~//A Monsoon Night's Dream\\~ (Rantara OS)(last chapter @pg12) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
OMGGG I just died and came back to lfie after reading this update
seriously i never thought this will happen. i am soo happy after reading this it was like a surprise out of the blue box
i loveddd it sooo much
the ending was really beautiful i was just sitting there sobbing with happiness
LOVEDDD ITTT.
Finally i found my comment uff it took a lot of time
Seriously i have no idea what to say to you for this amazing story
Its raining here as well lol so its the perfect time to read this story and imagine
i hate rain because its soo wet🤢 but reading this sory while its raining is one of the most amazing feelings ever yaar
you have put in a lot of emotion in this and this update was just WOW
The way antu let out all her frustration was out of the blue i never thought she would do that lol
Kiss in the rain was the most beautiful and significant part of this story
After it rains the sun comes out and everyhting is nice and clean and for rantara is the same their life has a new beginning and everything is sorted nd their path to the future is clean
Did i ever tell you that i love the name of this OS, it shows a lot feeling which cannot be expressed
You always amaze me with ur writing funny, sad thriller romantic and most of all for me its always dreamy i just get drowned in each and every word
i was listening to mera mahi tu while reading and it gave a lot of feelings to this story i nearly felt like crying while reading
Hats off to you for writing such an amazing OS
it is my favorite now, i will read it on rainy days like today
u gave 2 updates yoo m happy atleast i read something amazing after long😲
DONT YOU DARE CALL IT CRAP😔 i will do ur red red murder 😔
You really have to write more
i never wanted this story to end or maby have a few more parts but then it would be dragged and lose its essence so i will wait until u write something just like this
The confession was completely unexpected from my side as seeing the title DREAM i thought they would just go their own ways but the confession wow thank god my nightmares dont come true
i hope my comment didnt make you fall asleep half way thru, and sowie if its short yaar i seriously cant find any words to praise this beautiful unique divine story,
i remembered the rain sequence while reading the updates in this story, hayee how i miss ddej with rantara uff those days
U have talent to write such stories
Ur a born writer yaar hats of to u
apke charan kaha hai paroo i really want ur blessings to get somewhere 2 miles near ur writing talent and improve
i cant wait for more stories from u
ur stories bring rantara alive yaar i love you for writing such a great story
Continue writing like this and one day u will reach great heights
Hope this was long enough for u paroo😳
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
wow toh finally antu told raghu..
bout her bday n her fathers death..
dat ws reakky sad...
n yes she said rhank u to raghu..
woww dat ws surprise na...
so dey hv started knwing each other grt..
loved d update in monsoon ...
tkcr n thanjs fr updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
First of all I m sorry for the late reply...
Thus days I m very busy...
But superb updet yaar...
You wrote everything was superb...
I love your writing and you know that...


Tum to apne ho fhir ye takalluf kaisa,
Logon to gairon se bhi kar dete hai baaten dill ki...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
ek tum ho ria aur ek ye riddzy hai...šŸ˜†.ek ki update dhasu to dusre ki shayri.😳..ekdin tum dono maar hi daloge mujhe šŸ¤¢šŸ˜†dekh rhe ho kya raghu?tumahri suchi ka kya haal bna rakha hai?šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

ek tum ho ria aur ek ye riddzy hai...šŸ˜†.ek ki update dhasu to dusre ki shayri.😳..ekdin tum dono maar hi daloge mujhe šŸ¤¢šŸ˜†dekh rhe ho kya raghu?tumahri suchi ka kya haal bna rakha hai?šŸ˜†

suchi tuu too faint hoo gayii thi... itni jaldi wapas kaise aa agyi..šŸ˜†
yaar ridzy ki sayari too jaan lewa hote hain...🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ifians

suchi tuu too faint hoo gayii thi... itni jaldi wapas kaise aa agyi..šŸ˜†
yaar ridzy ki sayari too jaan lewa hote hain...🤢


haan shayri read kiya😳... faint hogayi🤢...fir comment kiya😃...aur ab firse faint ho gayi šŸ¤¢šŸ˜†
janlewa logon se ghiri huyi hun mainšŸ˜†
*faint*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Tsuchi


haan shayri read kiya😳... faint hogayi🤢...fir comment kiya😃...aur ab firse faint ho gayi šŸ¤¢šŸ˜†
janlewa logon se ghiri huyi hun mainšŸ˜†
*faint*

nahin suchi tum faint mat hoo... tum faint hoo gayii to kaun fun post banayega... kaun forum koo active rakheega... jaldi wapas aa jao...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ifians

nahin suchi tum faint mat hoo... tum faint hoo gayii to kaun fun post banayega... kaun forum koo active rakheega... jaldi wapas aa jao...šŸ˜†


ab tum aisa update dogi to faint to hona padega na...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Aww .
Thank you very much .
Loved it .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Riya, Firstly
Girl , im so sorry !! I havent been commenting much on this OS due to my inactiveness.
But what a masterpiece has been written!!!!
This is one of my favorite Os..
Beautiful !! Beautiful !! Beautiful !!
Antara's feelings were so brilliantly expressed..
Her shock when she sees her photos , the earring , hearing her name and then the kiss !!
God !! You put it together so beautifully !!
I still have goosebumps !!
Raghu finally opened up and told her what he felt..
I felt like crying when he is like "Tere liye toh gunde insaan nahi hote".. Coz it just showed that he was away from Antara only because of her thinking..
Riyu, I cant tell you how much Im proud of you..
This is beautiful !!
I dont know how many times Im gonna call this OS Beautiful !!
Gawsh...!!! It was Beautiful !!!
Even I personally love the rain and this OS just made me ... speechless.
I love you sooo...
much for this OS !!
-Prerna

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