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Posted: 9 years ago
and I guess...kwashiyon pe likhi...manmarzian son played first time in the epi 5. ...
that too between radhika and Sam ;-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hanishank

watched epi 6...
guess birdsong first intro...
Neil entry was like a hero...

changu mangu nangu...Neil and bonnie
ad campaign is too good..
Neil teasing Bonnie also noticeable...well picturised...

Mrs chadda was also good...later in the show we didn't see her :-(

seriously a good potential office environment and its drama ...SP changed to a family/revenge crap...hating SP much more now...

missing office humor and their discussions very badly...


That revenge plot spoiled the fun you know..Why can't the trp audience start watching out-of-the box stories with subtle romance?! For them,the makers had to change the plot into a revenge fest!
Nandini entry turned the whole thing over..
I knew how this story was meant to be..A girl (Radhika) fulfilling her dreams,dealing with new challenges,offfice bonding and friendship..Arjun the mystery man coming to destroy the owner of Birdsong and her daughter ..but falling in love with chirpy bubbly Radhika.. the marriage was not definitely not on the cards so soon..I wanted Arjun to confess his feelings towards Radhika before getting married to her.. And Radhika slowly reciprocating her feelings (without sacrificing so much)..With lots of office romance thrown in(hiding from others)..A relationship like a normal guy and girl..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hanishank

watched epi 5...radhika was looking very beautiful in that costume...a simple pendent and in that salwar...
that function of ridhima ...very well decorated the house...the bonding of radhika and dadaji is too good.

there was a perfect sync between characters... I found that this sync missed when revenge plot started...

epi end dialogues...
Radhika:sub kuch badalne wala hai
Sam:ye sab bakwas hai Neil...kuchnahi badalne wala hai

what a perfection in the dialogues and characters!!!


Star plus pressurised the PH to introduce a negative character to generate more trps..thats how all the SP shows work right?? Negativity pool should be named Star Plus.. I can proudly say I never watch Star Plus(except the DYM months)...I prefer youth shows or romances..or animal planet 😆..



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Posted: 9 years ago
Alright, chapter 2 is updated for Someone Like You


By the way, i'll try and get loads of writing done this week because starting this weekend, Christmas parties will be keeping me busy! So the updates might not be as quick as now 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mmzmahi


That revenge plot spoiled the fun you know..Why can't the trp audience start watching out-of-the box stories with subtle romance?! For them,the makers had to change the plot into a revenge fest!
Nandini entry turned the whole thing over..
I knew how this story was meant to be..A girl (Radhika) fulfilling her dreams,dealing with new challenges,offfice bonding and friendship..Arjun the mystery man coming to destroy the owner of Birdsong and her daughter ..but falling in love with chirpy bubbly Radhika.. the marriage was not definitely not on the cards so soon..I wanted Arjun to confess his feelings towards Radhika before getting married to her.. And Radhika slowly reciprocating her feelings (without sacrificing so much)..With lots of office romance thrown in(hiding from others)..A relationship like a normal guy and girl..


yes mahi...
SP spoiled everything...if the story would have been like the way u said...it will be eyeful to watch,feel and cherish for long...
pchhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
totally agree guys...

bcz of SP , a -ve character n so much melodrama came...


otherwise, we could hav got radhika's adjusting to new office n work problem ...n office romance btween ardhika, nesam n others could hav been there...

like weekend group outing,shopping, gossip, parties, movies , masti as well as friendship growth slowly...


i think dats wat PH wanted...but SP ruined it...

hmm...
Edited by lovv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hmm...as usual just a thought...which i badly wanted to see on DYM...


k .just was thinking from d same BG. Ardhika-prerna...

