wat to say...totallly loved it...everything z so good...first thing, dat dheere dheere se...its dat hrithik n sonam song r8...isn't it?...especially d 1st stanza...i was thinking TSM had d song from dat movie only...so its not...n then i really liked samrat-nandhu converation...how he said she also used her brother for her selfisheness...so looking forward to read story behind them...and ardhika...totally good...(so wat happend to d visit..did arjun buy her gift...can we expect something abt dat on next chapter...if possible)...loved how radhika made arjun take rest...n their conversation was too good...at last i was thinking y d dhaba guy z nervous...n thought may b arjun z glaring at him...but bhang ...never expected...its great...waiting to read their chidish actions next...lol...radhika's driving d way u explained was too good...samrat made arjun-radhika work together...great...may b an interior motive to avoid sam from arjun...thinking too much...dnt knw...teji's dialog "most uncomfortable 20 min of my life "...was ROFL...krithika perfect gossip queen ...n d way she said abt teji knowing all but keeping quiet until its needed to b said...z totally good...i loved zubin's dialogs...totally liked d trio teji-krithika-zubin...coming to neil-sam...wen i was reading dat flowers flying n baloon...just felt one thing total dreamy...thank god u made dat as dream...never expected they vl goto police station...lol...but true they r not salman n akshays...too good...lol...d police dialog was too good...n totally liked piyali-sam-neil...dialogsso neil already realised his feelings...good...i thought dat children was normal just u knw...i was thinking neil vl take d sis-brother to orphanage to join them...when d no increased.. thought how few gans use them for begging n all..here not expected they wer in d group vth d thief...it was good...totally enjoyed d update...looking forward to d next update...liked both d songs...
Dheere Dheere Se Song:
The Dheere Dheere Se song that inspired this SS and was used in Chapter 12 is the Tere Sheher Mein (TSM) Serial's remake/rendition of the original song from the movie Aashiqui. The only thing that is the same from the original song is the chorus part
Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se mere dil ko churana
Tum se pyaar humein kitna hai jaane jaana
Tumse milkar tumko hai bataana
This is the Original Aashiqui Song
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pKsD2GiQhOo[/YOUTUBE]
This is the Tere Sheher Mein Version
Female Version (Hiba Nawah)
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j-j9gB7-OgA[/YOUTUBE[/YOUTUBE]
Male Version (Shaan)
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQbEnDumyJ4 [/YOUTUBE]
This is the Yo Yo Honey Singh Version
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nCD2hj6zJEc[/YOUTUBE]
TSM and Yo Yo's songs were inspired by the original Aashiqui song.
Samrat and Nandini
Samrat and Nandini at this point are gray characters. More will be revealed once Nandini makes her request.
Merlion
I haven't forgotten about the Merlion...promise he will make an entrance in the next chapter 😉
The Trio at Birdsong
I hardly saw Teji, Zubin, and Krithika so I have no idea what their personalities were like 🤓 So I'm just making them the office gossip and groupie trio 😆 I'm glad you like them 😃
Neil's Bollywood Dream
I did make Neil's day dream filmy and cheesy like a Bollywood song sequence 😆
I thought it would be funny.
Neil and the Thief
I was rather hesitant to put that in the chapter. I've seen some films and my Indian friends even warned me when I went to India that sometimes these things happen...like you said gangs use children to beg, etc.
I just needed a situation where Neil would get distracted and have his camera stolen.
Hope I didn't offend anyone 😕