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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluesky10

Amazing dear

Both like each other
I think so
Hope raghu head is fine
Antara was worried for him
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for your pm

Thanks dear😳😳
I will update soon😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys, Wassup😊😊
here last part of this OS
I hope, u all enjoy it😉😉



Your Secret Admirer

"YOUR SECRET ADMIRER" I sent and wait for a while for his reply. But he didn't replied me, I sighed sadly, why he gonna reply me anyway, I am so stupid, he must have been thinking, I am just another girl who head over heels for him. My mobile vibrate in my hand, I looked who messaged me, my eyes widened when I saw who text it is, it's from Raghu "And what's name of MY secret admirer, miss?" it's said huh, what I am gonna tell him now, o god, help me' I thought and replied him anyway "If I want to tell to you, then I already told you, so that's mean, I don't want to tell you, who am I" I smiled.

"Smart huh? I like it, Can I know something about you?"

"What" I replied and sat on my bed.

"Everything"

"Hmmm, ok?" I replied more like question.

"Let's play a game"

"What game?"

"What about 20 questions?"

"Hmmm ok, but not now, what about tomorrow?" believe me I really want to play but he's sick and I didn't want to play, he should rest.

"Ok, Goodnight Beautiful"

I face heat up when I read last message, he called me beautiful wait how did he know I am beautiful or not, he saw me? I think, he said casually. I lay down smiling like a stupid. It was time to take action, it is the best way atleast get his attention, texting. I fell asleep thinking about Raghu and tomorrow night.

At Caf

"What?" Khushboo jumped from her seat, when I told her about yesterday's texting thing, all people looked towards us "Khushi calm down, all people were looking at us" I whispered. She looked around and sat quietly. "I am really proud of you" she said happily, I smiled, she is really my best friend ever, she is there whenever I needed someone, that's why I told everything to her and she is good listener. "Don't lose this chance" she assured, I nodded looking around for him, when I spotted him, my breath stopped, he already looking at my side, I quickly turned not give him any hint. I really didn't want this texting thing, it's make complicated but what could I do? I wasn't one of those naturally flirtatious girls, the ones who seem to always have a boyfriend or crowds of followers in which to giggle with. In fact, I didn't have one friend who is a boy, that is why it is so hard to just talk to Raghu or especially admit my love, so it is perfect way texting each other, isn't it?

Just I got outside, it's started to rain. Great' I muttered and start walking to my way to home. I walk on a little while, my face towards the wind and rain. Frustrated, I begin to jog. Bad idea. I trip on slippery sidewalk and skin my knee, hard enough leave a bruise. I felt like crying, I sighed and was beginning to stand up when I heard familiar sounds of bike engine. I glanced up, the driver had stopped right beside me, I didn't able to see, who he is, when he lifted off his helmet, I was shocked as well as happy, it was Raghu. "Need a ride?" he asked, his voice so husky, "N-No" lie I really need a ride especially with him, "Why, I didn't bit you" he chuckled, I blushed but nodded anyway and let him take my hand and pull me onto the bike.

At night

I sat on my desk trying to complete my homework but one person was roaming in my mind. I looked at my clock, it's said 12:10, I sighed sadly, I think, he didn't gonna message me today, should I wait or go to sleep. Today, was best day, when I think earlier incident. First time, I was so close to him, my heart beat had increased, I am shocked, he didn't heard, When Raghu stopped at my house, I thanked him, he nodded and turned his bike and left. The whole day, I was smiling like idiot. My mobile vibrate beside my book broking my thoughts, message from Raghu, I smiled and opened it "Hiii, Secret Admirer" it's said "Hiii" I replied closing my book.

"What are you doing?"

"Nothing, and you?"

"Same, let's start"

"What?" I asked made my way towards bed and laying down.

"Game Sweety" I blushed, he called me beautiful yesterday and now Sweety, he was playing with me or really likes me, of course, he likes me then why he called me by such names or it's his nature, whatever' I assured myself and replied him "yeah, let's start"

"Me first, what's your favourite colour?"

"Purple and yours"

"Blue, what's your favourite food?"

"huh, Palak Paneer and yours?"

"Biryani, what's your favourite movie?"

This game going on and on and now I know more about him like he want to be best world basketball player and when he was in 6th grade, he proposed his English teacher, yeah I know funny but it's cute on him. Now last question..

"What are you doing in your free time?"

"I made my own jewelleries, I know, boring" I replied wondering, he was gonna think, what a boring girl in the world.

"No, that's nice"

"Really?"

"Yeah really"

"Thanks"

"You most Welcome and you know one thing, I will caught you" My breathed stopped when I read this.

"What?" I quickly sat up.

"See you at college, Good night, Beautiful "

My eyes widened, he didn't serious, did he?, O god, what will he gonna do when he find out, it's me, he will reject me, no didn't reject me, he was wanted to reject me then already did, but he didn't and keep texting me, right?. I let out one tear but quickly wiped it before it fell down on ground. let's face it Antara, you are brave girl' I assured myself and lay down thinking about what gonna be happen tomorrow, I will face it.

