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Originally posted by: Ajju15s

Mr.Rohan...aapka humaari jaan lene ka iraada hai kyaa..?😳😆itni hott updateaaplikhogeto jaan nikal jaayegi humaari..😉😆

Originally posted by: ifians

This is so beautifully written... and wonderful to read...

Sensuous, passionate and wonderfully described...

I specially admired the narration style of this little update... for some moment it looked like a piece from some professional author's Novel...

Wonderful and thank you for sharing...

This is for Ranjohan...😊

Dost samjhte ho to dosti nibhate rehna ,

Hume bhi yaad karna , khud bhi yaad aate rahna ,

Meri to khushi doston se hi hai ,

Main khush hu ya nahi ,tum muskrate rahna...😃

Dosti karo to hamesha muskrat ke ,

Kisi ko dhoka na do apna bana ke ,

Kar lo yaad jab tak hum zinda hai ,

Fir na kehna chala gaye dil me yade basa ke...

Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste ,

Anjane mod par kuch log dost ban jate hain ,

Milne ki khushi de ya na de ,

Bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain...

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Rohan that was hot but I'm sorry sanji is still better hehe go team sanji

Originally posted by: Komali14

This is for Ranjohan...😊

<font size="2">Dost samjhte ho to dosti nibhate rehna ,</font>

<font size="2">Hume bhi yaad karna , khud bhi yaad aaterahna ,</font>

<font size="2">Meri to khushi doston se hi hai ,</font>

<font size="2">Main khush hu ya nahi ,tum muskrate rahna...😃</font>

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<font size="2">Dosti karo to hamesha muskrat ke ,</font>

<font size="2">Kisi ko dhoka na do apna bana ke ,</font>

<font size="2">Kar lo yaad jab tak hum zinda hai ,</font>

<font size="2">Fir na kehna chala gaye dil me yade basa ke...</font>

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</font><p><font size="2">Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste ,</font>

Anjane mod par kuch log dost ban jate hain ,

Milne ki khushi de ya na de ,

Bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain...

Originally posted by: Rohan30

Thanks ria ji
Piece from Some professional authors novel? Was this that professionally written?..I loved it!
This was my very first attempt. ..I'm glad you liked it.