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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVED IT Sia!!! aur phir i was like...baaki ka kaha hai!!??...ab jaldi update karo, cant wait!! :):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooow superlyk .. perfect!!!! .. post the update sooon plzz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~/~ Bruised hearts ~/~
Part- D

Mainey kaha na mujhey kuch nahi sunna..fir tumne ph kyun kiyaa.. main marjaungi lekin tumhare pass lautakar..'
before she could say further Mj informs her abt Jayraj's ill health... Jayraj suffered sa stroke that evening... Tara is shocked to hear this...

She rushes to the hospital... Jayraj is in ICU..everyone is tensed... Tara consoles Nimmo..
The doc inform them he is out of danger and needs to be put under observation everyone is relived..

'Taara you have been here for past two nights..you need rest' Mj says
'I am fine ...I dnt need your concern' she replies
Meethi, Vasu n Taara spend sometime doing seva to Jayraj...
The doc comes and says that Jayarj wishes to talk to his bahu... when Meethi advances forth, he adds his badi bahu and beta.

Tara and MJ meet Jayraj...
J speaks with heavy breaths 'Tara... thanks aap humain yahan dekhney ayee... humain bahut achalaga.. '
Tara 'baba apko yeh kehney ki zaroorat nahi... aapney mereliye itna kuch kiyaa.. all I wish is to see you safe.'

MJ adores his wify!
J utters 'humain achalageyga agar aap apney zindagi key kuch pal humarian saanjtey hue zindagi ko roshank kardey toh' (lolz guys shayari sonjhrahi hai mujhee😆 )

Tara couldn't say no as it was his health that was all she was worried abt..

After a few days they take Jayraj is taken to the mansion... Tara and MJ continue to have arguments..



Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Sia⭐️

Tara bachu is treating MJ in right way👏

MJ beta late kiya realize too punishment too milegi😉
😆

next part dear😉

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooow that was fast :))
nicely put up.. MJ ki punishment chalu hai .. poor guy :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~/~ Bruised hearts ~/~
Part- E

Mj mainey kiteny baar kaha hai..plz don't trouble me.. jab maine failsla karliya hai mujhey roko mat.

MJ tries hard to knock some sense in his wife's brain...
Jayarj couldn't say anything as he knew it was Taara's decision and was hurt beyond repair...

Meethi too tries to convince Taara in her own way but Tara has made herself deaf to their please...

This time MJ and Taara have a heated argument...

Enough..! Tara I have had enough now.. I cant do this any more.. you want to grumble..be it.. mainey kitni baar sorry kaha.. I never wanted you to go.. I loved you...not Radha.. it was all your assumption .. I am not going to bear this drama anymore. You wanted to go back...FINE go back!'

Tara gets furious and leaves...


PRECAP: MJ says 'acha bachu..iss ki sazaa toh tumhain milnei hee hai... I will make you discontent.. ab dikhaunga mujh pay shak karney ka natija kya hota hai'

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Every time I'm left without words! Beautiful! Xx continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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/~ Bruised hearts ~/~

% Mature content %

Part- F

He was in the study.. Engrossed in his files... the table had every inch of it covered with MJ's files and papers. She barges in and closes the door up!

MJ observes this ..but gets back on focusing his work.. what did you say!

'I ..I am an irresponsible daughter and a wife..?'

'Look Taraa if you have come here to fight with me..then it's the wrong time. I have n number of things in my mind..and so dn't want anyone to disturb me.' says a furious MJ

She in anger mixes all the papers and files by ruffling them all...this angers MJ.

'Oh those n number of things include Radha too, I guess...' she utters

'yes, and she is better than you..never doubted my love' MJ adds.

'What...what did you say..? she is better than me..your wife' she pushes him back.

'Stop it Tara.. don't act immature!' MJ shouts holding her arms firmly.

'I could have known, I did all that hard work for a selfish man! Kaam nikalgaya toh you just dnt care of anyone who help you..its all my fault..' she says freeing herself from his grip and continues...

'I would never have had stood back for you, when my mom came to take me.. you know what this whole marriage is a sham.. those feelings.. and the love that we shar.. '

MJ before she could utter that shuts her mouth with his... she struggles to get out of his grip... he kisses her deep.. after a while he leaves her..

She feels contempt at this act of his.. he moves back... she shouts yeh kya karein hoo!'


PRECAP: MJ says 'acha bachu..iss ki sazaa toh tumhain milnei hee hai... I will make you discontent.. ab dikhaunga mujh pay shak karney ka natija kya hota hai'


PS: The rest of the parts from here will be romantic..I swear😆


Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Sia⭐️

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tuna intey ko hee aisey bolre hai..agay is ahem... u'll knwo..aaj key liye itna passionate romance bus hai I reckon 😳
dnt blame me..u guys asked for a beep beep beep romance OS..so I have tried super hard..struggled in even thinking VICHA like that😆 ab bhukto!

Yeh bus trailer hai😳
Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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