At class

I sat at back seat, last night, I am not able to take proper sleep. The bell ring, all students went towards their seats, and then he walked in the class looking for empty seat, when his eyes landed on me, he smirked not smiled and took a seat beside me. "Hiii" he said still smirking "Hiii?" I replied more like a question. The teacher came and gave us about 10 problems to solve it by ourselves and we start solving it. "What's up" he asked, what gotten into him, he was acting weird, did he know, I am his secret admirer girl, I don't think so, then why he behaving like this? O god take me with you "Fine and you?" I asked casually "Good" he replied still looking at me "okkk.." I said still solving my problems. Few moments later, he didn't bothered me and I am glad. "hey, where did you brought this bracelet, it's beautiful" he said suddenly pointing at my bracelet "ohh, I made this, I made lots of jewelleries like ear rings, necklaces, bracelets etc, it's fun to make jewellery" after saying this I realized that I had basically given myself away. My eyes widened and looked at him, he have a wide grin on his face and leaned on his seat putting his hands behind his head "that's nice and it's not boring" he smirked. I looked away and solve all my problems and wait for bell to rang. All time, Raghu was giving me a stupid grin. The bell rang and I am the first who got out of the class before Raghu took chance to talk to me.

Someone grabbed my wrist pulling me into dark empty room and closed the door behind him. I glanced up and my eyes meet deep-brown eyes straight looking into my eyes. He began to walk closer making me take a back step and this going on until my back hit the cold wall, he put his hands on both sides imprisoned me, my heart beat raised and I took deep breaths. He leaned towards me, my eyes popped out, what is he going to do, I closed my eyes tightly not able to do something "I caught you" he whispered in my ear, slowly I opened my eyes and saw, he was so close looking at me lovingly, "what's all this?" he asked "umm..uh.." I was speechless. All I could do was avoid eye contact and shuttered "I...uh..umm" next thing he done, was unexpected, he boldly scooped me up into a hug. I was surprised, he hugged me tightly like he was never let me go, ever. "Silly girl, you know, I actually had a crush on you since the day, when you entered in college, I just could not tell you, but I likes you a lot, when you first texted me, I know, it's you but-" I pulled myself "You already know, it's me" I was shocked "Yeah" he chuckled "How you get my number?"

"I have my ways, sweetheart" I face heat up whenever he called me by sweet names.

"You already known it's me, still you tease me, I hate you"

"And I know, you LOVE me" I blushed and looked down, he put his index finger under my chin and made me glanced up "Don't hide your adorable face, I like it, when you blush" he said in heart warming voice, I smiled, he looked at my lips than back to my eyes, I know, what is meant, I closed my eyes giving him a permission and next thing his warm and soft lips meet mine, he kissed me slowly and passionately, he held me closed to him putting his both hands on my waist and I circled my hands around his neck pulling him more into me, our lips moving in sync, we broke kiss at same time and hugged him tightly and he hugged me back "I LOVE YOU" I said buried face in his chest "I LOVE YOU TOO MORE THAN ANYTHING" he said kissing on top of my head.

We came in hallway holding hands smiling at each other, all people looking at us in aww expression making me blushed and some girls glaring at me like I steal their boyfriend, whatever that's doesn't matter to me this time, all matter to me was Raghu and feeling of his hand that imprisoned my hand. I looked at his side, he already smiling at me making me smiling back a little. I looked at Khushi who was standing near her locker giving me thumps up in return I smiled at her. Everything like fairy tale and now, he is mine only mine when I said he is mine, he is MINE.

So guys, how's it😳😳

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Edited by salini143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awesome os and thanks for pm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Lovely update

Perfect ending
Beautifully written

Loved it

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awww divya... no words... its such a cute story,..
I LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!!!😳
somehow i knew from the beginning that raghu also liked her and he caught her when she texted him. After all he is a smart guy...😎... But i didn't expected that he would also have her phone no.. 😆.. he was already one step away from antara... kya baat hain jii😉
The last scene was so good when everyone was staring at them and they were walking side by side holding their hand.. what could be more perfect than that😳
This update really satisfied me... keep writing suhc stories divya ji... they are always a treat to read😳

PS: Divya i updated new chapter of my FF. checkout while u have time.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Omg!!omg!!omg!!
Amazing!!amazing!!!
Eekksss!!
I'm in love!!!
Itna super OS!
I loved the texting thing! Soo romantic!
Raghu already knew it was her!
The ride!!
Hayee!!
I was expecting him to save her from falling lolzz!!
Finally!
Itna sweet text kiya hayla!
Sweet names! And antu blushed uff!!
Raghu proposed his teacher *chokes*
Yayy I'll catch you!
He sure knows how to get stuff out of her!
Itna jaldi bracelet ka puch me raaz bahar!
Pakri gayi!!yipee!!
Ohh butterflies!!
Pinned to the wall!
Dark room!
GM activate!
Finally hogaya!!
confession!!
YIPEE!! BEST JODI!!

Loved the last line!
He is only mine!

Loved the entire OS!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow..
Really nice.. 😉
So beautiful update..
Raghu s basket boll match was so beautiful part..an raghu hold her hand..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Very nice! 👏
Loved it ji ⭐️
Wonderfully written ⭐️
Keep on writing
*hugs*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
lovely part divya...it was amazing...
the best part of this update i like is Rantara's likes...coz they are same as NIYAZ...
loved the whole update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
What a ending Salini !!
I loved this ..
So cute..
They are just too adorable..
Thanks for this OS..
Was a complete refresher in between my boards..
-Prerna

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