Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 7

Originally posted by: krithi12

renu use saral n nandu in this ff.but not too much.use saral for needed n finish his chapter.i want radhika to give equal fight to nandu.i want more of ardhika scenes after marriage.

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1

Missed ArDhika scenes today, but they were compensated by NeSam's Dosti and cute moments!! This convo was needed in actual story coz Neil did have a special place for Radz and it could be clearly seen, so Sam doubting who's his best friend is quite obvious 😆 In short, today's update was superb as always 👏And the precap is sooo hot 😳 cant wait for hot and passionate ArDhika scenes <3

Pls continue it for as long as you can as we can never get enough of ArDhika 😉 and hopefully we won't have to see kabab mein haddi Saral and Nandini here lol. And if you add your own thoughts and alter the main story, it'd be even amazing! Just letting you know 😊

DItttooo😃😛

Hiii Friends,I already told u all that I'm Bad in writing romantic scenes,..But,When,It comes to Ardhika(first Reel pair,whom I fallen in love with),I couldn't stop myself to write sth about them, So, I tried some Private contending Romantic moments between them,...I hope you guys will enjoy this Ride, As In this Missing Pieces, I felt, We missed Ardhika moments too after Radz accident in lonovla,...Further, I used some flash back (FB) scenes of previous episodes,... As usual, Ignore my Grammatical errors here and there,...

Episode 8 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz was standing alone in the front porch of the balcony holding the Parapet reminiscing her papa's words about accident (FB:Epi 5-Last part) and her situation which makes her to lie to her papa hurts Radz a lot,...She Felt the depth of pain caused by her lie to her papa, which brought tears of guilty from her beautiful eyes,...Arjun,who came out in search of Radz noticed Radz tears,..He became restless seeing her tears continues his banter,...

Arjun:Why you are standing alone radhika,.. leaving your Neil inside?,...

Hearing Arjun's words, Radz wiped her tears and tries to ignore him by turning her back towards him,...But, Arjun continues his ranting,...

Arjun: Is it Raining,Radhika???

Arjun waved his hands outside to check the rain droplets,...

Arjun: I think,..Its gonna rain,...

Radhika was annoyed much by arjun's presence tries to avoid him,..turned towards him and starts speaking in a lower tone,..

Radz:Sir,Please,...Leave me alone,...

Arjun: I feel some rain droplets flashing somewhere,...But, dunno from where its coming???,...as sky too looks clearer,... Its time for me to leave from here na,...so, I am worrying,...

Radz:There is no rain here sir,..U can go sir,...

Arjun:No radhika,Its coming from U,...

Radz:from me???Means???

Arjun: I found rain drops from the storm inside u,Radhika,...

Radz wiped her face and tugged her hair behind,...she began,

Radz:Now, There will be no rain sir,...U can go to your home without any worries,...

Arjun holds radz shoulder on one hand and radz chin on his other hand, asked her the reason for her tears,...

Arjun: Radhika,Tell me what's bothering You??? R u going back to Hrishikesh tomorrow along with your parents???

Radz took away arjun's hand from her chin and began,

Radz:Why?sir,...Why u wanna know about my worries???,...Whether, I going back to Hrishikesh or staying here, What difference it will make to u?,...Tell me sir,...Don't bow down ur head sir,...Face me,Sir...U only asked me na,...Now,M ready to answer u,...Before that,U need to answer me Sir,...

Arjun turned sideward and hold the parapet in frustration,...Radz hold Arjun's shoulder smirkingly and turned him towards her,...She bombards him with her questions,...

Radz:What sir???U dint have any answer for my question,...I din start questioning u sir,..I just asked u a simple question that, Why u need to know about my personal?Sir,...You only told me na,that Its not good to intervene in other's personal,...Now, Its good if u stick on ur own words Sir,...

Saying so,Radz tried to go inside was stopped by arjun,..Arjun holds Radz arms and pulled her towards him,...Both had Intense eyelock during their entire convo,...Then,He began,

Arjun:Oh!!!It looks like u had someone to share ur personal,...Then, Why u wasting time here??? Go,..Your love might be waiting for u to hear your tears,...

Radz tries to free herself from Arjun's hold and replied him with her furious Expressive Eyes,

Radz: I don't need anyone to share anything in personal and if u mind your own business, It will be good for you sir,...Now,Leave me,...

Arjun: I think now you are acting like nothing happened,Radhika,...Oh!!That's the power of your love,right???,...Where is your love when you are in pain???

