'Jeevan Saathi Saath Mein Rahena' ch 20 page 93 - Page 67

Originally posted by: thambu

OMG !!!! Aap ne Abhi tak reciprocate nahi kiya kya sanju jee ? 😃

Main Next chapter pe jaun ? ya Aap ke reciprocate ke baad jaun ?😉

Kept my Fingers Crossed jee 🤗

with regards

thambu

Sorry thambu ji,main busy hogayee thi but not to worry I'll reply soon 😃
You can carry on ji 😃
Regards,
Sanju ⭐️

Hmmm Sanju jee... 😆 Aaj main ne 8 th chapter padah hai jee,

Page 23 mein kuch romance nahi mila sirf daily life routine kitchen chores

a phone call from raghu for shopping... Bas itna hi padhne ko mila

Page 24 mein thoda romance mila jee woh bhi saree shop ke trying room mein... 😉

A kiss on antra's back peet mein and next Lips kissing sucking lower lip
and all jee, bas bahuth thoda hi romance mila jee...

Aap ke critic thambu ko bas itna hi a tiny romance mila, par iss par kya criticisam kar sakte hai... Bas itna tho zaroor kah sakte hain ke utna mazaa nahi mila iss story mein...

bas for the sake of writing update... Aap ne iss ko pura kiya hai...

May be you were suffering with cold and fever at that time you were updated this story just for the update purpose 😆

This is what my true opinion jee 😃 🤗 I have honestly given my feedback sanju jee ... 😳

Anyway lets see what is stored there in 9 th chapter ... keep your finger crossecd jee... 🤗

Originally posted by: thambu

Wow!!!! Sanju jee , Hats off to you jee👏 Chapter 7 padha jee

Aaj tho aap ne mujhe Emotional scences se meri aankhen thoda geeli kardi sanju jee ... kya baath hai

Raghu ka pyaar Antra ke prati badta hi jaa raha hai...Masha Allah Raghu ne Antra ke aansuon ko

dekh liya tha

aur pehchaan gaya tha ke woh aansun Nisha ki tasveeron ki wajah se aaye thhe...

phir usne Antra ko khush dekhne ke liye wo saari Nisha ki tasveerein jalaa dali... iss se ye patah chalta

hai ke Raghu Antra ko kitna chahta hai aur pyaar karta hai...Sanju jee Touchwood
,
Ye scence ko aab ne bahuth hi emotionally narrate kiya hai wow!!!! Isse read karte waqt main bhi thoda

emotional hogaya tha jee, aur meri aankhen bhi thoda geeli ho gayi sanju jee ...

Ab Antra bhi Raghu ko jaan gayi hai ke woh uski Di di se nahi ussi se I mean Antra se hi pyaar karta

hai... Raghu ke feather touch kisses on Antras cheeks se maloom padta hai ke Raghu Antra se

behad pyaar karta hai... 😃

iss chapter mein bhi mujhe koi kami nazar nahi aayi jee... Aap ne critic ko majboor kardiya hai

critisisam na karne se,... wow !!! 😳

Eighth chapter ek do din mein read kar ke apni view bataunga sanju jee... 🤗

Thank you thambu ji 😃
Aap toh emotional Banda nikle 😆
Acchey bacche rohte Nahi 😆
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter,thank you for taking your time out and reading it 😃
Really appreciate it ⭐️
Take care thambu ji and see you around

Originally posted by: thambu

Hmmm Sanju jee...😆 Aaj main ne 8 th chapter padah hai jee,

Page 23 mein kuch romance nahi mila sirf daily life routine kitchen chores

a phone call from raghu for shopping... Bas itna hi padhne ko mila

Page 24 mein thoda romance mila jee woh bhi saree shop ke trying room mein... 😉

A kiss on antra's back peet mein and next Lips kissing sucking lower lip
and all jee, bas bahuth thoda hi romance mila jee...

Aap ke critic thambu ko bas itna hi a tiny romance mila, par iss par kya criticisam kar sakte hai... Bas itna tho zaroor kah sakte hain ke utna mazaa nahi mila iss story mein...

bas for the sake of writing update... Aap ne iss ko pura kiya hai...

May be you were suffering with cold and fever at that time you were updated this story just for the update purpose 😆

This is what my true opinion jee 😃 🤗 I have honestly given my feedback sanju jee ... 😳

Anyway lets see what is stored there in 9 th chapter ... keep your finger crossecd jee... 🤗

Haww...Mujhey cold or fever kuch bhi nai tha 😕
Thambu ji,Raghu aur Antara ko aur bhi kaam hai romance karne Ke alawa 😕
If I write just Romance toh baaki ka story kab likhungi ji? 😕
Story pasand nai aaya yah fir this chapter? 😕
Aur kitna criticize karoge thambu ji? 😭

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Haww...Mujhey cold or fever kuch bhi nai tha 😕
Thambu ji,Raghu aur Antara ko aur bhi kaam hai romance karne Ke alawa 😕
If I write just Romance toh baaki ka story kab likhungi ji? 😕
Story pasand nai aaya yah fir this chapter? 😕
Aur kitna criticize karoge thambu ji? 😭

