Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaben

Renu superb one. Neil n arjun convo 👏 . Superb superb superb. Really wished such convo where no one is ready to give up n hav to prove their point. N both of them concerned towards radz. It was amazing. The coffee got replaced with milkshake. 😆.

Sam's dream n her explanations of whom it can be. Radz making fun of sam. Too gud. Their bonding superb. Loved it.

Birdsong, Whoa so gud to see kritika, zubin , n teji with all their brains. N their color sketch prblms. LOL. It was too gud, Red, green, blue, black, white. Hahaa. So finally convo ended with Finding radz feelings. That would so gud to see how these 3 friends know abt radz heart. N before that They r very much assured that Arjun loves radz. Whoa this is great. I like their confidence yaar.

Arjun's feelings after seeing his red stained shirt. N while keeping watch. So gud. The scenes were just gud. His heart n mind filled with radz.

waiting for the next missing peice. N arjun's state after seeing radz in that dress. 😉.


thanx dear,...No,Milkshake got replaced with coffee 😆,...
Now,Its plan of 3 idiots in finding Radz feeling,...Let's see what they gonna do and How Arjun or Radz gonna fall in their trap,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hari1403

Amazing update renu.Neil's convo with arjun n selecting flavors of milkshake.. it's just superb yaar. He has selected chocolate flavor which is radz favorite..😉. Superb. Neil's trust on radz n his warning to arjun about radz n sam is amazing .Sam n radz convo in morning is superb. Convo of krithika,zubin , teji n connecting of pairs it's funny but they observed arjun's behavior n confirmed that he loves radz n not Sam ...wow. Arjun is totally stricken with rads thoughts...she's not leaving him whereever he goes..😆 Lol..We got to read some scenes before marriage like Neil's warning, Sam's dream n all missing pieces through ur ff...thanks for that renu 👏 .

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Thanx Hari,...
I'm glad you liked this piece,...Ya,...I expect Cvs would show these scenes while MMz aired but they surprised me with Saral and NAndhu entry,...I personally felt it was bit rushed,...As we need some more scenes in development of their love,...I'm glad that you too felt the same,..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krithi12

wow renu loved the update lot.neil questioning arjun .arjun having rdaz watch duppatta etc in his lockers i love it.teji zubin kritz conversation nice

Thanx dear,...
I'm glad you liked this piece
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi renu thanks for the pm. Am Very happy to c ur update today. I thought u might update a bit late as u said that ur laptop isn't working .. But whn I saw ur pretty sweet chapter I was overjoyed. It might not have ardhika and nesam but it was truly beautiful all the Same as it had areil and samradz... Gals and boys this time... Neils confrontation of arjun was always required b4 wedding and aft too. And d way he said chasini is innocent.. Shows neils confidence and trust in radz... Thou there were Two of them in d picture Neil chooses to questions only arjun and trusts his chasini Not only tat he doesn't show d photo to Sam. As he doesn't want any misunderstanding btw d gals. He already has an inkling tat Sam won't take it lightly or trust anyone for tat matter. He knows Sam so well. He even calls chasini his.. And arjun also refers ur chasini(to Neil)... Neil says Sam and radhika r like his two eyes one incomplete w/o d other... Today's episode Neil rocked... Arjun was subtle.

Arjun choosing chocolate milk is downright hilarious... And his sarcastic comments too Is fun. I really enjoyed d interactions btw Neil and arjun... Arjun taking d photo yo his room and keeps it in a cupboard filled will radhikas memories.. Once again a new addition her watch. Well well radhika it's waiting for u to discover how much ur arjun sir loves u...😆... I liked tat he touches d shirt and remisces abt their first intimate moments... How she bought brightness and Colour into his drape of a life... The best part ws arjun admitting that he can't keep her in his head or heart either way she is hounding him. He has fallen pretty hard for her. I Guess it's a small process of self realisation he goes through to know tat to him radhika is his life... Finally with help of saral he will definitely admit it ... At least to himself.. And Neil will Guess it... Arjuns dislike of d revenge is clearly hinted at here... But he is brainwashed his path already chosen and laid out before him...