Radz:Stop your nonsense sir,...I didn't love anyone,...Just leave me,sir,...

Radz tried hard to pull arjun's strong hold on her arms,...Hearing this,Arjun left Radz arms,...Radz,After freeing herself from Arjun tries to go inside was stopped by sudden pain at her Abdomen,...

Radz:Ouch!!!

Radz screamed in pain holding her upper abdomen,...Arjun felt uneasy seeing her in pain,holds her shoulder gently and begin,

Arjun:Is it paining heavily?,...come lets go inside,...& Why u r risking urself Radhika?

Radz, who saw short glimpse of Arjun's affection was again confused and asked him her doubt straightaway,...,.

Radz: Sir,I am seeing your goodness again and again,...Then Why are you pretending yourself as an Impolite person before others,...Why sir???,...Whatever you try hard to hide yourself from this world,..But,My Keen observance will never fail sir,...U cant hide ur trueself from me sir,..

Arjun:No Radhika,...U r wrong again,...I already said na,..I am not a good person,...

Radz:Sir,..Please,Stop saying that you r not a good person repeatedly,..It hurts my Ear more than my pain in abdomen,...Now,you have to change this line,...I will decide afterwards that you are good or bad,...

Saying so,Radz smiled on arjun friendly,...Arjun lost his thoughts completely while looking at Radz Beautiful Eyes,...at that moment,He felt that he saw everything which he needed all his life in Radz Eyes...Even It made him crazy looking down into her beautiful eyes and at her creamy soft skin,Knowing he couldn't touch her,.. (Background Music: Kawhishon Pe likhi)

Whereas Neil and Sam after breaking their Hug had a sweet talk about their chasni,...

Sam: Idiot,what's the time now????,...Mala Aunty instructed me to give chasni food and medicines on time,...If we din remember her means,She will never take medicines on her own,...

Neil smiled at sam hearing her concern for her best friend chasni,...

Neil: Its 8.30 PM,...I think so,...Sam,Its nice to see you like this yaar,...

Saying so,Neil caressed Sam's cheeks lovingly,...

Sam: Ok Idiot,I have to take food and medicine for this pagal,...Or else,she will sleep without having any,...

Neil: When chasni's parents and dadaji are returning from temple yaar,...its already late Sammy,...

Sam:Mala Aunty informed me that they will come around 9.00 yaar,...U don't be tensed..& Idiot,..please complete the remaining works yaar,...I wanna call this chasni,...Where is she???

Neil: Dunno sam,...May be she is sleeping,...

Sam:Ok,..U carry on,...I will look for her,...

Saying so,Sam went in search of radz,...

Meanwhile,..Dadaji,Dilip and mala reached home in a cab after a nice seva darshan in Lord Siddhi vinayak Temple,...Dilip was busy in settling money to the Taxi driver,...whereas Mala and dadaji reached near steps,...But,Dadaji had pain in his Articulation joint while climbing the steps,..So,Mala helped him to climb slowly,...

Here at balcony,...

Radz broke her eyelock deliberately signing him to go inside,...Arjun came out of his trance left radz hands rudely,...Radz was perplexed again by his strange behaviour towards her,... Holding her abdomen and began,

Radz:Why sir??? I was bored asking you this same question repeatedly,...Still, I didn't get proper answer for my question,...Tell me sir,..Why U r behaving with me like this???,...turn this side sir,...Answer me,...

Arjun:what,You need answer from me na???

Saying so,Arjun turned towards Radz,..Pinned her against the wall in a jiffy holding her arms tightly,...A Passionate Intense burning Eyelock follows,...Arjun leans in close to her,...his Eyes followed her lips,...Both could hear other's breathe but they cant hear the intensity of their Breathe,...Radz couldn't tolerate the intensity of their proximity, shivered with anticipation closed her eyes and clinches her long Brown Sleeveless Maxi,...Suddenly,they are aware of their physical proximity and intimacy as Arjun's hands clasped into her's and Their lips were barely an inch apart,..And at the last minute, Radz in Fear uttered Sir',...

Radz: Sirrr,...

Arjun after hearing Radz call, slowly distanced himself from Radz and saw her with his hungry eyes was pulled away by radz strongly made arjun to free his hold on her Arms,...Arjun,who came out of his trances was shocked on his acts,..he cant believe himself that ,what he gonna do a few seconds back, turned his back towards Radz and hold the Parapet tightly to lighten his heavy breathe,... At the same time,Radz opened her eyes slowly had tears filled eyes,..She rest on the wall to gain her lost strength,...This was the second time,she is experiencing the same feeling cox of Arjun which she never felt in her life time before,...

