Never Letting go last chapter updated page 6

Hi guys this is something that came to my mind and I thought to pen it down to increase the forum activity. It might have three chapters only. Let see. Please read and comment. Thank you!
Chapter 1

Antara, this isn't how it ends." He whispered. Tears flowed freely from my eyes. I didn't care how ridiculous I looked, all I wanted was him. I grabbed his hands, holding them tightly...I never wanted to let go. I never wanted him to let go of me. "Why?You can't leave me! D-don't do this. I don't know what to do...I can't do this without you." I sobbed...my whole body shook with my tears and pain. "I'm sorry." He just whispered. "Ra..Raghu...No. Please!. Don't. I begged"I'm sorry." He whispered again, and leaned in to kiss me on the forehead, "I love you, I love you more than anything in the world...And I always will."I shook my head.It wasn't enough. I needed him to stay by my side.I wasn't anything without him. "Why are you l-leaving me? I-is it something I did...?" I choked, my voice barely audible, "I can-I will change! J-just tell me what I did and-""No,Antara." He held my hands to stop them from shaking, "It wasn't you, It-""It wasn't you it's me? I've heard that before..i said.He silenced me with his own tears. "Antara, I don't want to leave you, but I'm a criminal..I'm dangerous. You can't stay with me, you-you and I both know that.I'm a killer and I'm wanted. Said Raghu."Do you think I care? I asked him.""But I do Antara.He whispered, smiling sadly, "I care about you, that's why-that's why I'm leaving."I dont want to put your life in danger."Does this really have to end this way? I asked.""I love you Antara. He whispered.""I-I can go with you, I can follow you where ever you go. I said and stopped talking, because I no longer could. I was drowning in my own tears. "I love you." He said again. He hugged me tightly, so tightly...I could feel his pain, his suffering, his emptiness...I knew he didn't want to leave me. I cried on his shoulder while he cried in my hair. I don't even know how long we stayed like that...could've been seconds... minutes ...hours. I knew that someone had to let go...And it was me...

.It's been 4 years.Evey second, my eyes cried for him, my soul ached for him, my empty arms reached out for him... I knew that crying...trying...and dying was no use. He wasn't coming back, no matter what I did. And of course he kept his promise. Every second...I could feel myself silently fading away...floating peacefully into space...I curled into a ball, knees pulled all the way to my chest. Somehow I knew...I knew that I would see him someday...I could bear this pain if it meant that he would come back...someday...I would see him alive...I would see his face one last time and die happily...Even if it meant waiting forever, I would always wait...I'd be forever waiting if I had to. A thin strip of paper fluttered out of my pocket when I stood up. Crouching down, I picked it up...the writing made me smile, sadly...something I haven't done in years.I'LL NEVER LET YOU GO. I NEVER DID. I NEVER WILL.-Raghu.I closed my eyes, and pressed the piece of paper closely to my chest. "You can't let me go. Not ever..." I knew he wouldn't. I love you Raghu.. forever and always. My eyes moved to our 4 year old son Rahul who was playing happily on my bed. A smiled appeared on my lips as I said. "You never left me Raghu. I took my baby in my arms as he giggled and hugged me tight.

So guyz how was it? Please comment. Few more chapters to go.It will be longer update next time. Stay tuned. Love to all.
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Originally posted by: pampz

loved it ...how much ...i can not tell ...

u hv penned down antara's pain so lively ...in every word the excruciating pain was oozing out flawlessly ...it was something that wrenched my heart very much ...the baby in her arms ...Raghu's love feel and touch all reminded the baby ...it was beautifully written Sanji ...

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hv no words further to express my feeling ...i was carried away with ur story feeling the same pain n grief n longing ... wonderful ...hatts off to you👏

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Thanks pampz..your comments leaves me speechless. Will continue soon.

Chapter 2 updated. Read and let me know. I have put my time..energy and effort in all of my stories. So please dont forget to hit the like button and comment.

Antara sat with her four year old in her arms. Singing lullabies she was putting him to sleep. "Aur gaao na momma peash. Baby rahul said to his momma. Antara kissed his chubby cheeks and started singing...
The itsy-bitsy spider Climbed up the water spout.
Down came the rainAnd washed the spider out.
Out came the Sun and dried up all the rain.
And the itsy-bitsy spider Climbed up the spout again.