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Arjun after telling her come fast, leaves towards d car, which he took a turn to go home n drop prerna aunty...

prerna also reached d car...n he asked her to sit inside...as he sat in d drivers seat, waiting for radhika...

they both looked in d direction wer radhika has to come, but she z not there...

arjun was mumbling, now wer did she gone...a bit louder dat prerna heard him...

she says "i am also thinking wer did she gone...she was walking this side only, wen i looked back...now wer did she go...i vl go n see"

arjun says "aunty, aap rukiye, i vl go ..check on her..."

he comes out n walks few steps n sees, dat radhika gone back inside to wash her hands..n was talking to a little kid happily...


arjun was just staring at her...he didnt notice wen they both said thier byes...n radhika started walking towards d road to cross...wen d little kid called her...just she stopped n turned to look at him...


dats wen a bike came fast n gng to dash her...d little kid called didi louder...which made arjun come back to reality...n arjun was in swift move dragged radhika to d side...n was scolding her like..."radhika tumhara dhimak kaha hai...wat wer u thinking while crossing d road...its not ur hrishikesh...bla bla bla..."


radhika didnt even say anything...just was looking down...dat little kid ran fast n was stading beside them...

prerna , who came to check on them...n saw arjun staring at radhika...smilingly gone back to d car...was thinking they vl come back wen he comes dowm from his dream land...lol...


//k i just thought...for radhika n arjun saving d other z comes naturally...//


d kid looks at both arjun n radhika n says to arjun "bhaiyaa didi got hurt her toe..n its bleeding, aur aap didi ko dhant rahe ho?"...n d kid checks her...n calls radhika "didi aap thik hai na?"

radhika comes back n just looks at d kid n says "mei think hun rahul...", n turns to arjun n says "sir, vo bike tha, lorry nahi hai, i was just gng to move away, u came n dragged me...n my toe was hurt due to dat...n ooper se, u r scolding me...if d bike hit me also, i could hav got minor bruises only..."...n mumbles " sir i know u r worried...but its k...hame chalna chahiye..."...

she turns to d kid n says "bye rahul", d kid says "sorry di, meine hi aapne bhulaya...u forgot these flowerrs while washing ur hands...n gives d flowers...", n radhika says "thanks rahul...n its k...i hav seen d bike...sir tho hamesha gussa mein rehtha hai..vo inka aadat hai...n she just kisses d kid on his cheek...n says good bye..."...n d kid also kisses her n saying good bye leaves them...

b4 he leaves , looks at arjun n says "bhaiyya, aap didi ko mat dhatiyegaa...she z so cute n she talks so sweetly...how can u scold
her...n asks arjun to bend down...arjun stares at him, d kid drags arjun's hand...so he bends down then d kid says "aap blind ho kya...y cant u make her ur galfriend...if she was in my class n school, i made her my gal friend...n all d boys would hav been jealous..n he winks at him n try to leave..."...


arjun just stops him by his collar n says in d same low voice like they r discussing some NSA details ...n asks him "which class u r studying n which school n how may gal friends u hav till now?"

d kid says "i know u r jealous vth me...bcz di z speaking to me so sweetly...i hav seen u r watching us from distance...wat can i do...dnt u think i am too handsome...i know all gals in my class say dat...cant help it...by d way...i am in 2nd standard, St.mary's school...n he z gng to say something else..."

arjun stops n says " i vl make sure, ur di didnt come dat side by mistake also...now run away..."

d kid laughs n saying bye to both runs to his mom...winking at arjun n smiling though...

radhika was gone to wash d toe, so arjun try to go thre...wen she walks near to him ...he clears his throt n says "oh...i thought u didnt see d bike...just thought of saving u...how z ur toe now? ...anyways its getting late come we vl go...if u want i vl drop u at a clinic"...

radhika says "sir, i understand...clinic ki jarrorath nahi hai...aap ke gaadi mei first aid box nahi hai kya?"

he says yes n they both walk to d car..."prerna asks her y thye took this much time to arjun..."

b4 arjun say anything ...radhika says to prerna wat happend...n prerna just asks radhika "r u ok", radhika says "i am bilkul tik hun maa...arjun z more worried...she smiles"

arjun looka at her n says "shut up to radhika n hands over d first aid kit..."...

prerna knows ...observed he z still worried but cooling down...

arjun asks prerna "aunty tell me d address i vl drop u guys..."...

radhika says "sir app hame vo 1st signal tak chodiye...hum chale jaathein sir..."

arjun looks at prerna n asks her "radhika i am not asking u so shut up...n looks at prerna n says "aunty aap kahiye"

prerna looks at him n knows he z acting rude to radhika n says "arjun beta, we decide to go for shopping..." b4 she can complete

radhika says "sir, hum dono shopping jaane ka plan kiya tha , mandir ke baadh...vo kya hai na...diwali hai na kal...we didnt do shopping bcz of work...so we wanted to now...so aap hame waha chodiyein..."


