wait for him 👍🏼 ❤️
But that shouldn't too late 😲

Tara is determined to back MJ that is lovely 😊

Over all an emotional update and it is great update..
but we want Mriara together so jaldi jaldi update karo 😊

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's sooo heart touching. .got teared up reading the update. .
Please update soon..
Thanks for the pm. .
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Emotional update!!!!

Loved how you added Adi and Yug's performance with MriAra and their mental situation.

Tara kitni dukhi thi

But Mj toh Mj hai...akdoo!!

Tara saw her sketch and questioned him...great!!!!

Ab kaha bhagoge Mj?

Tara realize kar liya ki Mj bhi usse pyaar karta hai!!!

I always loved this stubborn Tara...!!!

Use yakeen hai sab theek hoga aur Mj bhi badal jayega!!!

But I hope kahi bahot jyada der na ho jaye...


Ab MriAra ko pass pass lao...
Kitna judai dikhaoge yaar!!!

Update soon!!!



Thanks for loving it Nira 😃😃😃😃

Tara ne too realize kar liya hai baas iss khadus MJ ko realize ho 😊

Tara ka yakeen sach bhi hoga jald hi 😃

Judai ...thodi aur 😉
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zehrin

Wow... An update after so much waiting... 👏
Kehte hai intazaar ka phal meeta ho jata hai... Par here 😭
Ye mj kab sudrega...
Bechari tara...
Tara saw her pictures in mjs study...
But kadoos mj...
Tara out of town for 2 days...
Tara saying.. Jo mera hai wo mujhe milega... Thats cute..
Ab pata chalega mj ko.. Tara nahi hai to kya hoga... I hope so...
Archu... Thanks for the update..
U make us waiting so long...
Age plss plss update jaldi jaldi...
U know thirsty hungry bhooki pyaasi greedy mriara /vicha lovers...


Sorry for kadva intezar ka phal 😳 😉
Kab tak chupta MJ ka pyar Tara se 😊 tasver hi sahi, pata too chala MJ ke pyar ka 😃

Kadoos ...Bahut Khadoos MJ😡

Thanks for loving it 😃😃😃😃
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Superb Update 👏 👏

MJ didn't talk till then.. Uff !!!
Adi and Yug's performance was great as the song was suitable for the situation 😊

Your song selection is always awesome ⭐️

Tara is so hurt but its like MJ became blind 😒
And Tara hoped MJ has come to talk to her but he wanted to go home
Still Tara hoped everything would be alright... 😊

Tara finally saw her sketch
And she found out other 😃
She understood MJ also loves her 😛
Aab MJ bachke kaha jaoogi 😈

Tara asked him but Kharoos denied 😳
But Tara also didn't give up, told she will wait for him 👍🏼 ❤️
But that shouldn't too late 😲

Tara is determined to back MJ that is lovely 😊

Over all an emotional update and it is great update..
but we want Mriara together so jaldi jaldi update karo 😊


MJ ko thoda time doo... Maan jayega wo bhi 😊

Thanks for loving songs 😃😃😃😃

Jitna dukh diya hai MJ ne utna pyar bhi dega 😃😃😃

Jald hi MriAra ek honge 😃

Thoda aur sabar karo 😉
thanks for loving it dear 😃😃😃😃😃


Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

It's sooo heart touching. .got teared up reading the update. .

Please update soon..
Thanks for the pm. .


Aww... Rona nahi 😊
Jald hi milenge MriAra 😃

Thanks for loving it 😃😃😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago

Previous Update


The Drift

Part (c)


Tara was crying silently in the train.

Mrityunjay drove his car to his office. He was in the office but his heart was not. Tara's words last night were hitting hard in his mind and the cigarette case was an addition to this. There was a fight between his mind and heart.

Mind said, "You were right Mrityunjay." and heart said, "How you could be so rude to her?"