Rahul finally closed his tired eyelids. Antara caressed his head lovingly and tucked him in. Antara leaned back on the headboard and thought about her life after Raghu left. Her momma papa disowned her because she was in love with a criminal and was pregnant with his child. Antara was pregnant when Raghu left but she never told him. She was a school teacher with good pay. She has her own place and a good nanny for Rahul. Rahul was her everything...her entire world was him and him alone. Antara glanced at her sleeping baby. He looked exactly like Raghu. Junior Raghu. It was hard for Antara to survive when Raghu left but because of her baby she managed to survive. She was missing Raghu badly. She was empty and incomplete without him. Most of her nights are spent just staring at the ceiling. Sleepless nights and tears are a part of her life. She talks to Raghu's pictures and reads the note that he gave her. Rahul knows his papa by his pictures. Even he talks to his pictures and complains. Antara still feels deep down her heart that he's ok and they'll meet one day. Thinking about her life Antara too closed her eyelids.

Raghu's life after leaving Antara...
Raghu worked for the underworld. Even though he didn't like it but he didn't have any choice. He couldn't get Antara out of his mind. He never forgot her even for a minute. He was worried for her but he couldn't do anything. .his hands were tied. Time was passing by. Raghu was surviving just by looking at her pictures on his phone. He was dying every day without her. One day Raghu got so tired of his life that he surrendered to the police. He was behind bars for four years. Now that he was released from the prison. .the terrorists and the underworld were after him. They had only one thing in mind was to finish him. Raghu was on the run for his life..he wasn't running from the law..he was running from the group that he worked for. He had money..big money in his bank account but what's the use when his life was in danger..and any time you could be shot dead. He was looking for a place to rent in outskirts of Mumbai city. He was going through the rental sections in the newspaper paper when his eyes caught a bedroom suit for rent . He quickly picked up his cell phone and dialled the number.

At Antara's place. .

Aai dekho phone bajh raha hai..uthana please! Antara said from her bedroom. She was getting ready for school. Rahul was giving her a hard time this morning. "Momma peesh mat jaao na cool (school) Rahul wanted her momma to stay with him. "Acchey bacchey zid nai kartey Rahul. .I'll be back in the afternoon than we can go to the park..theek hai? Antara finally convinced Rahul. Aaii who was like a family member to Antara. .entered her bedroom. "Kiska phone thaa aaii? Asked Antara. "Koi RN naam ka ladka thaa aur woh rental ke baarey me enquiry kar raha tha. Aaii said. "Aaii merey paas time nai hai aapko patah hai na...toh ye sab aap sambhaal lena.Antara said. "He's coming today beta. Aaii said. "Theek hai aaii you deal with him. Antara said while grabbing her bag and books. Antara kissed Rahul goodbye. "Aaii ko tangh mat karna ok..be a good boy momma aapkey liye chocolates laayengi ok? Antara said while hugging her baby." I love you momma! Rahul hugged her tight and kissed her cheeks. "Momma loves you too baby. Antara said while ruffling his hair and left.