Radhika and SAMs interactions were also really superb.. Sam still clueless with regards to her dream boy being Neil... Poor gal.. Can't understand whom she is in love with. Malas reply to rads is sweet... And radhika in pink maxi wow... I can't wait.
By d way renu regarding pen and its Colours.. Wow man dint u get confused when u wrote?I really got confused until u gave Each Colours a name.though. Blue for radhika (soothing)..
Red for arjun😡( stop danger ahead angry young man).. Neil is white ( soft. Calm and pure)... And green for Sam oops can't think of wat Sam symbolysis probably u can say she is immature or she doesn't think but just keep going in path tat she thinks suits her... Many say green with envy... Do you think tat applies for Sam renu??? Has she ever been green with envy over radhika?? After marriage??? Or in her jealousy over neils and radhikas bonding... Well she doesn't let it affect the trio friendship...m. But even after marriage she only displayed emotions of a jilted bride which I Guess is understandable.. Since I couldn't come up with proper significance for green Colour for Sam plz let me know y u chose tat Colour for Sam... Well sarals is easy... Black- the evil devil... No other Colour will b appropriate... Just curious wat Colour would u allot to nandini and y???

The office monger s gossiping time. Zubir, Krithika pulling a un willing teji... I always loved radhika and teji s bond. Especially gehu ka atta...wow.. Those episodes were down right hilarious.. I still c them... Their friendship dint c d light of day in d original series ... I hope in urs I get to c another gud frnd of radhika.. Another one of her ally after marriage... Like Neil even he is sure radhika won't love arjun... Thou all 3 admit tat arjun ditched them all as he wanted spend some time alone with radhika. Well am Glad so many people noticed this,,. Proving tat every one r intelligent in their own ways...


Am waiting for radhika pink maxi episode... Despite today's episode being devoid of usual couple interactions I still enjoyed them to d core... Arjun Neil ; Sam radhika ... Even d office gossip mongers I loved them all. Thanks for giving us such a fantastic episode... U have magic in ur hands... I can't wait for ur nxt update... In this one feelings were captured Subtely as if only hinted at.. ... Oh renu no matter how many times I tell u.. You have truly given us a master piece.. This looks more natural as thr is quite a GAP btw samarj engagement... The flow of story is natural and even paced... And d best part is you utilise all d characters... For me especially Neil and teji... In d real one I felt both had grt potential as staunch radhika supporters but then cvs dint use them. And I personally thank u to use one and all characters well and sketched to d perfection
Am Glad to c and feel mmz all over again. The credit goes to u... ... Hugs to u ... For making this happen... Eagerly waiting for d nxt one... Take care God bless.

Thank you so much Ramya,...Yes still My lap isn't working dear,...Dunno what happened to it,...Lot of Thermal shutdown and now providing Network connection also become difficult dear,..That's why I posted whatever I wrote from my Bro's Lap rather waiting for my lap,...
Really,I opened this thread to read your comment but checked pg 29 and pg 31 alone by mistake,..At night, Before sleeping only, I rem that I Ieft Pg 30 comments,...See my brain,...LOL,...Your comment brought a big smile on my face,..you took me back to MMz days dear,...I enjoyed reading your comment most Ramya,...
I couldn't agree more than what you have written ramya,...Yes Neil rocked today,...Not matter he come for 20 minutes or 2 minutes,..He rock with his character,...No one understand Sam more than Neil,..Even Radz too din understand her,...She believed Sam's words like sam that she loves Arjun,...But,Only Neil was there to understand sam and help her from refraining bad things in her life,...Even radz din knew that cox of Neil,Sam trusted her every time,...Once I said in ardhika thread,Neil couldn't help sam to come out of her vulnerable condition and he was glad seeing Radz,who did that to his sam,..So,He wants their friendship forever in sam's Life for sam and also for him,...He is the only one who knew Radz potential as a friend,..That's why he is a Gem yaar,...
Regarding colors,...LOL,...I just go with the color which suits their situation at present scenario,...According to krithika n co,..It was Radz feeling which will be the deciding factor in other's life,...But,For me it was Sam,..She was the deciding factor in all the 4 including her,...Green depicts Envy and inexperienced as you said and also her correct decision will be a green signal to all of them,...Cvs stick on to this point till end,..That's why Radz din accept arjun's love till she saw sam happy again,...Wonderful story Ramya,...Why they ended it abruptly?,...Missing Ardhika So much now,...
Hey I din do anything yaar,..Just the characters are playing their roles dear,...My part is nothing and if you wanna give credit to anyone,..Then It should be the cvs who written these 4 characters,...But,I'm so glad that you liked this piece deary,...I hope,I will do justification to it,...Love you too deary,..TC,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -rosel-

Renu...congrats on becomin a goldie..
i loved the latest update esp areil showdown..hope they had shown this in dym...

