RaNtara FF:- Zindagi... Chapter No 6-Page #11 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Rasika9

Hey haya...
this concept is amazing...the loved both the updates
raghu tum mil jao to antara ko aise hi sab mil jayega...she needs love and care from u...
beautiful.superb plz keep writing...

thank u so much rasika ji...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ifians

nice update..
liked the seq of rantara;s first meeting and their talks,
rasika is a good freind of her... raghu is also deeply affected by antara
cont asap.. loved the update.

Thank u so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
hay..
hayu i m witing..
dear..
updated soon..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Chapter No 3:-
Antara and Rasika were running to the plane while the boys took the airport cab.
Antara and rasika entered the plane. Rasika gave all the laguage to the airhostess.. She greeted her.
Airhostess:- "good morning. Welcome aboard.. Happy to serve u again hukum.."
Rasika:- "thank u Selina kaise ho?"
Selina:- "hukum main achi hoon.."
Antara thought why was she calling her hukum? As raghu entered he saw antara who was standing behind rasika and was lost .
Airhostess:- "good morning chotay hukum.."
Raghu:- "hello Selina kaise ho?"
Airhostess:- "main achi hn hukum"
Raghu:- "good... Let's take off.."
Antara rasika Both sat on the one side of the plane. Antara was all excited as it was her first journey of aeroplane... When the boys arrived the girls were sitting. The boys sat on the other side. The captain announced and greeted all. The flight took off after a few mint. At first Antara got worried.. But then he saw raghu's smiling face as he was excited about the trip she forgot everything. She never knew when the plane took off. She came to reality when the captain announced that they have took off. Antara was happy that they took off safely and she is still alive. She thanked God for this.
Raghu saw this.
Raghu:- "aray ap Theek ho?"
Antara:- "han main theek hoon.. Bas Bhagwan ko thank u bol Rahi thi keh the plane took off and I am still alive".
MachMach rasika and raghu started to laugh.
MachMach:- "aray hota hai aisa yaad hai jab hum logon Ki first flights thi... Rasika toh cheekh rahi thi on top of her lungs... "
All started laughing.
Rasika:- "aur Machmach ne toh plane take off kay waqt apna face aik pillow Mein dala hua tha... "
Antara:- "acha..."
Rasika:- "aur Bhai ka unmm..."
MachMach:- "iska kia scene tha..."
Rasika:- "Haan Yeh dar kar mom li Godi mein chala gaya tha..."
All three started to laugh.. Raghu who was reading a magazine saw them in angry mood.. But as soon he saw her laughing he forgot all.
The airhostess came and started to serve the lunch. All four had their lunch and took some rest. After a while the captain annouced that they have reached Jaipur and in a while they will at the place. Antara got up and went to washroon and cleaned herself as she slept. She arranged her hairs.. Put on a light make up.. And came out. Rasika then went. She took 5 mints and came. As she came she saw her house.
Rasika:- "woh raha woh raha..."
Antara started to see what she was pointing.
Rasika:- "bhai finally we r home."
Raghu and MachMach smiled. But antara's eyes grew large as she saw. It was not a house it was a palace. A beautiful palace. She became all confused. Raghu saw the change of expression and looked at Rasika. He pointed his head to Antara.
Rasika:- "Antara apko hamara ghar acha Nhn laga?"
Antara:- "nhn Nhn aisa Nhn magar woh ghar Nhn hai woh palace hai Matlab ao dono Jaipur kay raj ghar anay say ho.."
Rasika:- "Haan toh is mein kia hai?"
Antara:- "Nhn kuch Nhn Bas aisay ho."
Rasika was about to say something when the captain annouced the landing. Rasika held antara's hand and winked Both eyes. She gave a sweet but a tiny smile to her. Raghu knew what she was thinking. The plane landed and the captain wished all a happy journey. Selina opened the plane doors. MachMach stepped out first followed by raghu. Rasika was about to step out when she saw Antara and took hold of her hand. Antara stepped out along with Rasika. They were taken in cars to the palace as the runway was a bit far away from the palace. When they reached the palace Rasika's parents along with MachMach parents and servants were waiting. The ladies were dress in beautiful saris along with a lot of jewelleries. Antara were looking at them. MachMach and raghu went and took all blessing. Rasika saw her parents and hugged them. Antara was just standing as she never knew what are parents. Rasika's mother hugged her tight.
Mrs. Naik:- "Agai humari rajkumari.."
Mr. Naik:- "aur humaray rajkumar ko kon bhool sakta"
He said while tapping his shoulders. Antara was standing and looking. Mrs. Naik saw her and smiled. She came forward and caressed her cheeks. She bent and took blessings from her.
Mrs. Naik:- "toh ap hAin Antara... Rasika Bas apki hu Bateein karti rehti hai..."
Antara couldn't say any anything. Rasika told his father to take all inside.
Rasika:- "papa ap Sab jo lay jayain andar".
His father took all people inside. She came to his mom.
Mama:- "ap ko kaise lagi Antara"
Raghu who was going inside stopped as he heard this.
Mrs. Naik:- "bohat achi.. Bohat hi pyari... Beta Ajao isay apna hi ghar samjho.. Kuch bhi chahyai ho bilkul pareshan na hna sedha humaray pas ana.. Hum bhi toh apki Maa hain.."
Hearing this antara's eyes all got teary. Mrs. Naik saw this and hugged her.
Mrs. Naik:- "aray kia hua beta?"
Antara:- "actually main ne Na hi mama Dekhi na Papa. Main shuru say..."
Before she could complete mrs. Naik stopped her.
Mrs. Naik:- "Bas beta main janti hoon tum fikr mat karo him hai na ajao.."
Mrs. Naik took her inside. Antara was walking right behind her with rasika. She entered the palace. It was so beautiful and grand. All of the palace was decorated with grand furniture. Mrs. Naik went up the stairs followed by the girls. She opened the door of a big room. It was rasika's room. Rasika entered and jumped in to her bed.
Rasika:- "ohh I miss u... Come Antara."
Mrs. Naik:- "jAo beta.."
Hearing the beta word from her Antara felt happy... Antara went and kept her bag on the bed. She carefully sat on the bed. Mrs. Naik felt happy.
Mrs. Naik:- "Abhi ap dono thda rest kay kar shower kijiye Phir hum dinner par milay gain.. Antara beta ap ki koi favorite dish hai jo aj ap khana chahay gin."
Antara saw her and was confused what to say.
Rasika:- "aray Antara ghabarao Nhn mom ko bata do woh bnwa dain gin."
Antara:- "actually aunty mujhay palak paneer bohat pasand hai."
Mrs. Naik:- "good humein bhi raghunath ko bhi bohat pasand hai. Hum chef ko keh kar abhi bnwa dain gain."
Antara:- "Nhn aunty rehne dijiye.."
Mrs. Naik:- "Nhn beta ap log hostel ka khana kha kar thak jatay ho aj ghar ka kha kar acha lagay ga.. Main bnwa deti hn tab tak ready hojayai.."
With that she left from there.. Antara was sitting at the edge.
Rasika:- "ap Pehlay shower kar lijiye.. Tab tak I will unpack our stuff."
Antara nodded and took her bag clothes to shower. After 15 mints she returned to see ladies in ghagra choli with long veils. They were standing there with some gifts.
Antara:- "rasika Yeh kia hai?"
Rasika:- "Yeh mom ne bhejay hain pehnay ko Yeh humara traditional dress hai as hum ghar ayai hain toh papa raat ko grand dinner karay gain his mein machinder kay parents jo kay humaray long time friends aur kuch aur log hn gain.. Toh which one u want.?"
Antara:- "you chose first i m fine with anything.."
Rasika took one and gave the other to Antara. She gestured the servants to leave.
Rasika:- "aj Bhagwan bacha lay bhai ko."
Antara who was lost looking at her dress suddenly shot her head up. Rasika who was taking her things to get ready ran inside the bathroom as she saw her.
Antara sat on the bed.
Antara:- "rasika Nhn aisa ho hi Nhn sakta kabhi u people are too big and i m nothing.. I won't let raghu feel i like him."
With that she got and started to get dressed up. She wore a blue ghagra with a silver bording and a choli that was blue and silver mixed shades. She applied light make up and left he hairs open. She wore small studs earring of blue color who had silver border. A blue bracelet and a small blue ring in her right hand. A silver watch in her left had. She was all confused as she was looking fine to her but she was in a royal palace where everything was huge. As rasika stepped out she wore a purple ghagra with silver borders and a choli of purple silver. She stepped out and stunned to see Antara.
Rasika:- "aray wah Antara you are looking fabulous."
Antara:- "thank u but I think Yeh kuch.."
Rasika:- "nah it's perfect.."
Suddenly the door open and in came mrs. Naik. Rasika left her and started to get ready. Rasika was wearing jwellery. Mrs. Naik saw Antara and felt happy as she was ready.
Mrs. Naik:- "good ap dono tayar hai matlab.. Chahiye dinner Ka time hogaya.."
Antara was about to follow mrs. Naik. Rasika held her hand.
Rasika:- "humne Sahi kaha tha aj bhai ko Bas Bhagwan hi bacha sakta hai.."
Antara:- "shh aunty hain sun laon gin.."
Rasika:- "somebody is dying to get out of the room."
Antara:- "Nhn toh.."
Antara was worried from inside as she can't control herself infront of raghu but as she is here she has to face him...

