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jaan..rantara..

@jaan..rantara..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Wow..
Really nice..
I have no words..
Sorry dear..I have no time for long cmnt..
Love u..

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

nowadays i am loosing words that are appropriate for this update
this is good beyond words...out of the world

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

u r really doing a great job
i comment in single lines every time
as i read many updates in a day
but your update always has something special
whenever u r upset at non having enough likes
just think that some people do wait for your updates

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Shaastang...dandvast...namaskaar/pranaam...(hope its d right phrase...😆...😉...)...

Aap is forum ki mai nahi MAHAMAI ho...(...felt like giving a title..😳...P.S.<Disclaimer> not in reference or anyway related to DM of DDEJ...🤢...😊...😃...)...u know... GODMOTHER types......especially in the fairy tales n d likes......

kya likhthi ho aap yaar...d narrative...d depthness of each of the character's situation...👏...mindblowing...😎...hats off...just too much...d dialogues apt and BANG ON...👍🏼...

i always used to wonder...🤔...🤓...how u do that ...portraying d emotions of each role...like u have personally experienced n gone thru it all...😲......[ i kno most of d writers have to do that]..n i gathered that some parts r truly r...from d reply u gave to Pampz...🤔...

bcoz... only wen i read (ur) updates i connect to Antara's pain of loss...😔..n all d other (grave-deep-crucial) emos of d characters...(like u portray dem)...else m not dat attached...though being always aware of d overall plot...😊...

kyunki jab padthe hain toh kho jaate hai......its difficult to fathom such intensity...but u pen it down justly...👍🏼......

d right amount of subtleness, aggressiveness n everything else...

such calm, serene, , empathizing n soothing ones wid all d dhamaka...in it...😉...🤪...🥳...

n mostly restoring d RaNtara moments... n deir story...😃...n d essence of it...😊...

This post is for the WRITER dat u r...😊...( standing ovation...👏...u deserve a lot-n-lot more than just that...)...

Riuuu...❤️...u Yedi Behna......KEEP IT UP...u surely have a long-long way to go ahead...woh kehthe hain na lambe race ka ghoda types...(tere liye toh GHODHI bolna padega...😆...😛...😉...)...

i'll be back wid d plot-wise review...till then mera intezaar karna...(...thoda meldodrama...😆...😉..)..main aaa rahi hoon...i mean mere commments...😊...😃...😉..

Lots n lots of love ❤️ n hugs 🤗 to u ( woh bhi tightwaale...😆...)...😳...

Keep spreading on d RaNtara Mania...😉...😳...👍🏼...👏......

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Riyuuu, this update was funny, heart-touching and sad 😳
Mamu ji ka tao running competition pata nahi kab katam hoga 😆
Haha, mami ji se pitne wale hai 😳 😆
Flashback b/w antu and her papa was too good man 👏
Tumari update ke sath sath Hume kuch nayi Sikh bhi milti hai 😊
Sukar hai Antu ne aakir smile Toa kiya 😳
O my poor Raghu 😭
Iss update me muje bahut bura laga Raghu ke liye, my innocent poor Raghu 😭
Sach me uss dayan ne hadd kar di, naukar samaj raka hai uska 😡
Yeh kafi nahi ti aur abh woh langoor bhi tik ho gaya 😡
Kab chodege yeh humare Raghu ko 😭
Last scene me mere signature Ki yaad aa gahi😳

'Love is when u are having the worst day but
When u look at him/her all pain goes away'

Raghu ne jaise hi Antu Ki small si smile dekhi 😳
Uske face peh bhi small smile aa gayi 😳

Humare Raghu ko bhi kitna kuch sehna hai 😭
overall Wonderful update 👏
P.s read karke aisa lag raha hai kuch damakedaar hone wala hai 😲
Anyway I will wait for ur next shocking as well as lovely update eagerly 😳
Keep smiling 😊
Love u ❤️

Edited by salini143 - 10 years ago

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

the mind talk of Antara with her father was nice ...so finally she accepted the tulip whole heartedly ...very nice ...she ignored who gave it but couldnt ignore the thoughts that brought the flower to her...😃 thats really lovely . it made me feel good.