Before making her normal from this unknown feelings which aroused a few minutes back , an extreme shock prevailed her face seeing Sam on her Right and her ma,Dadaji on her left,...

Precap: Dadaji asked Radz,'Choti,Are you hiding anything from me regarding Arjun?'

Wow renu tooo gud. Lovely. Arjun is still jealous... Dadaji radhika conversation is too gud. Did Sam and her. Family c d scene... I hope not. Plz continue asap.Thanks.

Hey Renu nice yaar...

Thx for the pm..

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*SPEECHLESS*

Our sizzling hot ArDhika 😆 Arjun losing control and being jealous as always-BIG TREAT 😉

This update is too good!! Thanks for this dear. Wanna know what happens next. Hope dadaji figures out what his choti is hiding. Need a Cupid badly 😃

Btw the descriptions were perfect! I could imagine ArDhika throughout the epi 😊

Originally posted by: lovv

Hey Renu nice yaar...

i liked d fact dat sam asked neil abt best friend...dat showed she z observing...

so she has to see arjun's attraction for radhika also...

i think dadaji saw ardhika, z dat d reason y he z in pain while walking or truly in pain...let see...

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1

😳

*SPEECHLESS*

Our sizzling hot ArDhika 😆 Arjun losing control and being jealous as always-BIG TREAT 😉

This update is too good!! Thanks for this dear. Wanna know what happens next. Hope dadaji figures out what his choti is hiding. Need a Cupid badly 😃

Btw the descriptions were perfect! I could imagine ArDhika throughout the epi 😊

Hiii friends,...Hope you all enjoyed last update,...This update will have some family as well as some light Ardhika moments,...I hope u all may enjoy this slow episode,...This update will be lengthy as I promised earlier,... As usual Ignore my grammatical errors here and there,...

Episode 9 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz was shocked seeing Sam and her ma,Dadaji,...But her frightened look vanished after hearing their convo,...Sam saw everyone and began,...

Sam: Awww!! Chasni,...U r here,...M searching you everywhere yaar,..Mala Aunty,Dadaji...U all came,How's Darshan??...and Arjun,U also here???

Dadaji noticed Radz and Arjun's tensed look,...Arjun smiled slightly to sam's comments,Radz too felt uncomfortable as well as a bit relaxed...Arjun, Before giving his explanation to sam was interrupted by Mala,

Mala: Haan Sam Beta,...We have nice darshan,...u all have dinner na???

Sam: No Aunty,...Just now,I was searching chasni for dinner,...& Arjun,From when you have been here??? I didn't find you inside yaar,...I thought u already went home,...

Dadaji noticed Arjun's tensed face began,

Dadaji: Harre Sam beta,...Why you all standing here?,..I already had arthritis pain,...I cant stand for long,..Shall we go inside,...

Sam:Oh! Sorry dadaji,...Come lets all have dinner,..Arjun,U too join us na,...

Arjun: No Sam,..I have to go,..Its already late,...

Mala: Arjun beta,...Please,have dinner and go beta,...

Arjun, who sighed no was compelled to have dinner with all by Dadaji,...

Dadaji: Arjun beta,you will accept my words na,...

Arjun: of course dadaji,...(said eyeing Radz,who also looked arjun silently)

Dadaji made arjun to accept his proposition,..

Dadaji: U can go home but ly after having dinner here,...This is dadaji's order,...Ok Lets all go inside,...No more talks,...

Sam:hmmm Dadaji is correct,...Lets all go inside,...Chasni,Come,lets go,..

Saying so sam holds chasni and mala holds dadaji,...Arjun and Radz had Eyelock inbetween,...No one noticed them except Dadaji,...Everyone went inside and dilip too joined them a bit late,...Mala excused herself for few minutes to prepare dinner for everyone,...

Neil: yahoo!!Dadaji,..U all returned from temple,...

Dadaji: haan My little boy,...U too here,...

Neil began with his grumpy face ,...

Neil:M not little boy dadaji,...

Dadaji:Ya shut,...From now,You ly my little boy,..understand,...

Sam teased Neil along with Dadaji,...Everyone laughed amusingly except Arjun and Radhika,..Dadaji,who noticed their Tension began,

Dadaji: Choti,What happened to you? U r so silent today,...

