Pani Ne Aag Lagi- MriAra OS/ My version of Epi 19th Dec 2013

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Archi21

Good Work CrazzyBusy 👏👏👏

While reading OS I was imagining scene because of good written up.👏

Bani meri bhi same condition thi😉
😆

Awww thank you so much for liking the OS and I am glad I could make u all image the scene with my writings

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Lovely OS...written with such vivid vividness. ..you can imagine the whole scene while reading it...tara danceing and singing can imagine easily. ...but mj danceing. ...is a bit hard to imagine. ...

Thank u so much for liking the OS dear
glad u were able to imagine the whole scene
I didn't know how to make MJ dance, didn't got a clear pic of his dance so just wrote what came in mind...

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

aakhir iss ladaki ki problem kya hai

jab pati pass nahi aata to usse seduce karati hai...usse shock pe sock deti hai and jab pati paas aane lagta hai to dar ke maare bhaag jati hai...asa kun

bechare vishwamitra ki tarah mere mj ka menka banke tap bhang kiya and now...

now...

what now iss now ke aage to mujhe mariyam tujhe hi poochna chahiye

itnane cold envioronment mein barish karvayi and uss barish mein mriara ka romance dikha ke aag laga di...

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
aakhir iss ladaki ki problem kya hai
Kis ladki ki baat kar rahi ho, Meri ya Taara ki😕
jab pati pass nahi aata to usse seduce karati hai...usse shock pe sock deti hai and jab pati paas aane lagta hai to dar ke maare bhaag jati hai...asa kun
Abb pati ko pass lana hai tu seduce tu kana hi pade ga na, aur phir paas aye tu itni jaldi maan jana main kya maza hai, maza tu tab ata hai jab use aur tadpaya ja ta hai, 😉

bechare vishwamitra ki tarah mere mj ka menka banke tap bhang kiya and now...
aab kya karo, MJ aisa rukha rukha rahe ga tu biwi ko tu menka bana hi pade ga na, agar pahle hi apni tap bhang kar ke biwi ki taraf pyar se deakhta tu thodi na Taara bechari ko menka bana padta

now...

now...

what now iss now ke aage to mujhe mariyam tujhe hi poochna chahiye
Mere se mat poch ise aage main nahi bata sakti, I was only limited to that much imagination, waise kyun teri pyas abhi tak nahi bujhi😉

itnane cold envioronment mein barish karvayi and uss barish mein mriara ka romance dikha ke aag laga di...
wohi tu, thand ke mausam main agar aag na lgaya tu phir kya kiya😆😉 bolo bolo...

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

ab kya bolu tune to meri bolati band karwadi,...

but seriously dear kya kamal ka romance dikhaya hai awesome

mj and romance ka dur dur tak koi rishta nahi lekin tune to haye dikhaya hai jaise agar romance ke baare mein poochna hai to baba mj se poocho sarwagyani purush...rolf...

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
ab kya bolu tune to meri bolati band karwadi,...

but seriously dear kya kamal ka romance dikhaya hai awesome

mj and romance ka dur dur tak koi rishta nahi lekin tune to haye dikhaya hai jaise agar romance ke baare mein poochna hai to baba mj se poocho sarwagyani purush...rolf...

Abb tune hi bola tha na to make it something ahem ahem type tu bana diya
par teri bolti band kardungi ye nahi socha tha
just like the rain epi did ot all of us...
I am glad u like their romance I showed...
I was at first thinking of not posting this but then I posted only for U.
MJ & romance, haha dear uska tu mujhe lagta hai kabhi rishta hai nahi hai, but I am sure in future he will surly have one relation with this romance. Hopefully if not fully romance, but R se tu rishta rakh hi sakta hai
Waise MJ se kyun poch na mujh se pocho I will tell the A to Z of Romance😉 meaning to never ask me😆

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy

Abb tune hi bola tha na to make it something ahem ahem type tu bana diya
par teri bolti band kardungi ye nahi socha tha
just like the rain epi did ot all of us...
I am glad u like their romance I showed...
I was at first thinking of not posting this but then I posted only for U.
MJ & romance, haha dear uska tu mujhe lagta hai kabhi rishta hai nahi hai, but I am sure in future he will surly have one relation with this romance. Hopefully if not fully romance, but R se tu rishta rakh hi sakta hai
Waise MJ se kyun poch na mujh se pocho I will tell the A to Z of Romance😉 meaning to never ask me😆