Precap:-
The dinner and special moments.

I m so sorry..
No idea what I wrote..
Do read, like and comment.
Regard,
Haya.
Edited by hayakhan5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Very beautiful update
Raghu ka death hone wala hai, Antu ko dekh kar
Update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
very beautiful update haya dear...
loved it a lot...
raghu and antara chuo chuo kee ej dusre koo dekh rahe hain..😆
antara was stunned seeing teh wealth of raghu's familly.. she must be feeling so odd in the mid of everything... a girl like her who spend all her life without parents love.. it must be very awkward for her... anyways waiting for the story to unforld. can't wait to see raghu's reaction after seeing antara in that dress..😉
cont soon...
love yaa
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
hey haya i was missing ur updates...
superb update tha...antu kitne beautiful lagagi dress mein...but bahut conscious ho gayee hain...keep writing dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38



Thank u so much rima...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: salini143

Very beautiful update
Raghu ka death hone wala hai, Antu ko dekh kar
Update soon
Waiting eagerly

Thank u so much dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ifians

very beautiful update haya dear...
loved it a lot...
raghu and antara chuo chuo kee ej dusre koo dekh rahe hain..😆
antara was stunned seeing teh wealth of raghu's familly.. she must be feeling so odd in the mid of everything... a girl like her who spend all her life without parents love.. it must be very awkward for her... anyways waiting for the story to unforld. can't wait to see raghu's reaction after seeing antara in that dress..😉
cont soon...
love yaa

Thank u so much...

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