MriAra FF||Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi||IMP note pg. 60 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

its so emotional 😭...beautiful update...

Loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MastaT

Oh wow!! I'm absolutely loving this!! Beautiful!! Xxx



Glad you are liking it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Li'l emotional...😭

Lovely update...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thanks 4 da pm dear...😊



Yeah I know...

Glad you liked it though!

And no problem 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Piya1702

My eyes r wet reading it...😭
so sweet n emotional at the same time...loved it...😊
keep updating...
πŸ‘πŸΌ



Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tara is in a really bad state as her father had to be taken to the hospital!!!!

Thank God Mrityunjay hai usse sambhalne ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He can't bear to see Tara like this!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara was shattered to know that her father doesn't have much time left to live!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

It makes sense that both Jayraj and Nirmala knows about Tara's father's illness!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Mrityunjay is always there to save Tara and he stopped her from faliing and it is good to see that Tara would know that touch anywhere!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The weather was used very well to reflect Tara and Mrityunjay's emotions!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Him putting his coat around her was cliched but sweet!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The scene between Tara and her dad was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Tara's father is right that Tara would not find a better guy than Mrityunjay and she should marry him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara agreed for her father's sake but she still has not realized that she has feelings for her best friend!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Mrityunjay carried Tara in his arms to his car and then from his car to his house!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was sooo sweet when Mrityunjay promised Tara to always be there with her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara held his hand and he fell asleep there!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊He is just the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The chapter was awesome and very emotional!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara is in a really bad state as her father had to be taken to the hospital!!!!

Thank God Mrityunjay hai usse sambhalne ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He can't bear to see Tara like this!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara was shattered to know that her father doesn't have much time left to live!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

It makes sense that both Jayraj and Nirmala knows about Tara's father's illness!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Mrityunjay is always there to save Tara and he stopped her from faliing and it is good to see that Tara would know that touch anywhere!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The weather was used very well to reflect Tara and Mrityunjay's emotions!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Him putting his coat around her was cliched but sweet!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The scene between Tara and her dad was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Tara's father is right that Tara would not find a better guy than Mrityunjay and she should marry him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara agreed for her father's sake but she still has not realized that she has feelings for her best friend!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Mrityunjay carried Tara in his arms to his car and then from his car to his house!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was sooo sweet when Mrityunjay promised Tara to always be there with her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara held his hand and he fell asleep there!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊He is just the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The chapter was awesome and very emotional!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Yeah that scene was a bit cliched but it works..

Glad you liked the update though and thank you for such a wonderful comment! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


Beautifully written... 😊

Very touchy...😭




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Teena_



Beautifully written... 😊

Very touchy...😭





Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read all the chapters that you have written so far, it is such a beautiful story and you are such a good writer!! πŸ‘
Can't wait to see how the story progresses... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Humera-

Just read all the chapters that you have written so far, it is such a beautiful story and you are such a good writer!! πŸ‘

Can't wait to see how the story progresses... :)


Thank you so much!
I am really glad that you liked the story!

Thank you for commenting :)

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