😲😲 tu to chupi rustam nikali dear😳😳

i know mj ka rishta jab romance se jud jayega to bechari tara...tu samaj gayi na😉

but seriously jab usaki ek smile itani killer ho sakati hai to jab wo mood mein aayega to kya hoga☺️

i dont mind to read your aham aham work...after all u r the queen of guttery mind world...and i love to visit in this world dear

and dear the way this rain episode make me speachless i m damm sure this karwatchaut episode will also make me forget everything and just remember mj and tara

🤗 ohh dear thank you thank you thank you so much 🤗

tumne mere liye likha awww how cute and sweet dear...but dont think that i will leave u like this

u r a fabulas writer and i m ur regular reader so my eyes will always on you

and always waiting for the new new edition😎

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sehreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Mariam ab mein kya comment karo
i dont know yaar
all i can say is
kya imagination hai apka👏👏
really since u told me u gonna write ur version on rain scene
since thursday been waiting for it and today the first thing i did when i wake up
was to read ur version, and the selection of song 🤗
truly would love to see tara dace for MJ, and jiss speed se tara ja raahi hai
i think soon we will get to see that too ⭐️
and the way u ended it arre how can i imagine what happen next ☺️

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

😲😲 tu to chupi rustam nikali dear😳😳
How am I chupi Rustam yaar

i know mj ka rishta jab romance se jud jayega to bechari tara...tu samaj gayi na😉

Haan haan bilkul samajh gai, gosh tu aur teri guttery mind, I wonder what do u dream of when u think of MJ, and I mean MJ only😉

but seriously jab usaki ek smile itani killer ho sakati hai to jab wo mood mein aayega to kya hoga☺️

Haye smile ka naam mat le warna Sehreen will be the first one to pop her head in here, she is the craziest one of his smile, yeah ur rit when his one killing smile can do the work I wonder what the rest of his mood in romance will do I guess then he will be the parmanenly ticket of our death along with Taara 😆

i dont mind to read your aham aham work...after all u r the queen of guttery mind world...and i love to visit in this world dear

Waise I am not that guttery mind, but yeah u can do that on my blog but its on Maaneet, not sure if u are fan of them, but my all writeing are on them other then MriAra

and dear the way this rain episode make me speachless i m damm sure this karwatchaut episode will also make me forget everything and just remember mj and tara

Den count me in too and BTW der won't be my version of it if it leaves us speechless

🤗 ohh dear thank you thank you thank you so much 🤗

Ur not most welcome Kavz🤗

tumne mere liye likha awww how cute and sweet dear...but dont think that i will leave u like this

u r a fabulas writer and i m ur regular reader so my eyes will always on you

and always waiting for the new new edition😎

Actually its my pleasure to write it, coz I know u along with others are waiting to read my writing, so its motivates me to write, I know its all craps but ur comments just makes me want to write even though i know its craps I would still post it...
and yeah even I won't want u to leave me, coz writing is my life, its takes away my stress and all so u can always chain me to writing...
Thank u so much for considering me as a Fab writer which I know I am not🤗

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen
Mariam ab mein kya comment karo
i dont know yaar
all i can say is
kya imagination hai apka👏👏
really since u told me u gonna write ur version on rain scene
since thursday been waiting for it and today the first thing i did when i wake up
was to read ur version, and the selection of song 🤗
truly would love to see tara dace for MJ, and jiss speed se tara ja raahi hai
i think soon we will get to see that too ⭐️
and the way u ended it arre how can i imagine what happen next ☺️

Don't comment den🤣
Hehe yeah kya imagination hai, wait u gave me two clapping omg😊 thank thank u so much
Awww I am sory I couldn't update it that day, actually u can blame the VM i told u about i was so much itno it ke socha first finish the Vm and then write this nahi tu I won't be able to concentrate on anything...
I am dying to see a dance sequence on these two...I wonder when dey will show that...itna sab ho gaya now I just want to see the song seq.
aab main kya karo wo actually baat ye hai na ke is EBI ke forum main ek bachi hai uske liye mujhe stop karna pada tu samajh sakti ho na, and I am sure u know the person very well too
Koi baat nahi I am sure u can imagine something 😉

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