Your Secret Admirer- Rantara OS(Last part - page 5)

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Hello Everyone😊😊
Here my second little OS
Enjoy



ā¤ļøYOUR SECRET ADMIRERā¤ļø

I woke up to my alarm ringing. I sat lazily rubbing my eyes and slammed my hand on clock, finally it's shut up. I looked at my clock, it's said 7:00, my college starts at 8:30 Time to get ready' I said to myself and dragged myself into bathroom and get ready. It's a another year in my college, nothing special and never happened. When I finished I had on simple pink colour suit. I got to college and spotted my best friend Khushboo. I went towards her, she looked excited, that's mean, she have a some news. "Hiii, how's you?" she said happily. I smiled "Fine and you?" I asked looking around hallway for someone "He is not here" she said looking at me "Huh" I confused what she meant but I realised what that's mean, my face heat up "Where is he?" I asked. "He went to playground, you know, tomorrow will be basketball competition and all players went to practice" she said "Ohh" I sighed "Why you didn't talk to him?" she said in concerned voice. I sighed again, how can I talk to him? He's popular guy, all girls are head over heels for him, How can he accept me. I have a big crush on him since the day I first saw him in my Maths class of first day in college. I took back seat in class and then few moments later, a boy came and looked around for empty seat. His eyes stopped at me, I looked at my beside, it's empty, he came in front of me and smiled sweetly and I smiled back obviously "Hi...I am Raghu" he introduced himself looking straight in my eyes. He was handsome, cute and very attractive guy I ever saw in my life. His deep-brown eyes made it hard to look away, his defined jaw, tanned skin, lips and he was also muscular guy. "A-Antara" I shuttered. He smiled and took seat beside me.

"Ahem" I came out of trance "What" I asked "You zoned out" she said "So, tell me, why you didn't talk to him, yet?" she asked again "I just can't" I said sadly looking down "Why?" she asked "What if he reject me and left me heartbroken, I didn't want that, he's popular basketball player and good looking and I am just me, and I am not his type, all girls want him, why he choose me, why he waste his time on me?" I said nearly crying "Hey, it's okay, you know, he is not interested in that girls, I think he waited for someone else, someone like you, beautiful, pure, innocent and kind-hearted girl. Just take a step of your love Antara" she said holding my both shoulder. I shook my head not able to speak, she sighed "It's alright, let's go to class" she said and we went.

It's a day of his match and we were at stadium. Yesterday, I am not able to see him once, he is too busy in his practice. We took a seat and waited for match to begin. Players are came into playground "there he is" Khushboo said pointing at him. I saw him, he was looking around like he searched for someone, once his eyes stopped at me? He smiled What..., why he smiled at me, no no, that's impossible, I think he smiled at someone else, not me, here so many girls are there better than me'. Once a match start, all audience started screaming their names mostly Raghu.

The match is going on and Raghu's team hit a high score. Finally, last shoot and ball is in Raghu's hand, he tripled and start moving towards basket but one of rival member tug his leg between which makes Raghu fell on ground hard on his face and gets hit on his head. Everything happened so fast. Two nurses took Raghu inside and that boy who tug his leg given a red card and time is over. Raghu's team win the match.

Now, I am at my home, walking back and forth. I am thinking about should I call him or not to make sure he is fine or not, atleast leave a little message. I am worried since that accident and I am not able to get any information of Raghu. Is he fine?' I asked myself hundredth time. I took my mobile and looked at like some ghost, I type a message with my shaking fingers and sent "How's your head?" O shit, what I done, o god, I am so stupid. What he is going to think about me, wait he didn't know it's me. I smiled but faded what if he know. A mobile vibrated in my hand making me jump a little. I looked at mobile, it's a message from him. I shakily opened his message, it's said "hmm...fine, By the way, who are you?" I looked at mobile wide eyes, what I gonna tell him now, should I tell him, it's me, what if he get's angry or make fun of me. No no, I didn't tell him, omg what am I gonna do now, think Antara think...yeahh.. "YOUR SECRET ADMIRER" I sent.

So, how's it guys

Plz leave a valuable comment and hit the like button😊

Next last part coming soonšŸ˜‰

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful man
Loved it very much!!😳
Raghu basketball player... OMG!! he will look the hotest basketball player ever!! i could literally imagine him!!
All in all such a sweet os... But a little complain!!... U can make it a bit longer yaar.. It felt like it just started and ended.. Just like a square meal without desert!!.. Please make it longer next time..
But anyway... I enjoyed it very very much!!! loved this OS😳

Aur dekho tumhare PM see pahele maine par bhi liya aur reply bhi kar diyašŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!okg!!OMG!!OMG!!
Itna amazing and dreamt tha ye os yaara!
Sweet antu! Hawtt raghu ufff hayee kya Jodi hai kasam we mei to maar gayi yaar!!
Raghu basketball players!!!eekkksss!!!hawttest player ever born!!!
Antu ahem ahem is totally heads over heels for him! Hayeo rabba!!
An mei or kya khahu!! I've never read anything like this before!
Different amazing!
But it so was short na?! Thora lambs kar deti inka love story bhi mil jata!
Raghu won!!yayy!!whoop!!!
But mera raghu KO lagi!!!us kameeni do kori ke player ke to main band Baja dugi!! Urghh!!
Sent admirer hayeee!!! Text mei bhi wohi behja!
Lagi raghu KO halat antu ke kharab!
Vaise how exactly did she have his number!?!šŸ˜‰
I think raghu bhi uska secret admirer hai!
The way he looked for her in the ground!
Then smiled! Uff toba!
Pari yaar iska ek or part likh na please please please!!!
Mereko raghu na reaction dekhna hai isle baad wala!
Ending..
Some words should be left to figure out!
Like this story!hehee!!
Mereko to lagta hai!!
They started talking after the text fir!!.
they meet and antu finally reveals herself!
Fir love hota hai!
Then they become the most popular Jodi of the college!
Hayee!! My brain runs wild!
Please do write more stories! Very much needed on this forum!
I'm romance ke bhukhi right now!
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye hoye divya...what an OS...superb...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

wonderful man
Loved it very much!!😳

Thanks Riyu😳😳
Raghu basketball player... OMG!! he will look the hotest basketball player ever!! i could literally imagine him!
He always maintain his hotness😳😳
All in all such a sweet os... But a little complain!!... U can make it a bit longer yaar.. It felt like it just started and ended.. Just like a square meal without desert!!.. Please make it longer next time..
Ok dear, next part a bit longer than thisšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
But anyway... I enjoyed it very very much!!! loved this OS😳
Thank u so much Riya, it's means a lot to me😊😊

Aur dekho tumhare PM see pahele maine par bhi liya aur reply bhi kar diyašŸ˜‰

So r u so fast😲😲, tak nahi jati tumšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Thank u for valuable comment😳😳
I am glad u liked it😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: salini143

So r u so fast😲😲, tak nahi jati tumšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Thank u for valuable comment😳😳
I am glad u liked it😳😳


i am very fast reader...šŸ˜†
welcome darling... me 2 have updated my ff... checkout ur pm...and if time permits checkout the new chapter😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians


i am very fast reader...šŸ˜†
welcome darling... me 2 have updated my ff... checkout ur pm...and if time permits checkout the new chapter😳

Yes, I know dear, I will read it, I already read prologue😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rasika9

Oye hoye divya...what an OS...superb...

Thanks Sika Di😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow awsme os

Raghu basketball player
I m imagining him playing


This one was different

Loved it


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salini,
this is damn cute !!
Im smiling..
Its like the teenage love...
Jaldi continue kar..
-Prerna

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