prerna says "haan beta...hume waha chodiyein"

arjun thinks for a while n says "its ok aunty i vl drop u guys to d shopping..."


both radhika n prerna was stunned to listen dat...

radhika says "sir app tik ho na?"

prerna just smiles n says "its k arjun ...dnt worry ...we vl manage..."

arjun says "its ok aunty, i dnt hav work anyway...i cant leave u on some road...i dnt like it...n radhika also got hurt..."

radhika says " i am not dat much hurt n i can walk...shopping ke aage no hurt n pain...just happiness...she smiles broadly...n i dnt think u wanted to come inside r8...then wat z d use...bcz i knw u wanted to drop ma home r8..."


prerna smiles n knows he was dng this for her too...smwer she felt it...n other half dng for radhika...she knows n says "k ...if u r dropping us...then u hav to come vth us shopping...if its k then u can drop us...otherwise ...u can leave beta..."

arjun thinks n says "hmm...ok i vl come vth u aunt"...

radhika smiles n says "u r coming to buy something fro sam r8...i know..."

prerna just observes arjun n didnt say anything...arjun also wnt say anything...



so they enter shopping mall...after arjun park his car in d parking lot...radhika calls him n says in which shop n which floor they were...


so arjun enters n sees n stops there... "its totally ladies shop...werever u trun wat u call it lehenagas , sarees...n all..."


prerna calls him ...so he goes near them...wer radhika was selecting a saree...he was surprised bcz already they selected few...n still dng...


wat these two buying...for whom all these things wer d thoughts he z having...


so prerna says looking at his face ...smiles n says "we purchased for ourselves n radhika did it for mala ji n her di too...a saree to sam..."


he just nods...not knowing wat to say...

n then they both drag him to men's section...obviously he cant let them carry d bags...at least not aunty...so he took d bags from her...for which prerna gave him her broad smile...n radhika was carrying few bags...

n she was asking him "sir, aap diwali ki shopping katham kiya kya...its d 1st diwali i am celebrating out isde...n vthout my family..."


she sounded low...bt next sec...was smiling n asking "sir aap, aapke mama ke saath shopping chlathe hai kya?"

arjun stiffens...n b4 he could answer they enter d shop...


arjun just sits...n prenra calls him "arjun which one u like?"

arjun stares at her ...so she says "just think it as my diwali gift to u...dnt say no..please...like neil...u r also like my son...so accept this..."...

arjun was stunned ...snt knwo wat to say...radhika says "sir, maa z r8...see she gav me a saree too...u can also take a gife...u know wat u can also gift her something...ab feeling better...so just choose...i choose d dress for neil...as u r here ...u can choose wat u want..."


arjun just stares at her n asks her " i dnt know much abt it...turing to prerna says "i vl accept d dress aunty...", n then says to radhika "for me also u select...thinking i am not here..."...

she makes a face...n takes a "pink color shervani..."...

prerna knows wat radhika z dng ...arjun face was lol worth...n says "radhika WTH r u choosing...neil ke liye good one, for me...this...get out..."...

n he looks thro n chooses one maroon shervani...n shows it to prerna...both radhika n prerna like it...

then he drags them to another store...where ladis dresses r there...

he says to prerna "aunty aap bhi kuch lelo...watever u like here..."

prerna argues...but he says if she wnt take...then he vl aslo not take it...radhika was just smiling at them...they looks like mother-son...she was feeling happy...


at last prerna nods...n asks radhika to select n radhika says "sir aap tho bahut rich hai na...so kuch bhi chalega haina...", she knows...he nevr bother vth money...she has seen dat in his eyes...bcz its d costliest designer store in this maall...


so she looks at a lehenga n asks prerna "maa y do u hav to wear saree...y cant u take this lehenga...just look at this how cute it z...its maroon color...vth smwat heavy work...but its elegant in look...

arjun just looks at dat...n he knows prerna wnt say yes for dat...

prerna says "radhika if u like dat...u can buy it...i vl buy it for u...do u want it..."

radhika says "maa, no way...it was good n all...but no way i am buying...n not u too...lets go we vl see some saree"

n then they select a saree to prerna...arjun smiles n pays for it...

radhika vth smile says "sir, aap mujhe kuch gift nahi dhege kya...i helped u to choose d dress r8..."