Aap ne khud likha hai na sanju jee uss chapter mein ke Aap ko cold and fever hai...😆 Check kar ke
dekho Last mein likha hai jee, 😉

Anyway Kis ne kaha ke story pasand nahi aaya ...Hahahaaa , Main tho Chapter ki baat kar raha tha jee

Haan Romance hoga tho criticise nahi karunga 🤣

Btw, Lets see the next chapter, keeping my fingers crossed sanju jee ⭐️ I may refer it today or tomorrow
if I am not busy... Hope for the best... 😃🤗

Originally posted by: thambu

Aap ne khud likha hai na sanju jee uss chapter mein ke Aap ko cold and fever hai...😆 Check kar ke
dekho Last mein likha hai jee, 😉

Anyway Kis ne kaha ke story pasand nahi aaya ...Hahahaaa , Main tho Chapter ki baat kar raha tha jee

Haan Romance hoga tho criticise nahi karunga 🤣

Btw, Lets see the next chapter, keeping my fingers crossed sanju jee ⭐️ I may refer it today or tomorrow
if I am not busy... Hope for the best... 😃🤗

Accha? I forgot 😆
Pasand aaya then continue reading,I'm sure you'll encounter more romance soon,
Gotta go! See u around 😃

Originally posted by: shivi808

[Aisey mat ghooro is comment ko...
I know main kabhi bhi gayab honey kabhi bhi fatak se tapak jati hoon...
Kya Karun meri Zindgi... Haaayeee!!! 😭

Okay to I am really very Sorry Di for posting late lateef comments...
Here it is...

Oye hoyeee!!! Kya update thi didu... 👏
Mazaa hi aa gya... 😳 aur sharmana bhi... 😳
He was talking about MangalSutra air ye Antu bhi na much zyada hi soch leti h...

Di yaar I m really in love with that gajra scene...
It was just perfect...
Both of you I mean BOTH of our RAGHU and ANTARA are just perfect...
Aur the way you express their emotions...
Its like koi bohot hi pyaari se romantic movie chal RI h mere aagey Jo main bina palkein jhapkaaye bss dekhtey hi Jana chahti hoon...

Anyways lets see it Gadhi Nisha ne ab kya bakheda khada kr Diya h.. 😡
Par koi Ni Raghu h na... Sab Sambhal lega... 😃
But di I really want ek awesome Sa band bajaaoing of this Creep Nisha... 🤢

Finally done with this one lambuuu Sa comment... Soye to ni...
Once again di biggie wala sorry for late comment... 😕
HUMKA MAAFI DAEI DO SARKAAR... AAGEY SE GALTI SEY YE MISTAKE KABHI NAHI HOGI...

Finally!!! 🤗 I missed you silly golu 😆
I can handle late lateef comments ji,no problem 😉
Both of us? 😆 Tu bhi huh? 😆
Don't worry,Nisha ki baraat niklegi band Baja Ke Saath hi 😆
Iss baar maafi dedeti Hun Lekin agli baar nai,Bahut intazar karna para mereko 😕
Must say intazar ka phal meetha tha 😉
So thank you for your colourful comment,loved it golu 😃
Love n hugs,
Your Sanju Di 😃

Wow!!! Wow !!! kya baat hai sanju jee 😉

I have read chapter 9 some two days back itself... 😆 But I din't get the time to write my opinion... Yes , this time no critisism sanju jee... kyun ke

I have encountred romance in it jee... my type of romance 🤗

Ragu and Antra danced in pari's birth day party ...while dancing Raghu saw antra's blouse dori was loosenend from the back... so he took her to near by room and asked to tighten her dori...

But Antra's hands could not reach to the dori .. Raghu noticed it and went to tighten the dori... As he saw her naked back his romance aroused...

He caught hold her and planted some wet kisses on her back and took her to the bed and wow!!!! wow!!! he kissed her lips tourcherd her lips romantically and pushed his tongue in side her mouth and tasted every inch of her mouth ... he almost ate her mouth and lips... wow!!! what a sweet and fantastic romance... Mazaa aagaya padhne mein...

I read that kissing part several times sanju jee... Ahaaa Ahaah

mujhe tho meri Girl Friend Sameera yaad aagayi jee 😉 Aur Main tho uss kissing scene par raghu aur antra ka naam nikal kar thambu aur sameera se imagine kar ke mazaa le raha tha...🤣 Masha Allah TouchWood jee...superb fantastic ☺️ dekho I Blushed 😆

keep it up yaar 👍🏼 Best of luck ... I have found a superb writer in you .jee you have writing tallent of describing romance in a very clear way without any ugly thing sanju jee... Hats Off to you and bowing down to welcome your writing skill jee... 😃 🤗

dekho iss baar mujhe koi critisism karne ka moukha nahi mila 😆 Main bas prompt aur genuine feed back karta hun ... 😳 Be Happy and glitter like a star jee ...⭐️⭐️⭐️ ...

I will read your storie's Tenth chapter in a few days and give my prompt feedback sanju jee... tab tak ke liye cross your fingers 🤣

Sanju babes,will you continue this or what?