Raghu arrived at Antara's place. He never knew that this was the place his family lived. Door bell sounded and Rahul ran to open it. "Rahul baba..may dekhti hu. Aai said. "No aap baytho may dekhunga. Rahul said. Not listening to aai Rahul opened the door. Father and son saw each other for the very first time. Rahul couldn't recognize his papa because his face was full of stubble. "I'm Rahul aul aap? Rahul asked. "Hi Rahul..may RN ..aapkey mummy papa hai kiya? Raghu asked. Rahul was about to say something aaii intervened. Aaii showed Raghu around the house. He liked it very much. It was like a guest house..separate from the main house and it was situated at the back of the main house in which Antara and Rahul lived. Raghu decided to take it. Rahul was very happy that finally he has someone to play with. Rahul loved Raghu alot. "Aap mujhsey dosti kalo gay? Rahul asked Raghu while he was moving his stuffs in the guest house." Zaroor karunga.Raghu said while extending his hand for a hand shake. Rahul happily shook his hands. Even Raghu was loving this kid a lot. "May aapko Dost bulaunga. Rahul said. Raghu gave him a thumps up. Raghu moved in that day. Rahul wasn't leaving him. Aaii had to take him away forcefully. Antara came home that evening. Rahul had so much to tell her about Raghu. "Momma he's my friend. Rahul said excitedly. "Aap bhi ussey millo na. Rahul insisted. Antara took Rahul in her arms and kissed his chubby cheeks. "May baad me millungi baby..first I'll pull your cheeks and tickle you..Antara said while tickling Rahul on his tummy. Rahul giggled and tickled his momma too! "Accha aapney apney dost ka naam nai bataya. Antara said to rahul. "Melay dost ka naam RN hai. Rahul said proudly. "Ye kaysa naam? Antara asked. "Layne do momma aap nai samjhogi. Rahul said and shook his head. Antara chased him around the room. "Naughty boy! "Momma ko pareshaan karna aapko accha lagta hai na? Antara chased her baby around the room. Rahul giggled and hid under the bed. "Theek hai fir you stay home I'm going to the park. Antara said. "No!! "I'm coming too!! Rahul said while coming out from under the bed. Antara caught him. She tickled him hard this time. "Sholly momma! Rahul said while laughing hard. "Meri jaan ho tum! Antara said. "Aap bhi meli jaan ho. Rahul said while hugging her momma tight. Antara took her baby in her arm's and told him about her day in school. Rahul listened carefully. Later that evening Rahul went to play in the park with Antara and aaii. Tired and exhausted the trio came home. Antara was removing clothes from the clothes line when rahul ran to the guest house to meet his dost. "Rahul it's late you cant go there! Antara shouted. But rahul was gone. The door was open so Rahul just barged in. "Hi dost! Rahul said to Raghu who was doing something in the kitchen. "Hey buddy! "What's up? Raghu said while picking him up. "Boy you are heavy! Raghu said. Rahul giggled. "Meli momma bhi yahi kayti hai. Rahul said. Raghu smiled." Meli momma bahut pyaali hai..aap unsey milogey na toh aapko bhi unsey pyaal hojaayega. Rahul said. Raghu's eyes widened. He didn't know what to say. "Chalo na dost..meli momma bahaar hai. Rahul insisted. Rahul took his hand and came out. "Meri baath sun champ..I'll meet your momma later ok..she's busy. Raghu said while feeling a little awkward. "No..she's not busy! Rahul said while pulling him towards his momma. Antara was rushing as the weather was changing. Her arms were covered with clothes upto her chest."momma dekho ye mera dost hai! Rahul said as they both stood in front of Antara. Antara's heart thuded as she slowly lowered her hands full of clothes. Thunder rolled as aaii came and took Rahul inside.Antara's eyes widened when she found Raghu standing in front of her eyes. Antara saw him after four years. Even Raghu was shocked. They just looked at each as the rain drops fell. Antara's tears rolled down her cheeks..."Raghu!! Antara whispered as she sobbed. Raghu's tears streamed down as soon as he heard his name from her mouth. He knew he wasn't dreaming. .this wasn't a dream. .this was real! They were standing face to face. "Antara!! He whispered. Antara wanted to run in his embrace. .then she remembered he was dangerous. He left her because he thought she wasn't safe with him...he was wanted! Suddenly Antara felt fear..fear for her baby..."I cant lose my baby! Antara thought. Raghu was reading her expressions. Before Raghu could say anything Antara ran from there. Raghu just stood there frozen. Antara ran to her bedroom and sat on her bed with a thud.. .rahul came running to her. "Kaysa laga mela dost momma? Antara took him in his arms. "Rahul..aaj ke baad you wont meet him! Antara said. "Lekin kiyu momma? "He's my flend! Rahul said sadly. "May ney kay diya na ..nai milogey toh nai milogey. On the other side in the guest house Raghu was pacing the room. "Why did antara run from me?" Rahul..Rahul kiska baccha hai? Kiya Antara ne shaadi karli? "Uss ka pati kaha hai? Raghu was bombarding himself with questions. "May ye sab kaysey patah lagao? Raghu thought. He couldn't sleep that night and neither did Antara. She browsed through his pictures as Raghu did the same. Antara was happy to see him safe and alive but he must be still wanted. Antara thought. "Does he still work for the underworld? "Is he still a killer and dangerous? "If he is ..then are we safe around him?"is my baby safe around him? Antara thought. "We have to keep our distance. Antara thought.

Precap:Raghu asks Rahul who his papa is. Rahul shows him his papa's pictures. And the pictures were Raghu's. Raghu asks Antara. .she denies. "Rahul's papa is in overseas. Antara tells Raghu. Stay tuned to find out how little Rahul plays cupid for his parents. Cheers!

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