Will comment on previous chapters soon...

Rose,..Rose,...
Thank you sooo much dear,...All credit should goes to our Ardhika for making me goldie,...Lol😆,...There thoughts are hounding me even after show closure,...
Waiting eagerly for your comments dear,...
And when you are going to update Diwali part 2 os,...Waiting for that too,..Update ASap,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

superb.
waiting for d three to move forward wid dere plan..

Thank you shruti,...
I'm glad you liked this piece,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubahara

Nice update renu 😊

Thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hanishank

super update renu...now a days u are the only person giving me the ardhika presence...thank u very much

Thanx Hani,...
M glad you liked this piece and me too felt bad that our forum looks dry these days,...Just saw Iheartchai's update but still din read her update,...
Esprit also busy in her personal work,...M eagerly waiting for her story to unfold too,...Hopefully she will update soon,...
Missing Ardhika so much,...I rem one dialogue of Ardhika studio scene,...Before Dawn,There will be huge dark,...It's cox it's waiting for light to eats up,...sth like that na,...
Like this,I too hope this silence is for welcoming our Ardhika/ahamica again,...I duno,..But I think too much these days,..Dont mind it na,...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lavv

Hey Renu...nice update...

Liked trio's analysis..ok..krithika z d master mind though...liked teji telling them radhika wnt love arjun bcz of sam n all...

Arjun never uttered d words to sam.. wen she told him also...he never replied to her for formality sake also..his actions made her think dat way..he has dat effect on gals I think..

Liked neil's questioning abt d photo.. n u used neil's warning to arjun abt radhika n sam scene nicely..while reading dat scene came back to me..

Its nice dat u showed sam's dreaming n she was sure dat its not arjun... on d show at d end only they showed it..ur's vl fill dat gap to show she got those dreams from a long time n all.. arjun z back to mission it seems...n radhika in nice dress z gng to make him go blank in his head..

Looking forward to see some nice ardhika moments

Thank you so much Lovv,...
Your comment made me to rem Arjun saying that it was Sam's Engagement to sam on sangeet Rehearsal,...If nandhini and saral din spoil sam's mind,then she will never try to see whom Arjun really loves,...and Yes,I personally felt there should be Arjun-Neil interaction before their engagement or marriage,...But,They din have time to think about these and all,...
Somehow You are right,..Arjun is trying to concentrate on his mission,..Let's see what will happen next,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii friends,...I hope you all will like this update,...

The pink Maxi,which Radz wore in this update,...

https://www.fancybridesmaid.com/content/images/0000658_light_pink_prom_dresses_2013light_pink_chiffon_maxi_dress_wm.jpeg

As usual ignore my grammatical errors here and there in this update,...

Episode 21 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

It's said that You have to be Sure when you put your feet in the rightplace before stand firm,...Yes,..Today Radz understood the real meaning for those words,...After a week leave,..Today she is entering Birdsong with eyes full of dreams,...She felt it's the place to live her life the fullest,..To the maximum,...and its the same place where all her dreams gonna come true,...She was bit emotional,...Her lost in thoughts were disturbed by Sam,...

Sam:Chasni,...Where are you yaar?,...I'm talking with you only,...

Radz:Sam,...I,...I was joining after a long leave na,..So,...

Sam:Long leave???,..Just a week yaar,...Ok,...Pagal,..Listen,..I'm going to Neil's cabin to see the arrangements,..You just prepare yourself for few minutes and show our final presentation to Arjun once before you present,..cox I din mail him the alterations you made in our presentation yesterday night,...Ok,...And I think,..Maybeline guys were in,...All the best chasni,...

Radz hugged sam,...

Radz:Thank you sam,...

Sam:Hmmm,...and I think,they gonna faint seeing you,..Really,You are looking like a Baby doll yaar,...

Radz smiled at sam's comment,...

Radz:Sam,...You na,...

Sam:Ok,..Ok,..Jokes apart,...Let's go,...

Saying so,Sam went to Neil's cabin and Radz too kept her bag on her table after taking her pendrive to show the PPT to Arjun,...First her eyes searched her friends presence, who were in conference room discussing something,...Then,It reached Arjun's cabin,...She glared Arjun, who was busy in talking with some one in his mobile,...