arjun scoffs n sarcastically says "wow...wat a slection u hav done...n u vl get gift...if u keep ur mouth shut for another hour...a big gift for sure...n y u r asking for gift...ur money katham hogaya kya...u joined as a trainee...how u r speding this much money radhika"..at last he asked his doubt


radhika mumbles "kadoos..."...then says "aap kyun directly say dat u dnt gift other ppl...anyways i was just asking to see ur face reaction...i dnt need ur gift..."n "sir, mein itha bhi poor nahi hoon..we hav our own shop, we hav some property n all...we r rich but not like sam or u...i am working bcz i wanted to not entirely for money...all these years i am saving money too n my parents send me money...so"


then turning to prerna she says "maa chaliye, bahuth book lagi...vl eat something..."


arjun hits his forhead...

prerna says "arjun chalo , we vl eat something...radhika vl eat us if we dnt take her to restaurant..."

arjun says " i know, she z bukkad...n vl eat us alive..."

they enter d food court n order...


radhika got call from home n was talking to them for d past 10 mins...she already told everything abt today to her dadaji...n prerna also talking to tehm on d phone...so arjun told prerna he vl b back n gone...


n completing d lunch, arjun dropped them home...they said thanks n asked him to stay there...en prerna sked abt his parents...he said he z orphan...both radhika n prerna felt lump in their throat...n prerna got back to form n says "arjun u dnt hav to feel sad...hum hei na.." n asked him to stay there just caressing his hair affectionately..


but arjun wanted to leave so he tried to leave...but radhika reminded his shopping bags...but she noticed there r two more bags...she asked prerna...but she said its arjun's...so radhika asked him "sir, aap bhi shopping ki...hmm nice..."

b4 he could leave...prerna syis radhika y cant u give ur gift to him now...may b it vl bcm arjun 1st gift for this diwali...

arjun was staring at prerna...so she says "radhika bought few gifts for everyone...not only for her family...for BS gang too...she was thinking wether to buy u r not... she cleared dat confusion n bought something...no gift z costly...its just her affection she showed thro it...come home tomorrow arjun...everyone z coming"n she leaves...


radhika came there...n "sir, yeh chotasa gift aap ke liye...i hope u vl like it...n giving her hand...she shakes his hand n says

"Happy Diwali sir..."..


he after staring at her...wished her back n leave from there...



// at home he was sitting on his bed...n looking at d gift...he slowly opens it...he just stres at it...a paper falls down from it...he takes dat n keep it aside...

just stares at d snow globe...shich has a beautiful house decorated for christmas, a chirstmas tree...n 3 pics below d globe on d stand...one look at d pics...he paled...thought for a while...n then let it go...even though he liked d pics...he z surprised n shocked to see dat...


he kept d snow globe aside n took d paper...

Happy Diwali sir...

i know u hate me...now i dnt thinsk so...bcz u r not dat rude now...after lonavala...i think we becom friends...so i hope atleast u vl open this gift...n dnt be angry, i vl explain...dats y this letter...


1st dat snow globe vth dat beautiful house, n n dat tree z for a reason...even thought hrishikesh z riligious place...my family n me like christmas n shring of not only cakes n sweets...its a festival of sharing happiness...its like diwali...not only abt sweets n crackers...abt light n sharing of happiness...

// i knw its rubbish...dnt knw wat to fill so...//

like dat house n dat stars in d globe...i want u n ur family always happy n sharing dat light..u vl always find d light from d stars

n always d x-mas tree carries presents below it...i hope u always find d wishes u wanted below dat tree wenevr u look at dat...he just looked at d tree inside d snow rich globe...


dat 1st pic...its arjun vth a kid sleeping on his lap under a tree from orphange... i knw...but dnt b angry...ur secrent z safe...i visit dat orphange sometimes...so got to see u... i want u to relaxed like dat always...n hav dat content smile ...

dadji says

"No one's life could be forever perfect and ever filled with smiles and happy meals. Life wasn't a party everyday. And just because life was never fair to you, it didn't mean you contempt anyone who smiles throughout the day without a care of the world - you may never know how they cry themselves to sleep every night."

//not my words...for sure.. read it many times on different places..but now i hav taken it ..its by writer munch kin...all rights reserved to d quote makers only...//

so smile always...it vl solve half of ur problems...


