OS - A Thirsty Nightmare! - Page 2

Hey i m so late to comment..

First of all... Mwah mwah mwah...infinity times mwah...

Thank you so much..

After reading this my gm was on space...

And i do not want to say anything about your writing...

Kahin nazar lag gayi to...

Love you... 😉

loved the os...please start another fic...please please

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

loved the os...please start another fic...please please

haan chalo sab naara lagate hai...

We want another fic..

We want another fic..

Hamari mange puri karo...

Chalo ab mujhe bhaagna padega... Nai to dd mujhe police mein daal degi itna pareshan karne ke liye...

Only pyaass????????? Nothing else...three big cans of cold water ...only for drinking. ...don't think so...stretching my imagination here.!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT is a very very lovely os.

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Only pyaass????????? Nothing else...three big cans of cold water ...only for drinking. ...don't think so...stretching my imagination here.!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT is a very very lovely os.

very well written with vivid imagination. MJ's revange. While reading l can even visualise the scene. Hope cv's make this into a real scene

...Viraf and chhavi will do justice to the scene with chhavi,'s will fullness and viraf's attitude.

Thanks LOL...yeah go on...use your imagination here...bahut kucch ho sakta hai😉

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

Lovely OS D...⭐️⭐️⭐️
It would be interesting to see MJ doing a bit of Tara's mischief. Hope to see him indeed do this- return back his wify's favor in STYLE, wid reinforced passion of course 😉

Keep up the good work, always a pleasure readin ur pen😃

Regards
Sia

Thanks Sia...I really wish too this scene plays out...

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

such a beautiful OS

i thought u most be busy with ur holidays planning

but thank u weekend me maza dene keliye 🤗🤗

You are most welcome Sehreen...

Waah kya OS hai
👏👏👏

Plz. write next part😉

🤣Too good.