Radz innervoice:Today,I will definitely ask Arjun sir about that mysterious call,...I never let any harm reach sam again cox of you sir,...If it was nothing,Then,Why you tried to conceal?,...Something is there,.You are trying to hide from us sir,...sure,I will find what it is,...Arjun Sir,...

Radz took a deep breathe and tried to go to Arjun's cabin was stopped by Teji,Zubin and Krithika,...

Zubin:Wow,...Chasni,...You are so pretty yaar,..If a Beauty contest held today,...I bet,...You only be the winner yaar,...

Teji:Haan chasni,...You look so beautiful today yaar,..What's special?,...

Radz:Thank you teji,zubin,...Nothing special teji,..Sam only asked me to wear this dress,...And I wanna show this presentation once to Arjun sir Teji,...So,...Please,...

Saying so,Radz tried to move was stopped by krithika,...

Krithika:Harre,...Chasni,...Leave it yaar,...Maybeline guys were already in,..And Piyali mam calling you,...

Radz:Before meeting mam,I will show this ppt once to Arjun sir na,...Please,...

Zubin grabbed the pendrive from Radz and began,

Zubin:Chasni,...Leave tension yaar,...We will show it to Arjun sir,..You meet Piyali mam first,...She wants to meet you,..Go yaar,...

Saying so,they dragged Radz to Piyali's cabin,..Arjun,who accidently turned that side had a little glimpse of Radz back,...But,It was hided by teji,..So,He ends the call and came out of his cabin to have a full vision,...But,Radz went from there with her friends before he comes,...Then,Arjun checked Radz table there,...He found her bag alone,...He lost in some thoughts for a while standing there alone,...

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Meanwhile In Piyali cabin,...

Radz:Excuse me Mam,...

Piyali:Yes,..Radhika,..come inside,...

Radz:Thank you mam,...

Piyali: How are you?,...How's your health now?,...

Radz:I'm fine mam,...

Piyali:good,..

Radz: Why you called me mam?,...

Piyali:I din call you Radhika,...Anyways,You are looking good today,...

Radz:Thank you mam,...

Piyali:Teji,What are you doing here?,...

Teji:Mam,..Woooh,...I came with chasni to,...

Right then,Neil entered the cabin and began,

Neil:Wow,..Chasni,...Looking so pretty yaar,...Today after conference,In lunch party,You should dance with me yaar,..No excuse,..Ok,...

Radz smiled at Neil's comment and began,

Radz:Neil,..Party???,...

Piyali:No radhika,...Neil,..Party will be there, only if this conference become success,...So,you ppl should work for that,...Understand,.. Before working,success wont come easily,...

Neil:I knew,...It was already a grand success Mam,...And Success will come before working too,..What chasni?,..Am I right yaar?,..

Piyali:How???,...

Neil:Ya,..It will come in our Dictionary mam,...If you don't have faith in my words check the Dictionary too,...

Piyali laughed at Neil's comment and began,

Piyali:If I talked with you for another few minutes,...I'll forgot all my tension and my works too,,...Ok,..I think,Now time to greet those Maybelline Ppl,...And Radhika,..All the best,..do well,...Neil,You made all arrangements in conference Room right,...

Neil:Yes,..It was perfectly ready mam,..just chasni's presentation and all our presence there is pending,...

Piyali:Good,...I'll meet you all there,...

Saying so piyali went out of the cabin,...

Teji:Neil,chasni,I'll come after few minutes yaar,...

Both nodded yes to Teji,...After Teji left,Neil holded Radz shoulder and began,...

Neil:Chasni,...You are looking too good but still I miss something in your face today yaar,...

Radz:What Neil?,...

Neil:Your smile yaar,...

Radz smiled lightly,...Seeing this, Neil began,...

Neil:Chasni,...You know one thing yaar,..The prettiest smile has more power to hide the Deepest secret in this world too yaar,...So,Always keep smiling like this,...

Radz nodded yes and began,...

Radz:And Neil,Tell me one thing,...From Where Dishonesty and Betrayal starts in a relationship?,...Whether It's from telling Big lies or Keeping small secrets Neil,...

Neil:I dunno What makes you to ask this or why you are asking this?,...But,According to me,It was cox of maintaining small secrets yaar,...

Radz:But,Telling Big lies is also wrong in a relationship na Neil,...

