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TRANSFORMATION
Arjun FF
Swaralika





INDEX
PART 1
LIGHT
(PAGE 1)
PART 2
EXISTENCE
(PAGE 3)
PART 3
INTERPRETATIONS
(PAGE 6)
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LIGHT

The soft, melodious tune reached his ears as he opened his eyes. Smiling, he moved towards the right to see the time. It was 5 a.m. and Madhav Kaka was already awake. His Madhav Kaka. Putting on his flip flop, he moved down stairs only to find him engrossed with his flute.

"Good morning, Madhav Kaka" Arjun smiled as he sat on the floor besides him. But Kaka was engrossed in his playing. After few seconds, he changed the tune.

"Bihag." Arjun guessed as he listened carefully. "Why this sad raga early morning, Kaka?"

And, he stopped. Touching the flute with his head and keeping it near the feet of Saraswati Maa's idol, he turned towards Arjun and asked,

"What came in your mind this morning when you woke up?"

"You." Arjun answered simply unaware of what his Madhav Kaka meant.

"That is because I was here today. When I'm not here, what comes in your mind early morning?"

"Nothing". Revenge.

"Stop lying to me, Arjun. Face the truth. Tell me." Madhav Kaka demanded.

I'm sorry, Kaka. "You know..." he said, finally losing from him.

Madhav Kaka shrugged at his stubborn behavior. "First look inside yourself, Arjun. The life in which you are living began when you were born and will end only when you will die. Your life starts within you and will end with you only. The life that God gave you was bright. Wasn't it? Then why do you choose to make it dark?"

Even I want a bright life. "For Dida." Arjun replied blankly.

"Come on, Arjun. Don't you want love? Don't you want to see all the happiness which you deserve?"

Of course I want. "No, Kaka" Arjun stood up and turned. "When Dida will smile, then only I will smile. She has suffered a lot."

"Arjun..." Madhav kaka came from behind and patted his shoulder. "I think you need rest. The flute's there."

Arjun sat down with the flute admiring it. The flute, His Madhav kaka's flute was his company. He placed the flute below his lips and started playing Bihag all over again.

"By the way, I saw one beautiful lady, the one with Samaira yesterday at your office party." Madhav Kaka suddenly spoke from behind.

"Radhika." Arjun spoke turning his head slightly.

"She is beautiful. And nice. And humble." Kaka spoke with a smile.

"Kaka" Arjun glared at him. Madhav Kaka became silent just like a kid. And as soon as Arjun was about to play the flute, he again spoke, a naughty smile playing on his lips.

"I was actually talking about that Piyali. I never said Radhika." Before Arjun could say anything, he rushed up the stairs. Arjun again started playing the flute, this time, Bhupali. A soft, calm composure Raga. Madhav Kaka looked up from the stairs and smiled. After all, it is not always that Arjun plays a calm composed raga?

"Radhika..." he mumbled and went.

Arjun kept playing Bhupali while remembering her. Yes, she was the light in his darkness.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- DARK BLUE: ARJUN'S WORDS. LIGHT BLUE: ARJUN'S POV
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awie awesome part!! waiting for some more😊
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Wow!!! Swara 🤗
That was an awesome start!!
I loved it!
And this Madhav Kaka seems intriguing.
I loved the way you portrayed the first part.
Continue soon girlie!!!
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it was beautiful.. light in his darkness loved it... update sooonn
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Originally posted by: ankita20

awie awesome part!! waiting for some more😊

Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmegha

Wow!!! Swara 🤗

That was an awesome start!!
I loved it!
And this Madhav Kaka seems intriguing.
I loved the way you portrayed the first part.
Continue soon girlie!!!

Thank you. A lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huma-

it was beautiful.. light in his darkness loved it... update sooonn

Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U r getting better and better at dis..👏👏👏⭐️M just speechless wid how beautifully u portrayed the scenes..Just from that first line,I was ryt dere wid Arjun..A young boy at heart..
Dis is truly awesome.And i hope and pray U are already working on da next updt bcoz i m already impatient to read da next 1!😆
U rock girl!👍🏼U r just phenomenal!🤗Loved it to da core!!!!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaralika

Comment, people. Please.



Dnt mk ppl's less comments stop u from writing girl..Its a bad luck dt dose of us who writes face dt many ppl read,bt barely bothers to press da like button or comment.Dey just dnt get it dt as writers our only pleasure in seeing deir comments,dt we get happy2 see ppl enjoyed reading..
Dnt let it bother u.See da views..Many ppl comes to read da stories..But only a few comments.Dnt know y.
Bt rmmbr U r awesome.Nvr forget dt!🤗
So just kip on writing grl.❤️Dnt let it bother u.😉

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