2nd pic... //arjun vth prerna...they r laughing abt something from d mall.. n arjun sees dat it was pasted few hours back...bcz it z pasted on some other pic ...so...its not digital type //


wen i looked at u both...u both r perfect...so wanted to remove d previous pic...but dnt hav time...so pasted on it...

wenver u feel lonely ...just look at her...she vl always b there for you...like ur mother...she already started treating u like her son...b happy always like dat...


3rd pic...//its a person sitting on d sea shore balancing on his hands backside...legs streched...watching d dun set// next watch a

sunrise sir...u need more sunshine...then only he keenly watched d pic...n its him in d pic...

i am not stalking u sir, its just a coincidence...me, neil, teji , sam gone to d beach one evening...after some time they wanted to leave..neil n sam left...me n teji wer there...wen we wer walking...we just took few pics...wen i was taking teji's pics, i saw a guywatching intently d sunset from distance...didnt know its u...d posture n d guy looked deep in thought ,even though he was watching d sunset...i just clicked...wen we wer leaving...i hav seen u walking from there...so it happend like dat...


// k i hav seen one of radhika's off screen pic, vth dat relaxed posture n sun set...but i like beaches n sun set...so its vth arjun...//



n y glass globe wen u r so angry always...n can break it in a sec like my mobile...bt now i knw i knw u wnt do dat...life z precious like glass...breaking it may be easy...but cant make it back...so keep it safely...

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Radhika



he just reads d last lines...n thinks for a while n keeps it inside a drawer inside wardrobe...wen he z keeping dat he touched few things n smiles n takes it out...


he looks at d bracelet...yes it was radhika's...from dat hut wen he left her there...


her payal..wen she was leaving his cabin...her payal fell down...so he took dat...


n dat small notepad...radhika's diary type...wer she writes her thoughts..he read dat totally...he didnt took it...its just happnd wen sam took his shirt from dat table dat morning at their apartment...




he just keeps them there itself...


n took dat shopping bag...n takes out d sherwani...n smiles...he really liked prerna aunty...she just reminds him, his mother...her

smile n affection reminds her...his smile falthers thinking another person who z another mother figure to him...n his eyes falls on d globe...n he forgets wat he was thinking...


after some time...he keeps dat in d wardrobe...n takes another two bags...

opens it...he smiled looking at it...it vl suit her a lot...n it vl match vth his sherwani...but...it vl always remain as his wish only
...
took d next n opend it...it his favourite...n its simple n vl look good on her...then he thinks y he bought dat...he knows both vl suit radhika...but y he bought...wen she looked at d lehenga ...he wanted to buy it for her...he wanted to see her in dat...so bought...next an orange n black saree...wen he looked at d saree...he wanted it for her...so just bought it...wen he left them at lunch time...
//its my wish dat arjun buys something secretly for radhika...may b in dat pet shop or in dat shop after swimming pool n all...like dat blue dress but its needed there...so some saree type secretly bcz he liked dat for her////


// dat dori scene lehenga...n u guys know orange saree...were he admires her vthout blinking//


he just looked at d tree inside d snow globe...n wished one day he can get too see all he wished n dreamed these days...



n keeps everyting safely...n goes to sleep...thinking radhika in dat saree today she wore...she was looking so good...n d kids dialog was replaying in his mind..

Edited by lovv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
cute scenario Lavanya..well done..Thank God you are continuing your thoughts from the last post u made..
Btw I didnt get one line..quoting that particular line

arjun stops n says " i vl make sure, ur di didnt come dat side by mistake also...now run away..."

could you please explain?





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Posted: 9 years ago
hello friends.in December and January i have exam so i must prepare for it.i will try to come sometime,bye take care of at😊
Edited by gardenteddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gardenteddy

hello friends.in December and January i have exam so i must prepare for it.i will try to come sometime,bye take care of at😊


dats nice to read...


oh...u also hav exams...prepare well yaar...


most of d ppl left...few r busy vth exams n work...


this thread already in comatose state it seems...lol


i vl come n check daily...hanishank comes n so mmzmahi...

hope rosel n renu vl come once in a while like esprit n geny...


gng to miss ur edits...


take care gal...
Edited by lovv - 9 years ago

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