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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi friends! watching this show from a month or so ....really loving this show.... thought of writing a FF . i hope you all will like it.....

part 1
Story till now is the same as in the show.. kalindi has asked bhavri to spend a night with anadi...

Bhavri comes to the bedroom & stands remembering all the moments of her & shaurya & had tears in her eyes'.

Anadi comes from back & mistakes bhavri for maithali but still somehow while he went to hug her from behind he stopped & he said maithiliji'.

Bhavri didn't dare to turn around as she was afraid as to what anadi would do on seeing her there'.

Anadi on hearing no response just went in front of her & said - bhavri you'. What the hell are you doing here'? I had never thought that you would stoop down to this level'.(anger was evident in anadi's voice)

Bhavri ' stop it!

Anadi ' no! now you stop it! You have done enough to mess mine & mathili's life; you know, when you confessed to me about your & shaurya's relationship earlier I had developed so much of respect for you & felt proud of your honesty'. But today I feel pity on you! Because you are using your child just to take revenge from your friend' when your child will grow up he too will feel shameful for her mother's deed' he too will hate you'. & at that time..

Bhavri ' stop! Please stop it! I can't take it more! (she broke down)

Anadi ' you can't even handle this much think how much maithili has to go through''firstly, she had to see her husband with another lady '.. & that too with that lady whom she considers her best & only friend' she lost all her relation' all this just because of you'..

Bhavri '(interrupting) yes, i broke her all relations b'coz all that relations would have just given her pain & sufferings & that my friend certainly don't deserve.

Anadi looked all surprised!!!

Bhavri ' anadiji, yes you are right I am selfish; I am selfish for my friend & I can do anything to save my friend from the sufferings'.

Anadi ' I can't understand you?

Bhavri ' on the day after accident, all that I said to you & maithili was fake, after accident maithili's parents (her only supporters in the family) were dead & also it was quite obvious that shaurya ji were also dead' if on that day I would have come with you maithili would have to live a life of a widow' & had to undergo all the sufferings of the widow' & if I was the one who had the pleasures of being a wife of shauryaji only I should be the one to bear the sufferings as well & not maithili. I insulted you because I wanted you to move ahead in your life as you are a very good person & you deserve all the happiness in life'.

Anadi still didn't look convinced'..

Anadi ' oh! Is that so! why are you here then? Now I & maithili are very happy'.then why are you to creating such troubles in our lives'..

to be continued......

thanks for reading..... what you friends think should i continue to write more.....

waiting for your comments............

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh !!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet the way u have potrated Bhavri is tooo good, Hy u should be the DS Cv's..........or give ur imagination to them when ever they write........These DS CV's r totaly out of there mind...... God knows how DSwill survive with such dumd CV's
Well u should continue it ........ur dialogs r really heart touching & expresive
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: puja_30

Oh !!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet the way u have potrated Bhavri is tooo good, Hy u should be the DS Cv's..........or give ur imagination to them when ever they write........These DS CV's r totaly out of there mind...... God knows how DSwill survive with such dumd CV's

Well u should continue it ........ur dialogs r really heart touching & expresive

thx so much for reading it..... i am glad that u liked it...... your comments are really motivating.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey good one !!!!!!!!!! Continue soon with more of Anaithili ...............Waiting for the next post !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏

excellent job, please continue!! but i want anadi and maithali together 😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good start! I really like it so far! I can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yes do continue. i like the way u wrote it and the motive behind bhavri returning. thanks for posting.👍🏼

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