SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 35

That was like one of the craziest yet most enjoyable NeSam update and a romantic ArDhika update 😉
I loved Neil and the lady's dialogue excahnge 😆 Belgium Choco-chip Ice Cream can do wonders 🤣
Well that air of awkwardness between ArDhika was so damn cute. And the Radio was hilarious (I suppose you wanted it to be cause when I read the last song I couldn't control myself 🤣 )
NeSam were so adorable in the end. A small part yet blissful...

P.S. To be honest I thought you forgot all about this SS but I am happy you proved me wrong 😃

wow. ur imagination is making me laugh like anything.

You could go Aww..so cute with regards to Neil...

A hilarious update.. But what's with Radhika's cheeks ?? I am guessing that Arjun may have kissed her..

Awesome Grace!! I love how you have kept the mystery behind what transpired between Ardhika that night... Arjun remembers and Radhika is clueless... hmmm... i want to know what really happened, lol.

Hi iheartchai. Am extremely curious Wat actually transpired btw radhika and arjun tat time. I went bac to ur periods update as to read whether I missed smth but no I have not... So Wat ever mystery it is pls update asap. I can't wait .it's lovely.

Originally posted by: lavv

ok, for d first time...i am first to comment...even though not in a r8 way...who cares...

i havnt seen d update n was gng to ask u...next thing update z there...

Thanks for taking time to update yaar...

as i said vth few stories always d wait z worth...

abt d title, liked it..., z it directing d ardhika ...anyway they r attached in emotional level already...vth neil n sam too...//i am guessing arjun kissed radhika...waiting to know d unfolding n thier reactions...

let me tell u it was total hilarious update for me...for some time i was laughing like a maniac, at some times i was just smiling n curious...

totally a fun roller coaster for me...

neil n d pregnat lady //dnt know d names of d great husband n wife ...lol// conversation was awesome...literally i was laughing n coughing some times...wat z dat , not d simple ice cream or belgium dark chocolate...lol...

u know wat made me laugh instead of continue reading...i was picturing d situation vth arjun as d driver, sam as pregnant lady n neil was d husband ...radhika in auto rikshaw chasing them.. d police was, cid abijeet n daya...ROFL...

n neil as such, radhika as d pregnant lady n arjun as d husband...lol n d same cid as police..

then, dnt hit me, arjun as d driver, kushi as d wife, arnav as d husband...

arjun driving, ridhima as wife, arman as husband, radhika following n vice versa

all this thinking made me laugh like hell...

neil n d pregnat lady was too fun to read...n pedestrian guy needed to b counted...

such a fun reading it...i read few fun n emotional scenes on pregnant woman ...this was total fun...

and , ardhika, i truly dnt know wat happend btwn them dat n68 n all, so was curious to know wen they wer thinking abt it...

but i liked d songs yaar, saibo z my fav...dat tumhe apna banane ka was also good...totally liked it...

arjun z feeling uncomfortable... good...

so radhika like a true detective, thought something wrong vth d dhaba food...great..

liked d mandir scene, d way she understood him...d pandit was good yaar...blessed both of them...

totally enjoyed...

looking forward to read next update...

take care...

Originally posted by: -AnnieQueen-

Hello dear

You are such a dedicated writer

And if there is dedication, the wait is worth it. I've seen this mesmerising dedication in some writers of this forum. Another one I remember is 'esprit_00'. I guess that's why this forum is still so worthy. Cause the amazing writers here truly care about the readers and the wonderful stories. So thanks a lot for such a wonderful story and wish you all the best😳

Originally posted by: jaben

It was a truly exciting chap. i'm so happy to read it.

I'm new to this forum n hav read ur story in the new year's eve. i culdn't stop but thanking you. u r just amazing. story is superb. 👏

Nesam r having very gud time with chases n police. lol. Rajat sir would hav wished to not see then again. wife n husband fighting for icecream. it was just amazing. neil had completely gone mad in that situation but yet he is enjoying after that. 😃

Ardhika my lovely couple. songs were just amazing n good in situation to make them more awkward.😉 The temple scene was very gud. I wish arjun would find his light soon.

wishing to read the next chap sooon. thank u sooo much.🤗

Originally posted by: tina59

nice one

neil's driving reminded me of the lonavla track where neil drove the truck when sam was screaming in fake pain ...

good to see the light romantic touch when they hold their gaze, again here looks like neil identifies his feelings but sam hasnt yet