Neil:I agree yaar,...But to maintain that small secret only,you are telling big lies na,... And Keeping secrets with someone is no different than lying to them chasni,... So,Hidden secrets has powerful impact in maintaining a Relationship yaar,...Ok,Leave all these,...Let's go now,...

Saying so Neil tried to move,..Radz again continued,...

Radz:Neil,..What do you think about Arjun sir?

Neil understood that something hitching Radz mind continuously cox of yesterday's happenings,..He smiled hearing this and began,

Neil:Chasni,...My thinking about Arjun is not important now yaar,...Only Sam's wish is important for me,...You don't think about any now,..Just concentrate on the conference chasni,...Because,Today is an important day in your life chasni,...you climbed up in your career within few months and today's conference will be another milestone for your career yaar,...So, Leave unwanted thoughts in your mind and focus on today's presentation alone yaar,...Ok,...Let's go,...,...

Radz:Hmmm,...

Saying so,Neil holds Radz friendly and both walked towards conference hall,...

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Meanwhile Zubin and krithika,who were busy in noticing Arjun out of his cabin started discussing something,...

Zubin:What yaar?,..Seriously Teji is correct,...I couldn't find any krithika,..Please leave this game na,...If Arjun or Sam found this,..We will be in a big problem yaar,...

Krithika:No zubin,...See,...Have you noticed Radhika's restlessness when we dragged her to piyali mam's cabin,...And all of sudden,Why she came in a pretty dress yaar,..Usually,She will be in normal dress na,...

Zubin:Krithika,..Please stop yaar,..She said na,..she has to show PPt to Arjun sir,...And Dress was Sam's wish,...

Krithika:Ya,...I know,...Ok,...I accept Radhika was innocent,...But,Why Arjun sir tried to see Radhika and He even came near her table to check yaar,..Then,What will you say about this now?,...

Right then,Teji,who was annoyed in playing this game joining with Zubin and krithika came there and began

Teji:zubin,..Krithika,...Please,Stop this game yaar,..See I'm sweating in AC cox of you guys,...I cant lie to chasni yaar,..When Piyali mam said she din call Radhika and asked me why I'm there,...I was froze yaar,..Really It's a difficult task to lie,...Neil came there or else,..I might have caught,...If chasni found these things,She will also be hurt yaar,...Sorry guys,I wont continue this game further,..And I don't need to prove any about chasni yaar,...

Saying so,Teji went away from there ignoring Krithika's call,...

Krithika:Teji,...Listen,..Teji,..

Zubin also irritated on krithika and began,

Zubin:I think Teji was right Krithika,...I too din like playing this game,...Conference gonna start in few minutes,...Leave all these na,..What we will get in finding who loves who yaar?,...Waste of time Krithika,...I heard Samrat sir gonna give us party here in our office,..If this conference become success,...So,Let's enjoy our day yaar,...Please leave all this na,...Please Krithika,...

Krithika nodded yes to zubin unwillingly,...

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In Arjun's cabin,...

Arjun,who was thinking about something deeply came back to his present by sam's call,...

Sam:Arjun,..Are you busy?,...

Arjun:No Sam,...All came,...Shall we start?,...

Sam:Ya,..And Arjun,..Chasni showed you the changes she made in the PPT na,...

Arjun:No sam,...No need for that,...And sam I want to talk with you,...

Sam smilingly began,...

Sam:What Arjun?,..Anything important?,...

Arjun wearing a facade began,...

Arjun:Yes Sam,..It's very important,...I was longing for that moment since years,..

Sam:Then bolo,...

Arjun: Sam I,..I,...

Right Then, Teji entered the cabin and began,..

Teji:Arjun sir,...Sam,...Piyali mam calling,...

Sam:Ok Arjun,..Let's talk later,...I think its time for presentation,...Let's go,...

Arjun:Ya,..Sure,...

Saying so Arjun and Sam walked towards conference room with sam holding Arjun's arms,..

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In conference room,...

All were waiting in conference room to see the presentation,...Sam was busy in talking with Zubin and Krithika,...Whereas Arjun was searching for someone there,..He finally asked piyali itself,..

Arjun:Piyali,..Shall we start?,..Where is Radhika?,..Today,She gonna present right,...

Piyali:Yes Arjun,..She will come with neil,...I think,...

Before piyali completing her phrase,..Neil and Radz entered the conference room,...

Piyali:Arjun,you asked and she came,...

