||ARJUN FF: TRANSFORMATION||PART 4, TEASER FOR PART 5- PAGE 7||25/7|| - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love ur induction of flute ragas according to Arjun's moods. Loved the concept.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

U r getting better and better at dis..⭐️M just speechless wid how beautifully u portrayed the scenes..Just from that first line,I was ryt dere wid Arjun..A young boy at heart..
Dis is truly awesome.And i hope and pray U are already working on da next updt bcoz i m already impatient to read da next 1!😆
U rock girl!👍🏼U r just phenomenal!🤗Loved it to da core!!!!❤️

Thanks a lot!!! 😊 Glad you are enjoying it. And posting the next part soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Dnt mk ppl's less comments stop u from writing girl..Its a bad luck dt dose of us who writes face dt many ppl read,bt barely bothers to press da like button or comment.Dey just dnt get it dt as writers our only pleasure in seeing deir comments,dt we get happy2 see ppl enjoyed reading..
Dnt let it bother u.See da views..Many ppl comes to read da stories..But only a few comments.Dnt know y.
Bt rmmbr U r awesome.Nvr forget dt!🤗
So just kip on writing grl.❤️Dnt let it bother u.😉

I know. But being a writer I would really want that my readers give their opinion on how the story is. And when I see the no. Of views increasing but no comments, then it feels a lil bad. But no worries. When loyal viewers like you are there, then why fikar!?😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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2.

EXISTENCE


It was 10 a.m. when he entered the office. The flute session had engrossed him so much that he almost forgot about Bird Song.

Flute Session? Stop lying, it was Radhika who captured your mind in the morning. Anyway, it didn't bother much if he came late. Who was there to scold' him for that?

With a smirk, he entered his cabin...

"Sir, you are late."

...only to be "scolded' by someone. Arjun paused at the door when he found the only person who had occupied his mind the whole day yesterday...and today.

"What?" he asked plastering the usual angry-young-man look on his face.

"What you heard was correct, Sir. You are late by 2 hours 15 minutes."

Oh, this girl. "So, are you here to stalk me? When I come, when I go. What I do? And all..." he spoke with a raised eyebrow as he adjusted himself in front of Radhika on a chair.

"No, Sir. I am here to ask you something. Something which has been bothering me a lot."

One more question in her stormy brain. "I'm not here to answer your questions. Go." Arjun replied coldly going back to his own seat.

"Why this, Sir?" Radhika asked sitting on the chair where he sat earlier only to get a confused glance from Arjun.

"I mean, why this fake expression." She said trying to be clearer.

Just because I don't want anyone to see the other side of me. The side which even I don't know that I have or not."Shut up and get to work."

"No, sir. I know you are faking it all. And I don't care how many times you say that I should stop interfering your personal life, I will. Because I know something is stopping you from being you. The Arjun I saw that day who wanted to save me isn't the Arjun who I'm seeing right now. Who are you, actually?"

That is the problem. Even I don't know who I am. "Miss. Radhika Mishra, I said just leave."

"No, sir. I am not going to leave. I'm not going to leave YOU. I can't see you like this."

"And, why that?" Arjun asked now interested in Radhika's courage to ignore his senior's command.

"Because...because..." She tried to speak thinking of the correct words.

"Because you said I am a Panauti."She exclaimed with a huge smile on her face.

"WHAT?" came the confused reply.

"Yes, sir. You only said that I am a panauti. And as far as I can understand, you are in love with darkness, anger, fake emotions etc. etc. So I'm here as the panauti of your life."Radhika said excited like a 4 year old child.

"Elaborate." Arjun said with a blank face not at all interested in the "elaboration".

"Sir...you love darkness. I am your panauti which means I will make things happen opposite in your life. Right? So, if darkness is about to enter your life, I'll change it into brightness! How's the plan, Sir?" she ended with a huge grin.

STOP.COMING.CLOSE.TO.ME.

"Radhika! Come here, fast!" Sam shouted from her office.

"Coming!!!!" Radhika shouted back with the same pitch as she got up. As she came near the door, Radhika turned back only to find Arjun staring at her.

"Sir..." she spoke making him come out of his day dream.

"The real Arjun exists. Try to find him." And with that, she went out.

"The real Arjun exist. Yes, I do exist. I do exist in her heart."

Edited by swaralika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 updated. For pm, please drop a comment and tell me. Also buddy me if you haven't(for PMs) as it is easier that way to send PMs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me 1st!Yay!!!And u updated dis 1!!!My new fav!!!🥳And wat an awesum update to comment 1st on!👏
Dis was truly awesum Swaru!!!🤗I loved Arjun's inner thoughts.Oh it was delicious to read!😆As if I was getn a taboo sneak peak!😈Loooved it!!!I hope da next 1 is coming soon!Plz pretty plz???😳*Mkn puppy face..*

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. But by so short?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Me 1st!Yay!!!And u updated dis 1!!!My new fav!!!🥳And wat an awesum update to comment 1st on!👏
Dis was truly awesum Swaru!!!🤗I loved Arjun's inner thoughts.Oh it was delicious to read!😆As if I was getn a taboo sneak peak!😈Loooved it!!!I hope da next 1 is coming soon!Plz pretty plz???😳*Mkn puppy face..*

THANKS A LOT DI!! YOU KNOW WHAT? YOUR AND MEGHA DI'S COMMENTS ALWAYS PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE. SO KEEP COMMENTING😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: niru04

Nice update. But by so short?

Thanks a lot. And actually I'm in my tenth right now and my school is going to reopening from day after tomorrow. So was busy with school stuff. Next time pinky promise, biiig update. Okay?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you dear!

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