Radz: Dadaji,..Please,M feeling tired,..U ppl continue,..will join u all after few minutes,...

Saying so Radz tried to move was stopped by Sam,...

Sam: chasni,Stop yaar,..Have some food and medicine,...then,u take rest yaar,...Mala aunty already prepared food for you,..Wait,I will take and come,...& u ppl have fun,...I will be back,...

Saying so Sam went to Kitchen to take food for Radz,...Everyone seated and had fun again except Ardhika,...Dadaji broke their eye contact by calling Arjun,..

Dadaji: Arjun beta,What your parents doing???

Radz turned towards arjun and listened him keenly,...

Arjun: I have no parents dadaji,...M all alone in this world,...I was bought up in an Orphanage and did my graduation in London thru scholarship,...

Dilip: Oh! Don't worry beta,...When U saved my choti na,that day itself U also became one of our family,...We are liable to you for saving our soul beta,...consider us as your family,...

Arjun:thank you uncle,..(arjun smiled hearing this)

Meanwhile Sam asked Radz to eat and she herself feed her chasni which makes everyone there to overwhelm by their friendship,...

Sam:Chasni, common yaar,...Have this,...

Radz: No Sam,..I didn't like to eat now,..please

Sam: chalo,...I will feed u,...Don't talk,...just eat or else I wont give your Fav Dairy Milk,...

Radz smiled hearing sam's words and agrees to eat,..Neil was happy seeing both the girls affection,..Arjun also had unknown smile on his face seeing Radz,..Dadaji noticed both Neil and Arjun,...Meantime, Mala prepared dinner for all ,...Parata and sabsi,...Neil offered help to mala to arrange dinner,...All were set to have dinner like a whole family,...Radz,who had her dinner went to her room to take rest,...Sam also joined Neil in helping mala,..While helping mala,sam accidently poured sabsi on Arjun cox of neil's antics,...

Dilip: Harrre Arjun beta,...Ur shirt,...

Sam: Idiot, You cant do single work properly,...See,Cox of you I poured Hot Gravy on Arjun,...

Neil: What I did?Its all your fault Sammy,..Ask Arjun itself,...Arjun,U tell me yaar,..

Arjun: Its ok,..Leave It,..I will wash and come,..U all carry on,...& sam, Where is washroom ?

Sam: There Arjun,...Sorry Arjun,...

Arjun: Its ok,...

Saying so Arjun walked towards Wash Room inside Sam-Radz Bedroom to clean the strains on his shirt,...Whereas Radz,who dressed in Her Maroon Tops and Pyjamas tried to apply ointment on her abdomen puts it down by mistake,...She slowly kneels down and tries to take it which was under the cot,...Arjun,who didn't noticed this entered the room and closed it with a thud,...Radz felt relaxed hearing the footsteps as she thot sam ly came inside was highly disappointed to see Arjun entering the washroom,... Seeing Arjun there,Radz was shocked and decided to go out of the room before he comes out,..She stood suddenly in an hurry which caused severe pain in her abdomen,...She couldn't stop herself from screaming due to the pain,...Arjun,who came out of the washroom saw Radz screaming in pain holding the Bed rushed towards her to help her,...

He gently hold Radz shoulder and lifts her up to stand and began,

Arjun:Radhika,...What Happened???,...

Radz,who rested her head on Arjun's chest with support didn't have any words to answer him,...Arjun gently made her sit on Bed by holding her waist,...They had an Intense eyelock in between,...(Background Music:Kawhishon pe likhi),...After seating Radz on bed,Arjun began

Arjun: Radhika,How's it now? Shall I call Doctor??

Saying so,Arjun took his mobile to call doctor,...Radz hold arjun's hand and started speaking slowly,...

Radz:Nothing sir,...I put my ointment down by mistake,...I tried to take it by myself and it hurts me,..I think,I ll b alright after taking rest,...So, no need to call doc,...

Arjun:Are you mad Radhika?,...I know you have little brain,...but cant you think,it will hurt your abdomen,...just 3 days before, your operation was done and you are behaving like an athlete,...Have you applied ointment on your wounds,...

Radz: No sir,...Its ok,I had medicines,..

Arjun:Where you put your ointment? Radhika,...

Radz:Under the cot, sir,...

Arjun bent down and took the ointment under the cot,...Then,He started reading the ointment's name and opened the ointment cap,...Radz looked puzzled seeing this,...

Radz: Sir,What are you doing???

Arjun:Shhh!!! You lay down Radhika,...