Arjun was stunned seeing his Radhika in an elegant Pink Maxi,...Infact,Arjun forgot himself in her beauty,...He stared at her from her foot to her eyes,...Meanwhile Neil excused everyone there to insert Pendrive in the Projector,..But It doesn't make any sense for Arjun,..Radz too felt odd while seeing Arjun back cox his intense stare tingles something in her too like him,...

Neil:So,Sorry for the delay,...Radhika did most of the work in this project,..So,If she presents,it will be nice,...

Maybeline lady:Great,..Radhika,..go ahead and present your idea,...

Hearing this,She turned her gaze towards the projector screen and took a deep breathe before starting the presentation,...But Arjun's eyes were still glued on Radz,...

Radz:Our smile is the most beautiful thing in this world,...It's the happiness which we find right under our Nose,...That precious smile was insured by our lips,...And Maybelline Newyork,with our hydrating formula,we are helping you to retain your happiness by our colourful Lipsticks which will enlighten your confidence level more in your precious smile,...Here in our factory,we sell those Lipsticks which are your real life confidence booster,...And In our Ad,we sell our hopes to you,...

All were stunned by Radz performance and applauded her,...Radz was happy seeing this and her smile vanished when her eyes met those intense pair of Arjun's which were still busy in staring her,...

Right then,A Maybelline guy made an announcement,...

Maybelline Guy:wow,..We loved this presentation and we are ok with your pamphlets and designs,...And We also wanna declare another happy news for Birdsong,...I mean,..One of My friend was looking for a cooldrinks Ad within a week,...I recommended Birdsong and He saw your previous presentations,... He was satisfied in the performance of Birdsong especially this Girl Radhika's,..Keep it up,...Now,He wanna give this contract to Birdsong,...I hope you people will accept this proposition,..

Piyali,sam,Neil,Teji,Zubin,Samrat and everyone there were happy hearing this from Maybelline ppl,...

Maybelline lady:But,There is one problem,...He will never recheck your presentation or Ads,..I mean he wants final Ad by next week with some adventurous concept,...

Samrat:Ok,..It's not a tough task for us to do an Ad within a week,..But,Without knowing Brand name and location,..How can we proceed?,..

Another Maybelline Guy:Brand Name is Mountain Dew,...

All were stunned hearing this,...Cox it was really a big project for Birdsong,...

Piyali:Oh!,...We are so glad to hear this,...Ya,..We will do this definitely,...

Maybeline guy:I'll make further arrangements with My friend regarding this,..He will come online tonight and will contact you,...You discuss with him about other things,...

Samrat:Thank you,..Thank you so much,...

After the Maybeline ppl left,...Samrat announced a Dancing party and a lunch at Birdsong as they don't have enough time for a big party,...

Samrat:Today We have party here at Birdsong,...Enjoy your day,...And this one is especially for our Star Radhika Mishra,...Now celebration time,..Make way for the star and Enjoy,...

All were started shouting in joy and carried Radz in their Arms to celebrate this special occasion,...Arjun was bit silent,...Last time, he was angry in seeing this happiness when Birdsong got the Maybelline Newyork Ad but Now, he too felt happy seeing radz smile,...When Sam tries to engage Arjun in their celebration,..He excused himself stating that he has some important work ,...Then, Sam joined the gang happily with Neil,...Neil was happy seeing Sam enjoying the celebration,..Even sam called him for a dance and both started dancing on "Ishq wala love song",...Radz,who was eating Ice cream with Teji also enjoyed a lot seeing their dance,...But her Enjoyment doesn't last long,...Her mobile started ringing continuously,...

Teji:Chasni,...I think your mobile is ringing yaar,..

Radz:What Teji,..I couldn't hear you cox of music,...

Teji shouted at her ears,...

Teji:Chasni,..Your mobile is ringing,...

Radz:HAan,.I can hear,..Dont shout yaar,...

Saying so,Radz checked her mobile and was shocked seeing 18 missed calls from her ma,...Teju noticed her tensed look began,

Teji:Hmmm,..Ok,...Finish eating yaar,..See Ice cream fell on your both hands,..

Radz:Teji,..18 missed calls from mom yaar,..I think something important Teji,..Or else mom wont call me,...

Teji:Ok,..Chasni,..Go slow yaar,...

Radz:Haan,..Ok,. Teji,..Listen,If Sam asks,Tell her I'll come after few minutes,..