He removed a cigarette from the cigarette case and tried to light it but was not able to light it remembering her words while departing from Nainital. He threw away that cigarette and was thinking of Tara's words,

"Mrityunjay life is to be lived by loving your loved ones not by fear of losing them. I want to live this life with you Mrityunjay."

His mind said, "Don't listen to her. You were right."

His heart said, "Listen to what gives you peace. Do Tara's tears break your heart? Does her smile make your day?"


Mrityunjay remembered their time spent in Nainital, where Tara was boating, the night before the accident when she was sleeping, it gave him some peace. Then he remembered her teary eyes last night's and today's morning and all those nights when she would have cried alone, it was heart breaking remembering those bitter moments.


In the train, Tara was trying to act as if everything was normal but her heart was wrenching.

That night was a sleepless one for both.

Next day Tara reached her destination with the students.

Mrityunjay at the breakfast table saw the seat in front of him empty.

His heart asked, "Missing her?" His mind replied, "NO."

"I am going now Mrityunjay, but remember one thing I will wait for you till the end of my life. Don't make my wait forever. Listen to your heart Mrityunjay. Don't be late in listening to it otherwise it's possible that when you realize I may not be here with you and that would become your lifelong regret."

The whole day Mrityunjay's heart and mind fought over these lines of Tara.

"Stop!" he exclaimed. "Yes, her smile makes my day and her tears break me to core. But I don't want to lose her as I am a curse."

"And what will happen if you will keep her waiting for forever?" Mrityunjay was left in deep thought with this question of his heart.


In the evening at tea time Tara was at a dhaba with the students.

Mrityunjay was in his office, "To listen to the heart or to the mind." Thinking this, he left the office. The more he thought to choose between one of them, the more he got confused.

His car stopped at a red signal. There was a car next to his car in which a couple were sitting and enjoying.


A song played on the radio...

~Kabhi gardishon ka maara,

kabhi khwahishon se hara,

Ruthe chand ka hai chakor ~


Seeing them happy, he remembered Tara, when he went to pick her from college after re-gaining his grip on the steering. Tara was happy that day, she was smiling, but today that seat was empty. She was not beside him. She was sad.


~Zara se bhi samjhaute se

yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun

maane na kabhi koi zor~


He was alone because of his fault. He was acting stupid, denying his feelings and living in his own assumption of him being cursed.


~Duniya jahan ki bandishon ki

yeh kahan parvaah kare jab kheeche teri dor~


But the conflict between his mind and heart was not letting him decide what was right. Finally he made up his mind on what was correct for him.

~Manchala... Manchala teri orh... Manchala... Manchala teri orh.~


And it was TARA...his TARA.


~Khamoshiyon ki suraton mein

dhoonde tera shor dhoonde tera shor ~

Thinking this, he reached home. When he entered their room, there was complete silence in it. There was no one there for him.

~Rukhi sukhi dil ki hai zameen

jaane kahan gum hui nami,

meri umeed hai teri baarishein~


Tara was drinking tea when her hair clutch opened and her hair flew on her face. Her eyes filled with tears remembering how Mrityunjay beautifully removed them from her face at the party when they were dancing and suddenly he was not there for her.


~Sahu kai baar pyaar pe

tujhe har baar haar ke

sikhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein~


She remembered their small confrontation before she left the mansion for her tour and wished Mrityunjay could have understood her point.


~Ho...tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage

hey himaat ke tukde bator~


Finding himself alone in their room, he went in the study, removed his cigarette case and broke it into pieces.


~Ho bhaage zamane se chhupke dabe paanv

jaise koi chor jaise koi chor~

And burnt it into ashes quietly in the kitchen.


~Manchala... Manchala teri orh...

Manchala... Manchala teri orh.~

"I don't love you...I love Tara...My happiness is in her..."

~Khamoshiyon ki suraton mein

dhoondhe tera shor

dhoondhe tera shor ~

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Thanks Shaina_b for making it read worthy 😃
Kindly leave your precious comments 😃

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Edited by Archi21 - 9 years ago

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