Radz:But Sir,...Why???

Saying so,Radz struggled due to pain,...Arjun lifted her suddenly with Ointment on his one hand made Radz shocked,...She clinches his shirt collar in pain and began

Radz: Sirrr,What you are doing??? Leave me down,...

As usual, Arjun ignored her words and put her slowly on the bed,...Radz swallowed in fear repeatedly uttered the same phrase, 'Sir, Leave me' and turned her gaze away from arjun,...But,Here Arjun,who made her head rest on pillow slowly, even it's for a few seconds, was literally couldn't breathe ,His mind drew a blank, His throat, then tightened up like a coiled rope gripping around a suffocating neck,...He distanced himself from Radz by sitting beside her on the bed and slightly shakes his head in embracement,...After a few seconds break,He began,...

Arjun: Where is your wounds???Radhika,..

Radz : Means???

Arjun: Tell me where it is???Radhika,.Dont make me to shout,...

Radz: In my Right abdomen,...

Arjun: Lift your Tops there, Radhika,...

Saying so Arjun turned other side holding the ointment in his hand,...Radz who understand what gonna happen next was extremely shocked and began

Radz: Sir,..What you gonna do?,...Please,I can apply it myself or Ma will apply,...Thanx for helping me,...

Arjun who faced Radz again began,

Arjun: Radhika, everyone outside were busy in eating,...So,its better if u Show your wounds,...I wont see anything,...

Radz: Sir,Please u go away from here,...I will do it myself,...Don't argue with me sir,...

Arjun: Its ok,If You don't show it then,I have to look it myself,...

Radz: But Sir,...I cant,...

Arjun tried to lift her tops was stopped by radz and radz tried to get up to stop arjun was again screamed in pain,...She was helpless and simply lie down on the bed due to severe pain and left Arjun's hands too,...Arjun,who saw radz screaming in pain literally felt her pain and tried to put ointment on her wounds to make his ladylove free from her pain,...He made up his heart strongly not to distract in any thoughts slowly lifted her Maroon top,...His heart was racing faster seeing radhika's waist slightly and he understood that he can't do this,...He simply stood up closing her tops, kept the ointment on the bed near Radz and went out silently without uttering any made Radz relieved,...She closed her eyes in a relief,...But Tears roll down from her eyes automatically,...

Here in Dinning Hall,Mala asked Sam about Arjun was interrupted by dadaji,...

Mala:Sam Beta,Where is Arjun?

Sam: Arjun went to washroom to wash the strains on his shirt Aunty,...

Mala:But,Choti is inside the room na and,..

Dadaji: Harre,..Mala,I need one more Paratha and also a glass of milk,...

Mala:haan Babuji,..Here all parathas over,...Wait a minute babuji,...

Saying so,Mala went inside to bring a glass of milk and parathas for dadaji,..At the same time, Sam,who was listening to Mala was distracted by neil,...

Neil: Sammy,Give me that sweet yaar,...You alone eating,Not Fair Sammy...I didn't taste it till now yaar,...

Sam: Idiot,..I wont give you,...Its mine and mala aunty did it specially for me not for you stupid,...

Meanwhile Dadaji who was seated opposite to them saw Arjun coming out of Radz room with a tensed face,..He understood something is brewing between Arjun and his choti,...Arjun,who came to hall excused himself that he have to go now as its already late without expecting anyone's reply left from there in a jiffy leaving everyone perplexed,...

After few hours,Mala went to give milk to her choti applied ointment on her wounds,... Dadaji asked sam and mala that today he wanna sleep in his choti's room,..Sam and mala agreed for dadaji's request and they slept in another room,... Radz lie down on the bed simply without sleeping wakeup hearing Dadaji's voice over there,...Dadaji closed the door, switched on the lights and slowly came near his choti to clear all his doubts,...

Radz: Dadaji,What happened???

Dadaji: Choti,First you have to tell me all the truth,...

Radz: Truth??? Dadaji,...what you mean?I cant understand dadaji,..

Dadaji: Choti,Are you hiding anything from me about Arjun???

Radz: Dadaji,..Why are you asking this now suddenly at this hour??

Dadaji: Choti,Answer my question beta,..Tell me everything what you know about arjun,...

Radz was confused hearing dadaji's non stop inquiries about arjun,...Screen freezes on Radz bewildered face,...

Precap: Arjun talking with someone on mobile, 'nothing like that, I had light headache now,...will talk to you later'