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~/~ Bruised hearts ~/~

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Part- a

Wrote this a few weeks ago...continuing it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100505966

After that terrible encounter with kallo..Mj,Tara and Radha somehow reach home..

Everyone feel happy to see Radha alive..except for Nimmo...


Things started to fall into place.. not quite well for MriAra.. though the mysteries cleared but Radha's agman (entry) completely fogged the vision of Tara and MJ's married life!

And that day when Radha and Mj had a good time at UC..with Maria..those laughter's piercing her heart like a poisoned dagger .. those embraces brought bitter chills to her skin..chases made her heart race wid unrythemic beats
She could only stand there as mere spectator... seeing these two best friends getting close.
She never thought that their hearts would go so far from each other that it would become so tough for him to feel her heart's unmeasured hurt.

That day when he tried to stop her... her hands in his... his guilt for not paying attention to his wife when she needed the most.. those days when she felt alien in her in-law's home- her own home. That day she was devastated to know that she is alone in da world.. the man whom she loved so dearly- for whom she even left her mother..let her go?😲
Tears flow measureless from her broad eyes...which once had a dream of leading a happy life with her husband Mrityunjay.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - b

Baba tries to convince her n number of times... MJ tries to reach her...but she isn't some random lady desperate for her hubby's attention..lamenting and sobbing over her past..
With Yug's help Nandu, Ar and Taara manages to move someplace else... she now starts her own shop...with Ar being her pillar of support...It was time that's gonna heal this emotional injury.

// I'll spare u of the mystery, Kallo/RP thingie..even Radha thingie //

MJt ried his best to look for his wife..but in vain..

Tara would get reminded of the moments spent by them at UC..while she sees young couples feed ice cream to each other at the shop...

Silent tears flow endlessly from her eyes... in the winter nights... the chill would not have pinched her so much as those memories did. All she wanted was to be happy with her love..she worked ahrd to make the relationship work.. try everything to make her MJ free from the shackles of death.. and all she gets is this... and when she realized there was no such thing as LOVE in that relation..what was she doing there living with a stranger? (this assume that Kallo/ Nimmo n Radha succeed in seeding the seed of doubt n unacknowledged shadi MriAra had)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was looking for this only...read randamly on that AT...i hope to read the next part...hope its short story only !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG love it!!!! Continue soon!!!
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Sia ⭐️

aage kya hua

abhi bhi vahi hai hum
Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Lovely write up, can't wait to read more 😳
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~/~ Bruised hearts ~/~
Part- C

Then one day... Meethi, Vasu happpen to meet Taraa bhabi's shop.
She was pleasantly surprised to have them...they have some chaat made by her... all MJ could do is to secretly watch his wife struggle...struggle with the word again and her emotions too!

He cursed the moment when he let her go... now all he wanted is to have her back in his life..
Each moment in that room literally bit him...it pinched his soul cruelly.. He was guilty now... Jayraj gets worried abt Tara n Mj's relationship... he begged Tara to come back..but this time it was the question of her self respect..she couldn't let anyone hurt her anymore...

It was her family which was her first priority.. MJ tries hard to convince her..but she refuses to see his face.

Taara gets a call in the middle of the night..its MJ
'Hello...itney raat ko kisski naubat ayee hai jo mujhe distrube kiyaa'
'hello, Tara its me MJ...'
'Mainey kaha na mujhey kuch nahi sunna..fir tumne ph kyun kiyaa.. main marjaungi lekin tumhare pass lautakar..'
before she could say further Mj informs her abt Jayraj's ill health... Jayraj suffered s stroke that evening... Tara is shocked to hear this...



For ur patience here is a quick precap:😆

The kiss was painful for her... she was hurt to the core and no justification of his could heal it!
He holds her tight in his arms... her smooth skin of her face brushes to his chest..her breath plays with his senses...
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Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sia⭐️

Maza aa raha hai MJ ki tadap ko read karke

MJ beta late kiya biwi ko mana ne mein too tadapna too hoga hi

Tara 👏

next part Sia😉
Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil

I was looking for this only...read randamly on that AT...i hope to read the next part...hope its short story only !!



Originally posted by: Archi21

Sia ⭐️

aage kya hua

abhi bhi vahi hai hum



I decided that its gonna be a kinda os/ss...with disclaimer 😆 so the disclaimer part will follow soon..pehley story th poora honey do😉 it will be worth reading😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow. No words. Mind blowing!! Continue soon

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