Raghu and Daya Mai's conversation was very crucial part in this update ...Antara has made come changes in his heart ...and his heart not accepting Maai's each and every word as it did previously. So again its a turning point in this story .

overall a very good update ...

waiting passionately for the next one ...am anxious as what will happen now ...as so many things r there i can feel and i guess all are going to occur and affect Raghu and Antara's life vigorously. i am waiting to see how u unleash them one by one in your extraordinary beautiful writing pattern.

Happy Birthday My Riyu 🤗

and wherez the party ????🥳🤗 luv you ...😃

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Ria madam,you did it once again! 👏
Bravo! 👏
I know lots gonna happen in this story 😉
Waiting patiently for upcoming updates ji 😊
Very well written as usual ⭐️
I'm loving the way the story is progressing right now 😊
Hats off for a fabulous update ⭐️
Please continue soon darling 😊
*hugs* 😛

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Rasika9
Phool dene walon kii niyat dekhi jati hain antara naa kiii yee ki woo kaun hain. Whenever life offers you happiness just invites it with your open arms. Cause happiness so rare in this world."

wow riu what beautiful lines...it really touched me...superb...
chalo antu madam ke chehre pe thodisi smile to aaye...aur ussey dekhkar apne yeda bhi smile karne laga...amazing riu
aur sigi to pooch mat yaar...tere hare ek sigi se mujhe pyaar ho jata hain...
loved it...

Thank you di😳

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jaan..rantara..

@jaan..rantara..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Riu..
Really nice..
I have no words..
Raghu be site flower..but anti itna soch kyu rahe hai..ye yedi kabhi nahi sudhre ge..
Dear..tab time nahi tha..ab ache se read kiya..
Happy birthday..
Mishti dahi..
Love u..

Edited by RANTARA.akya - 10 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Ajju15s
Chapter 34
Kabhi dil mein jhak kee dekhon to tum sahi
Bas rote nahin hain, warna gham yahan bhi kam nahin!"beautiful lines dear..😃
Thanks yaar... 😊
Antara's pov was so heart touching..rona aa gaya mujhey..😭
Aap antu pain ko emotions ko itney acchey se kaisey describe kar letey hao..uski pain merey dil may bhi teer ki tarah lagta hai..mehsus hota hai.
Aap rantara ki feelings chahey woh pain ho,khushi ho,pyaar ho ya gussa ho is tarah likhtey ho k readers bhi rantara jab rotey hai to rohtey hai..aur hasstey hai to unkay saath hasstey hai..
nahin yaar.. baat actually yee hain kii i feel so connected to antara's character. in some point i am so much like antara in this story. just like her my familly is world to me.. and if it comes to my loved once i can do anything for them. Just like this, i can feel her emotions that how would she react in diff situation and i put in the story according to that.
😊Love raghu aur mm ka bonding yaar..😛
Me 2 always love them😆
U kw aap k updates may may mm aur raghu k convo k liye wait karti hun..kyun ki jis tarah se un dono k saath may dialogues hotey hai na mujhey bara maza aata hai..😆
Ho sakey to raghu aur mm ka funny convo aur bhi dikhana..😛
Okk i will surely try😳
Raghu sorry kaisey boltey hai uski advise maang raha hai..woh bhi kissey mm se..😆 🤣
Raghu aur mm ka convo was superb..⭐️
Thank you😳
Finally ruku ne idea diya..😊
Mujhey nahi pata tha k jab ek ladka ek ladki ko phool deta hai to iska yeh matlab hota hai..aaj pata chala..😳
Mr.raghu bhi smart hai..ruku se antu ko konsa phool pasand hai unsi info nikal Li..😆
Ab yeh raghu tulip ka phool kaha se laayega yaar..yeh antu kya kya karwati hai merey raghu sey..
Abhi too bechare koo bahut kuch karna hain yaar.😕
To isi baat pe arz kiya hai..
"Wo Bheegta Raha Barish Me Or
May Usey Dekhta Hi Raha.
Us Ke Honton Pe Ruki paani Ki Ik Ik
Boond Meri zindagi bhar Ki pyaas Ban Gai."😳
wonderful👏