Saying so, Radz ran out from there,...Teji too engaged himself busy in eating other flavor Ice creams,...

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Near staircase,...

Radhika went out of the party place near steps alone to call her ma,...She dialled her ma tensedly but,Her ma din pick her call,...She was panic whether something bad happened to her dadaji or her ma ,...

Radz.holding her mobile began,...

Radz:Ma,..Pick the call na,...Please God,..Nothing should happen to my Dadaji and my ma,..Why I'm thinking like this?,...Ok,..It's better I call Ankush bhaiya,...

Saying so, Radz turned and bumped into Arjun accidently,...Arjun holds her from falling,.. Radz too hold his chest for support,.while holding, she also colored Arjun's white shirt with her chocolate icecream Hands,...In this she puts her mobile down,...Arjun lost himself completely seeing Radz this closer,...Both steadied themselves after an intense stare,..Radz took her hands away from his shirt and also felt awkward with Arjun's intense stare,.. she din utter any,..But seeing chocolate stains on Arjun's white shirt and feeling Arjun's hold on her arms still,She began,..

Radz:Sorry sir,..I din see,...

Saying so,she averted her gaze down,...But,Arjun din release his hold on her arms,..So,Radhika faced him again sternly and noticed Arjun's proximity,...She tensedly began

Radz:Sirrr,..

Arjun ignored her words and released his hold on her one hand,...Radhika tried to move but Arjun pulled her again towards him,...Radz was puzzled by this and began tensedly,

Radz:Sir,...What are you doing?

Arjun again ignored her words and he let his hand beneath her face,...Radz's heart started beating faster,...She couldn't stop the racing in her heart seeing Arjun's hand coming near her neck,...She swallowed hard,...Arjun was totally lost seeing this,...and he couldn't breathe hearing the racing of her heart,...His parted lips was longed for something,..His heart knew what it is,..So,He tried hard to control his heart's desire,...Their lips were Barely few inches apart,..Both can hear other's heart beat and the silence prevailing there increased their tenderness ... Radz couldn't tolerate this proximity,...She even had some unknown tears in her eyes,..She averted her gaze completely from Arjun and continuously chanted one word "sir" to get release from this unknown pain,...Radz closed her eyes tightly while chanting,...

Radz:Sir,...Sir,...

Meanwhile Arjun's hand reached her neck,..But,He stopped Before touching her's,..and hold her forefinger firmly,...Feeling Arjun's hold on her finger,Radz slowly opened her eyes,.. Arjun glared her back with his parted lips,. Both stared even without blinking their eyes,...He cleaned the Icecream stain on her neck with her fore finger,...Radz felt the touch of her finger on her neck itself somewhat weird because of Arjun's hold,...But,the racing of her heart became normal and this time she stares him back without any awkward sense,...After moping around her neck with her finger,Arjun released his hold on her finger and on her arm as well,...Then, he distanced himself from her and pretends to clean the stains on his shirt using his handkerchief,...Radz felt relaxed after arjun distanced himself from her,..Then,she remember her ma and so she searched her mobile,which she puts down accidently while arjun cleaning the stains on his shirt,...She took her mobile parts hurriedly and started mantling it hastely,...Arjun noticed the tension on her face and began,

Arjun:Cant you know how to walk properly?,...See, you again ruined my shirt Radhika,...

Hearing this,Radz began,

Radz:Oh,...Sorry sir,...

Saying so,Radz tried to move was stopped by Arjun's hold on her hand,..

Arjun:What happened Radhika?,...Any problem?,...Dadaji and ma is fine right,...

Right then,Radz mobile started ringing,...Radz was shocked seeing the caller ID,...and began,

Radz:Sir,...Now I'm not in a position to talk with you,...Please,...You go from here,...

Arjun:First answer my question Radhika,...

Radz:Sir,I have to attend the call,...Please,leave my hand,...Sam is waiting for you in the party,..

Arjun:Is it from Your ma,Radhika?,...

Radz:Sir,...Why You are not trying to understand,what I'm saying?,...I dunno anything,...Please,leave my hand,...

Arjun left her hand seeing her welled up teary eyes,...Radz ran out from there without giving any heeds to Arjun,...

Precap:Piyali asking suggestion for some adventurous location spot for their New project,...Neil and sam suggesting Rishikesh let Arjun and Radhika into an intense Stare,...

Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago

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